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Title: Love this story so much!!!
Reviewed By: FXL On: April 03, 2006 23:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I love your story so much it is so good I love the updates I hating him being raped I loved that he got over it and I loved how they love each other and I like the Rin and Kouga pairing and if your still excepting name I'd like to add Nariko and Mayumi they are both pretty nice sound and I like them just a suggestion so I'll be reading catching up with your story I can't for more I love this story!!!!! I would put 100 on the enjoyment factor if I could!!!
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 21:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter as always. I can't wait until Inuyasha gives birth. I hope that the pups are Sesshomaru's. PLease update soon.
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Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu/Tryst On: April 03, 2006 20:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I'm totally identifying with InuYasha right now. Who ever said that writing was easy was lying. Your doing great and I hope to see more. I really do hope Inu has some semblance of piece, but I doubt that's going to happen. Well, I don't think so anyway. Hmmm. Gives me hope that I might pull up out of my current misery of blocks. Got stuck with both fics. Any how.... Thanks for getting this posted so quickly. Tryst/ Punishment of the Inu.
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Title: Heeeyaaa!
Reviewed By: AnimeRainChildOfLove [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2006 10:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yep,it was coherent,and really funny. It made Sessh seem more comedic,and InuYasha really scary........people carrying children scare me. I feel bad for both Sessh and InuYasha.
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Title: Chapter 42
Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 18:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was grinning through nearly the entire chapter. A psycho Inuyasha and an uncertain Sesshoumaru. Hilarious. Can't wait to see Inu's POV. That should be having my rolling on the floor. The thoughts of a rambling psychotic. I'm still smiling. Snow
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Reviewed By: inochigake On: March 31, 2006 16:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh yay...you updated...i can't wait for more...please update :3
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2006 08:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter as always. Will Inuyasha give birth soon? well please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu/Tryst On: March 30, 2006 23:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was funny. The whole insanity bit was good. I hope for another update soon.
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Reviewed By: Lokelani04 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2006 23:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol Yeah, that pun was intended! Hm...What does a fanficionist attempt to achieve? Hm...It's either the ultimate pleasure of messing around with the lives of someone else's characters...Or to entertain and please others with witty remarks and nail biting suspense. Personally? I write to achieve one thing...Personal peace! If I can make someone else's life seem different (Good or bad) then well, I'm happy, lol! It was actually a very good chapter, despite your saying you crammed everything into it. It reads very well, and it actually quite funny...I can just imagine Sesshomaru trying to go into his own room, only to have a vase thrown at his head. Or something else...^.^ Kudos for another good one! (v.v 10 tries so far to send this thing...)
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Reviewed By: Austen On: March 28, 2006 16:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I coincidentaly read this chapter just after I finished watching the 3rd movie (which I think is the best one so far, btw). Back to the story, it's always great to find well written Sess/Inu stories. I can't say is very original, but I like the way you took some overused plots and worked with them so that they could be enjoyable. I'm not particularly fond of mpreg stories, but I can deal with them. The fact that you update a lot is a big plus, I think I'll check out any other stories you have posted. Please keep writing this and forgive grammar mistakes in this review, I'm from Argentina.
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Title: Love it
Reviewed By: FXL On: March 28, 2006 11:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh god this is so good so far man I wish I would have read it it sooner and I'm going to catch up!!!! I love this story so good!!! Maybe you should consider putting it on Fanfiction.net They give alot more reviews there it's just a suggestion but I love your story!!!
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Reviewed By: Taisho On: March 27, 2006 04:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story, but it doesn't flow very well at some points, and I loose interest. Over all the concept isn't all that interesting, Every one has done the matting thing with the brothers, and the whole rape of Inuyasha by Naraku is over done. Those are the bad points, or troubled spots, rather. The good points are that you go into the characters head, and make them more in depth with out changing hardly anything about the characters themselves. You can draw the reader in and the character interation is great, making your reader enjoy the story as if they were watching the events, rather then reading about them. The information that you put at the end of each chapter, though nice, and informative, not nessicary. But, on that subject, you wanted to know why Akiko is only female, now a days that's not the case, it is used for both, but originally to put an "A" or "IKO" made the name female. Usually adding an "O", or "IO" made it female. There were expctions of course, like "Mika", "Miko" are both female names. And such names that were strictly male are now being used as female names. Akira being one such name. Just some little bit of info I thought that you might like.
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Title: Umm
Reviewed By: Kilika On: March 25, 2006 01:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not quite sure what to say about this story. On the other hand it is a creative and fairly original idea. Maybe I'm just not looking the right places, but I havent seen to many Inu/Sess pairings. On the other hand, I'm fairly disgusted, I have no problem with the male on male, although it's not my thing, but the incest is pretty nasty. You do have a very nice writing style though, and would be willing to read something a little less controversal of yours.
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Title: Queen of the Gender Benders Kidding.
Reviewed By: Punishment of the Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 23:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an amusing chapter. I hope you come up with more soon. I sent you some reviews by email. Sorry. I'll try to leave more reviews here. Hehehe. Is Kikyo or any of the others going to get involved? Or the tree? That would be amusing to see how they all handle that.
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Reviewed By: Lokelani04 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 22:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its no problem at all! I love helping out others. I really love this story. You keep it much more interesting (haha) that some other authors do. And look! Shippo! Weee! Ahem, sorry. Shippo's just adorable. Kudos!
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