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| "What Matters the Most" Reviews/Comments [ 480 ] | | Pages (32): [ « ‹ 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 › » ] | Reviewed By: Myli On: May 03, 2006 10:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are a great writer and I love this piece of work. Hope to read more from you on this story! >>M
| Reviewed By: Myli On: May 03, 2006 10:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are a great writer and I love this piece of work. Hope to read more from you on this story! >>M
| Reviewed By: Myli On: May 03, 2006 10:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are a great writer and I love this piece of work. Hope to read more from you on this story! >>M
| Title: Ooooh, a cliffie!
Reviewed By: maelia8 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 00:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please save us soon from this delectible cliffie! I'm sure that I know who it is, but I really want to see Sesshy kick his butt and tear out his innards with poison claws. I am glad to learn that there are other people out there suffering from testing, and that I am not the only one who sometimes only gets about a quarter of an hour online each day (unless I want to stay up until 1 am, which I am sometimes up to doing and sometimes not). This week has been filled with standardized tests for me, so I feel for you. In regards to your last response - your sister doesn't like fanfiction? Does that mean no anime, manga, InuYasha, et cetera? Or is she one of those purists who doesn't want to read anything that is not part of the official story? Some of my friends are like that - they will only read published information, or some will only read the manga, no magazines, and watch no anime, because they believe that it spoils the story. Me, I find it interesting to read all of the alternatives that people can come up with - it is like watching a movie with twenty different endings, or reading one of those books where you choose your own ending. But regarding the chapter - I loved how it began so fluffy and sweet, like a return to love, and then became an intense nightmare - only in the last few seconds. I was rather shocked that danger came to the happy couple so soon - maybe they are fated to disaster and hardship forever (sniff). Sesshy really is a horny bastard, isn't he? Is it because he is the alpha? He just seems as though he could spend all day licking InuYasha's ears . . . and doing other things. Oh, by the way, I noticed that you used the word 'centre'. Are you British, or do you just like to spell it that way? Just curious, you don' t have to answer if you prefer to remain mysterious. Another random, story-related question: why does the little girl have a moon on her forehead? A genetic trait pulled down from her grandfather, Inutaisho? Or does she have some of Sesshomaru's genetic material? Could she even be from genetic material of Sesshy and Naraku, with InuYasha only as a carrying vessel (gasp)? Oh. Wait. The ears. I forgot. She's Inu's daughter, all right. But why the ears?? Anyway, ta-ta for now, I have a zillion pounds of review questions to cover. Please save us from the cliffie extraordinare!
| Title: Grrrrr. Darn Naraku....
Reviewed By: Tryst/Punishment of the Inu On: May 02, 2006 21:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He's baaaaccck. Naraku, is bad. But that just makes me want to put him on a stick and feed him to the Inu's from two of my own fics. LOL. I'm sure you can figure out which ones. To top it off, I'm now very worried for my two favorite InuYasha characers. Hmmmm. I have to wonder, is Tsukiko going to cause an issue? (Hope I got the name right.) The other two were set down... That could also mean trouble. LOL. Update soon. Tryst.
| Reviewed By: love it On: May 02, 2006 21:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it. update really soon!!
| Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 20:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter please update soon.
| Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 19:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Tehe, I hope there is a lemon or something coming up ^_^ seems hot. Nice chapter though. Haha, I would do the same thing if I were IY ^_^ Tehehe horny lil demons :D I'd be scared worse than ever or more than I already am should I see such thing of my parents going at it.......... *shudders*
| Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 19:13 EDT
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Ah evil nasty man! *Points, trembling* Whhy? Everything was going so well! And Inuyasha was teaching his pups about being molested...it was the epitaph of a perfect family!
| Title: P
Reviewed By: kitsunesan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 16:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEEEEEEEEEZA UPDATE!!! ive been checking every day for n update
| Title: Names
Reviewed By: FXL-to lazy to log in [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 12:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter!!! Tsukiko is the cutest name out of all of them and I am so happy that Sesshomaru named her!! And the moon moving with the real moon is so cool I loved the idea so much!! So the moon most have something to do with Sesshomaru Right??? And the way her eyes change colors sometimes Tsukiko is so cute I wish someone would draw her!! She is my fav OC that they had out of all the stories I have read! If I could draw I would draw her but since I can't draw I might make her look like an alien or something of the sorts.I love the other children names but something about that little girl gets to me... So this chapter EXCELLENT and I LOVED IT and I can't wait for more!!! Oh yeah I am such a crybaby I was crying so much when Sesshy names her it was so cute! So with that I'l take my leave and say bye bye until next time!!!!
| Title: Tsukiko!
