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| "What Matters the Most" Reviews/Comments [ 480 ] | | Pages (32): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: golden_kitsune (too lazy to sign into her account) On: July 31, 2006 16:34 EDT
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Alas, I have only reviewed now...I was in Mexico, doing some emergency ostrich work. I hoped you would've updated for my return and you did! *purrs then wails*
| Reviewed By: Fluffymiyster [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 11:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I don't really know what to say this time. Sesshomaru and Inutaisho of course already know that Naraku knows that there there, but just charging in would be reckless. Quite frankly, I've always wondered why Naraku found toying with Inuyasha more fun than fighting Sesshomaru, but that was just a random thought. Great chapter, though very emotional (which is a good thing, cause is means I like the story! But of course or else I'd have not kept reading it!)
| Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 22:02 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great passage. Truly a pleasure to read! I feel so bad for InuYasha, I hope Sesshoumaru finds him soon. Naraku really needs his ass handed to him on a platter!!!!! I'm sorry I missed the last chapter I went into labor before it posted and had to read the both of them today. My twins Takana and Thomas make 5 and 6! I DO need to thank you for the updates your stories are a JOY to read! As always thanks for the update. Your faithful fan Nikkie23534!~B reading U!
| Reviewed By: coldTenshieyes [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 00:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'M SOOOOOOOOOOO SORRY FOR NOT REVIEWING LAST CHAPTER!!! I haven't been on the computer since your last update (two chapters ago) and just barely read them today!! Oi!! So sorry lol. Sesshomaru was soooooooooooo KOOL in the last chapter, I can't help it, I'm a major Sessie fan! Lol! InuPapa couldn't keep up lmao! But with this chapter... whimper whimper... POOR INU!!! Sure I lurv the angst, but hell, Inu's crazy lol. But who ever said that's no fun? With my last review, I think you did confuzzle my question even more lmao! But, In an odd sort of way, you make sense! Which is kind of a help on my strange and psychotic "other side". (But of course we have to lurv Sessie as he is!) As for your opinion on Naraku, I agree, but I still LURV his voice....... He talks for Ginta and Myouga THAT'S a shocker. ... such an evil sexy voice too... lmao, I need help... but I think Inu needs it more! heheheehehe! Well, I'm finally glad I read your fanfiction, and I can't wait for your next update! Keep writing... This is the LOOOOOOOOONGEST review, I have evvvvvvvvvvver done! It's.... amazing lol! Great fanfiction, and lurv the angst (as usual)! L8RZ! (^o^)/~
| Reviewed By: ____insert user here [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 05:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-ponders- NRGHH! You're so evil! -thrusts hands in air- Why?! You would think I would be used to the torture by now, but nope. hee hee... Well thank you very much. I am greatly honored -is attempting to pull a Sesshomaru... struggles... not... making it...- that you think I'm funny while in that half-crazed state. Hmm... well, I would be in that state right now, except, I'm in Utah right now (I normally don't live in Utah... that is why it is weird. O_O), and I'm all depressed because it is seriously a hick state, and I thought Illinois (where I spend most of my life; it sucks there) was bad enough, but NOOO! I have to witness first-hand what lies out there in the "Great American Southwest"-the parental units. It's sooo hot... I'm camping... I smell like campfire... -shivers- urngh... hm. I wonder whether the Inuyasha-tachi smell like this all the time? You know, cuz they're always hanging out with fire and ramen and milky way stars and stuff like that...? Well I'm just rambling on now. Regarding science; well, yearsh... harsh comments from two months ago are ringing in my head, concerning male lactance... -flares nostrils-... yes... Well of course you wouldn't make it so easy to beat kumohanyou, you know, the one that's behind door #1? WELL I always pick door #2.. so I wouldn't get spider! YAY! -looks around suspiciously- Nope.... just got out of psych ward yesterday! I'm a free woman! Yeah... well Utah is like AKLJSDN. They have specific laws about what you can and can't wear in restaurants. They aggresively punish you if you don't wear shoes and shirts into restaurants, for example. This law was made because the hicks were giving them a really hard time about it... goin' everywear without shoes and shirts on. Oh my, glad I came here after the law was made... O.o Wouldn't you be insulted if I called you an octopus? HEY! YOU ARE AN OCTOPUS! Are you insulted? Huh? Well, that's what I thought. Shame on you. =P I used to be able to say that 'the potato is watching you' in Japanese, but all I remember is "potato (oimu)" and 'watching' (miteiru). Well, lard. My brain can only hold so much sixth grade information. (Wow... I can't believe I still remember that from sixth grade... hmm... my memory must be screwed up if I remember stuff from sixth grade orchestra, and not stuff from like maths classes...) Well, I'm seriously on a roll here and I could stay up discussing the quadratic formula and trigonometry with you all night (although it so far is a one-sided conversation), but it is three in the morning and I smell like burning wood... So, CONTINUE STORY or else, um... rawr! (warning: empty threat) Can't wait for next fix! ~iuh
| Reviewed By: Skullz On: July 25, 2006 20:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yea sorry i reviewed in a while i haven't thought about it. Agh don't hate me. Ok what if i bowed to you and kissed your hand. This story is made of pure awsomeness. May i have some of your awsomeness. Please and thank you. I still haven't writen anythig i need to get my MM password thingy back. If you would like to be a co-conspirator in association with my next fic e-mail me: ariespentacle@yahoo.com
| Reviewed By: skullz On: July 25, 2006 20:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude i love how sadistic Naraku is. Very sexy. Anyway keep up with the up dates i wanna know what happens next. And did Naraku plan on giving Inuyasha back? I didn't know that.
