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| "What Matters the Most" Reviews/Comments [ 480 ] | | Pages (32): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Title: Review Responses
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 20:55 EST
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Heheh, you know, I think that you like to write responses to reviewers more than fanfiction. ROFLMAO. I just had to do that. Couldn't help it. Heheh, hahaha...*giggle* Okay, I'm just poking fun. ^_^ Snow
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 20:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I didn't know that the fic was done! Loved the way that you had Sesshoumaru calming Inuyasha. It was too sweet. With 74 chapters, I'm wondering what all you would have planned for a sequel. The only thing that we're really missing is Tsukiko and a resolution with the dad's death. Hm...*picks your brain* ^_^ Good Luck on the sequel! Snow
| Reviewed By: gen50-inlj On: January 24, 2007 07:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it would have been a 10, but all that angst had my teeth somewhat locked.... whilst i can stand angst, you left it with a lot of angst still.... well, at least naraku is dead, but it took a long time, and the rest of your subplots didnt develop the way you wanted it.... but thank you for writing it, really angsty.... rape, rape, and more rape. i couldnt reread it as much as i want to (didnt want to grit my teeth too much) and had to skip long portions.... i do have a question. what did the death of the father accomplish? i wasnt quite sure.... i had the feeling that there were things you still wanted to say, but suddenly wasnt inclined... i could be very wrong. at any rate. thank you i suppose it could be in the sequel....
| Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 11:06 EST
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Where's my sequal? I'm trying to be patient, but it isn't working..... pweese!
| Reviewed By: coldTenshieyes [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 03:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very interesting... 'ending'. Hmm... Eating him? How repulsive... Rather disgusting, but interesting none-the-less. When I first read that Inuyasha was clawing at Naraku's corpse, I thought he had found something like the 'key' or something to find his Pup, Tsukiko or something. I don't know, it was what I first thought, and than it said he was EATING him. Well...... I think I might of missed something, because Sesshomaru was knocked out... Oops. hehe. And I lurv how Sesshy was all, concerned about everything and anything (through out the whole fanfiction) to do with protecting and/or loving his family. It gives you a knew view, and yet the same view with Sesshy. I was also somewhat surprised that Sesshy would actually go behind Inuyasha like that even if it were for the best. I mean Sessh knew that Inuyasha had been raped repeatedly and it's a rather... strange position he chose, even though he is an inu youkai and submission and all that good stuff. OHHHH well... YOU NEVER TOLD US HOW AND/OR WHERE TSUKIKO IS!! What tis be wrong with you??? Sequel or not!! You just want us coming back for more don't you lol!! Even though I would come back anyways.... even though I don't show up as much as I use to, to review. Besides... .those who would not come back are lame and annoying and don't deserve to be reading you fanfiction anyways!! lol... what a rant. I also just now noticed, this is one of the longest fanfictions (chapter wise) that I have ever read. And I'm glad I sat my lazy butt down and did so. As for the Name of your sequel, you're asking the wrong fan. I'm not too good with naming fanfictions, except maybe my 2nd fanfiction, but that's a personal opinion. Hopefully you'll get a good name for your sequel because all of your readers (discluding me) are reaaaaaaally creative. PLEASSSSSSSSSSSE BRING INUPAPA BACK!! YOU ARE SO EVIL YOU HAVE REDUCED ME TO BEGGING INSTEAD OF KILLING OFF YOUR MUSES!!! Evilllly!! Evil!! Yes, I believe the cops would be rather.... disturbed greatly or they would give up on the case immediatly! Lol, we wouldn't lurv Inu soooo much if he didn't go all... insanly insane when he transformed, besides it shows either: how dark and evil Inuyasha really is or that InuPapa was an incredible youkai and that making her get pregnaunt/mating with a mortal wasn't one of his better ideas. Of course whatever works!! And I thoroughly agree with you that spice is NOT good on ice cream what so ever!! But fanfictions, very, very goooood!! Lol, I SUPPOSE I see your way of seeing it, but what will you have Izayoi do? Scream and cry, or take it into stroll? Because if she looses her life mate, she'll end up dying, and than Inuyasha will be all the more depressed, unlike in Someone To Hear You Scream- and Sequels. Lol, Oh well, I'm sure you'll figure something out, but if you don't revive InuPapa, I'll just have to kill a couple muses to let me anger out. Even though I should have thought of this at the begining of this review... I lllllllurv the last sentance of this fanfiction!! It's awesome!! And rather sweet too, in my own little strange 14 year old view!! lol! Hmmmm.... I really can't wait until the sequel, I'm really excited!! I mean after all this is my favorite fanfiction, I have ever forever ever read!! It could totally surpase ANYBODY'S fanfiction, Angst or not!! Oh and before I close, LURV THE ANGST!! Well, This is OFFICIALLY my longest Review I have ever written, and it's all just a humongous rant about anything that everything that has to do with something! L8RZ!! UNTIL THE SEQUEL!!! (^O^)/~~~~~
| Title: Fabulous!
Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 05:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, finally the review page doesn't hate me! Neways, I know I'm late with the review cause it's finished, but I just wanted to say how much i've enjoyed your fic (along with alot of your others too - Scars and the two fics before that amoung them). you're a really talented author, and I cant wait for you to post a sequel ^_^ Oh, and thanx for emailing the chapters to me BTW. Shigure-san x
| Reviewed By: Nahaujaret [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 02:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the ending, but there are a few things I don't understand. How did Sesshoumaru get his arm back? Also, are they going to find Tsukiko? Maybe you'll put that in the sequel, but somehow it seemed to lack a true ending it guess. You know the whole think where everybody goes home and bury their dead. But hey, you're the writer and I gotta let you do what you do. I can't wait to read the sequel. Thanks so much for sharing.
| Title: F****N' AMAZING!!
Reviewed By: ekf501 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 14:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If the numbers would let it be then your rating would have been a friggin' 10 000 000 000 000 000 000 000 000!!!!! this story was AMAZING!!!!! YOU AMAZING WRITER YOU!!!!!!! Where do you get your ideas from? This story was Extremely well written and Extremely well done and Extremely LONG but I'm glad it was!!!{personally I wanted it to continue!} I'm so thankful to you to give me/us this amazing piece of literature to enjoy for the past week or two! I will gladly read it again when I have the chance! And also...I am sooooo glad you titled the 74 chapters. I skipped afew chapters at the beginning because they just described and I wanted the story to move...so I looked for a good chapter title and tryed that chapter instead! this is the second time I read this story and I thoroughly enjoyed it both times!!!!THANK YOU!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Sasuke's_master [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 16:02 EST
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well yes that somewhat does answer me question but oh well i just don't see the reason why.
| Title: nooo
Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 16:15 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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T_T thats not the end!!! it cant be!!!!!!*throws sharp stuff at you*
| Reviewed By: AyaSnake [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 17:54 EST
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awe, good ending. but uhh...what about the baby? or is that resolved in the next one?
| Reviewed By: Tai-san On: November 26, 2006 21:01 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FOR THE LOVE OF CHIBI. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! Ok i'm better now. though i must say i'm fighting insane sadness that the story is over and insane joy that there is a sequal coming. needless to say that last chapter is kickass extreme. I love'd it so much. the whole gut eating thing was a little gross but the rest was really awesome.Thanks so much for posting your work. I love all the stuff you write and i can't wait to read the sequal. best wishes and good waves until we meet again.
| Reviewed By: inutaiyoukai25 On: November 26, 2006 15:48 EST
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um.... what about the baby?
| Reviewed By: inutaiyoukai25 On: November 26, 2006 15:47 EST
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um.... what about the baby?
| Reviewed By: -Michelle- On: November 26, 2006 12:49 EST
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"~Owari~ ~*~ " What does that mean? The only Owari I can think of is Oda Nobunaga's original domain, Owari province. I just don't get how that would fit in with the rest, I feel like I'm missing something here.
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