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 21:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did it! I didn't plan on her belonging to Naraku, but the moon is so freakin' cool. Tsukiko! Oh yeah. I am still intrigued by the silver flashes in her eyes. *still grinning and happy dancing* That was so sweet that Sesshoumaru understood and did what needed to be done. I think that it worked too. If I had given birth to her, I think that I might have had a difficult time accepting her and probably would have pushed her off on Sesshoumaru so that I wouldn't have to be reminded of the pain. I know it is cowardly, but I can't imagine. I mean, I could never imagine rejecting a child that I had given birth too, but I don't know how Inuyasha can handle the memories, unless they just don't matter when he sees her beauty, innocence and vulnerability. I hope that the silver flashing in her eyes and the phasing moon is a good thing. Hey! Inuyasha could keep track of his moonless nights by her moon! LOL Sorry, a moment of insanity. I am sorry for not reviewing like I should, but having so much to keep up with and such a reduced amount of energy, I have to pick and choose where I put my efforts. I love to review every chapter and am probably just as disappointed with myself as you are. Thanks for not fussing at me. Ew! The whole blood thing was pretty gross. I don't see why Sess can't do some feeding. He has blood. *huff* Hm, I've got to read back to see what it was about Tsukiko's eating habits. Okay, I'm loving the little girl. I hope you don't give her a hard time or make her evil, especially when she has MY chosen name. (I'm in heaven there. I don't know why that became so important. You made her Naraku's just to torture me didn't you! I know that you wanted a different one.) Well, I'm in a brain fog and once I get better, you will probably see reviews that aren't chapter related. Oh, and the whole cleaning thing was just gross too. I'm not offended or anything. You're pretty brave to put that stuff in, though. Well, I'll get back to Chained. There is so much emotional stuff that it is difficult to knpw where to start on a review, but I'll figure it out. ^_^ Keep up the good work, I'm always excited to see a new chapter. Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
| Title: Once again, you are awesome!
Reviewed By: maelia8 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 21:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, it's me again, your newest loyal follower (note the drool at the corner of my mouth and the flat, glassy zombie eyes). Your fanfics always seem to cheer me up when I need to just escape from reality for a while - which is strange, because they are not the most cheerful things in the world. Right now I am in the middle of a big testing week, and everytime I get sick of staring at textbook pages and review sheets, I read for a couple of minutes and I feel up to facing the world (and the Assyrian Empire) once again. I have decided to start reading "Chained" because LadyOrange tells me that it is really good, and I got her to read "What Matters the Most". She decided that she was mature enough to read it, and her young brain appears to still be functioning, so she must be more hardened to explicit scenes than I thought. By the way, I repaired "The End of Innocence" the first chapter of my fanfic, and it is no longer a shame to view, so go for it if you have a minute. It isn't very long. The next chapter will be up pretty soon - after my wednesday test, I hope. Anywhoo, not much to say right now, except keep up the good work and continue to save that dry sense of humor and delicate use of verbs that we should all try to cultivate in ourselves. Thanks! Please post another chapter soon!
| Title: Names
Reviewed By: fawn of the woods (not logged in) On: April 30, 2006 15:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your doing great- i have been keeping up with the story even if i haven't been able to respond- ya know you could have like some mysterious friend of inu-kun's show up one that sess doesn't know show up to help when Naraku comes or something i like the names they're cute! did you intro duce Kagura's "mate" yet? i might've missed it- if not when do we meet the "lucky" guy? see ya next chapter
| Reviewed By: Soma-san [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 00:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome new chapter. I love the names you gave the pups. they are so cute. i can't wait to see what naraku is going to do. please update soon
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