| Reviewed By: skullz On: July 25, 2006 20:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude i love how sadistic Naraku is. Very sexy. Anyway keep up with the up dates i wanna know what happens next. And did Naraku plan on giving Inuyasha back? I didn't know that.
| Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: July 25, 2006 00:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm getting two chapters in this review, but I'll mainly focus on this last chapter. It is good that Sess and Inupapa are finally coming to get Inu away from Naraku. I like that you added in the fact that Sess left without Inupapa initially - it shows his panic and need to be reunited with his mate. I also liked that you mentioned more than once that Inupapa knew he had to let Sess or Inu have the final kill for their psychological sakes. And speaking of all things psych - boy have you done a number on poor Inu…or should I say that Naraku and that damn collar have done a number. I fear that when Sess and Inupapa do finally find him he will either not believe that they are real or he will be unable to escape. He has already had one hallucination in which Sess has rejected him - it wouldn't be a far cry for him to start to believe that that the only thing 'real' is Naraku and his cruelty. Poor little Inu - poor broken pup. His mind is going to shatter before long. His inability to distinguish between fantasy and reality is only the beginning. In his mind, everything and everyone has betrayed him - his father and mate have left him with this cruel monster, his children have left him, and even his body has forced him to submit. Sure, none of this is really anyone's fault but Naraku, but if things stay the way that they are the only constant will be Naraku. Hello Stockholm syndrome! :^P And where has Naraku taken Inu's baby girl? Has he found a wet-nurse for her? Oh dear! Even if it does keep me on the edge of my proverbial seat as I wait to see what horrible thing Naraku is capable of next and when Inu will be rescued; thanks for writing for us! Caitriona
| Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 21:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter as always please update soon.
| Title: Chapter 65
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 19:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffle* Poor Inuyasha. He's so beaten, abused, and broken. And, oh yes, Naraku definitely has to die...a very very painful death. Where is Tsukiko? I hope that she is safe. What happened to Inuyasha's vision? Maybe I missed something. I'll just bet you have more torture for Inu lined up. I've already started digging that hole just because you keep hurting my little hanyou. *sniffle* So, looking forward to your next chapter. But, I'll bet it doesn't even get to the ass kicking part. Humph! Great chappie! I'm going to go read it again just to make sure that I didn't miss anything. Snow
| Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 18:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
>_< grr! nooooo!!! >_< must not end!!!*cries* *Becomes one of your rabid fanfiction fans and runs around the room mad with need for more chapters to read* That was sooo sadd.... i feel like crying... poor inu baby
| Title: hiya!
Reviewed By: Trysted/Punishment of the Inu On: July 23, 2006 18:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are making me want to hurt Naraku. Thats bad, really, really, really, bad. Wow, you know... this makes me want to write something really disturbed. Like one of my gender-benders... LOL. I hope you give it to him. Poor Inuyasha, he's in so much pain. Sooner or later... he's going to break. Then there's going to be trouble. LOL. Thanks Avarwen. You made my day. Tryst
| Title: Chapter 64
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 16:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't remember when I last reviewed, but you are really torturing my Inu to much, you bitch! LOL Damn Naraku to hell. Finally, son and father are off to rescue Sesshoumaru's mate. Good idea to bring Kagura into the mix. Hm, pretty suspicious that the barrier came down. I wonder if Naraku can't keep it up when he's raping Inuyasha. I can't believe that you left it off there. I want to see father and son kick Naraku's ass! Oh yeah, I've been waiting for this for a long time. How will Inu react when he sees Sesshoumaru. They've already been through this before. Will Inu trust Sesshoumaru to accept him? He should since he came to the rescue. You had better not kill anyone off. There's plenty of room in my back yard for a six foot deep hole. hehe. Just kidding. Water table might be to close to the surface. *smirk* I'm excited to see the next chapter! Snow
| Title: Hello
Reviewed By: lare On: July 18, 2006 13:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter again! Still I'm happy that Naraku hasn't marked Inuyasha. I can't anything more than that Sesshomaru is soo sweet that he went after Inuyasha.
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