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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: June 11, 2006 12:30 EDT
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Oh my goodness. Poor Inuyasha. I had a feeling that you would have Naraku collar him before long (after all Kagome did within a scroll or two) but I didn't think it would be something quite so sadistic. It will continue to torture him whenever he doesn't do something that Naraku desires of him, won't it. Cruel cruel author. One of the highlights of this chapter was Tsukiko reaction to IY's fear and pain. Swiping at her own 'father.' Reminiscent of Kagura. Even the bastard's children don't like him. Not that I can't say that it serves him right. Ah, but back to poor little Inuyasha. If he hasn't eaten or drunk anything for a while he isn't going to be able to take care of Tsukiko at all. He'll start to hallucinate and finally slip into a coma. I know that Naraku wants an unwilling, not an unconscious partner, so surely he will force some food or water on him soon. Producing milk takes a LOT out of a body. You usually need twice as much fluids and half again as much nutrients so poor Inu is probably not far from coma and death. damn. Please let Sess and Co come for him soon.
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Reviewed By: LizzzA On: June 11, 2006 01:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
=)Yay I caught up thanks. So sorry for before, L-O-V-E-D chap 62. So excited to know what happens next. ^_~*
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 00:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
!!!! Nooo it can't be over yet!!!! MUST WRITE MORE DAMN IT!!! poor inuyasha.... It wasn't really a good discription of the collar, perhaps it is because i am tired and partly drunk.. but U MUST UPDATE SOOON i'm dying of bordem..... and its just getting exciting!
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Title: Sad Chappy!!
Reviewed By: FXL-lazy On: June 11, 2006 00:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was so sad!! But I didn't cry this time even though I was on the verge of tears I guess it wasn't sad enough to get the tears flowing this time. Poor Inuyasha is starving to death when will he eat and I hope when he does eat it's not something nasty! Evil Naraku put that collar on Inuyasha and it went into his and I could never Imagine the type of pain he went threw tell me one thing was it worst then going threw birth? and It's no wonder Inuyasha has died from stravation he is very strong to have stayed sane for as long as he has been there. I'm sure Sesshomaru hasn't had a chance to sleep either. He is most likely all worried about his pups ,Inuyasha, and new information. I think if I was in that situation I would probably be one of those people that run around like a headless chicken LOL. I wonder how Sesshomaru is doing now. He probably felt the same amount of pain as Inuyasha did or heard his cry for help. I'd wish she would go fuck Hojo to because she is the most annoying character of them all!!!! Sorry about getting you all worked up but now I'm getting worked up to! Man I hate Kagome... So I loved this chapter and this story is the best out of all of the Inu and Sessho story I have read! Number one in my book!! So I can't wait to see what happens next!! Til next time! FXL
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Title: EEEpppp
Reviewed By: Inochigake On: June 10, 2006 22:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god...my breath was in my throat and my whole heart stopped while reading this...please update...it is so intense that it cant just stop..please continue
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 22:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Awsome chapter please update soon.
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Title: I absolutly love your story!
Reviewed By: A.D. Williams On: June 09, 2006 21:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading your story for the past week trying to get up to catch up to where you are now(it's a very good thing that I'm an avid reader!) but I love it! Though I feel anger and hatred toward Naraku for what he's doing to Inuyasha (and the rest of the family for that matter) it makes the story all that more interesting to say the least. I really can't wait for the next chapter! Sincerly, Amanda
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Reviewed By: Tai-san On: June 05, 2006 17:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kick ass new chapters as always. Love the angst and the pain. Can't wait to see how long it will take Sesshomaru to break down and go after Inuyasha himself. Glad to see inu's daughter is still getting taken care of. Hope the boys are ok. Thanks so much for the awesome updates. Update again as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: coldTenshieyes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 16:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! You're evil!! *whimper* Poor Inu. *whimper* What's up with the milk and how the hell did Naraku know?! that's crazy! I love it but it's soooooooooooo sad! and now Inu's crying the blood tears again!! Wahhh!! Please Update!! L8rz! (^o^)/~
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Title: A note on ch. 60 and ch.61
Reviewed By: maelia8 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 19:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I am all caught up again. You must be getting more sleep, or more rushes of creativity, because your writing was definitely better in ch. 61 than in the previous two. Keep up the good work! Wow . . . that was kinda wierd with InuYasha and the milk. I've heard about emergency bodily responses, like induced lactation in females who have to nurse babies which they did not bear, but this was something else. Your explanation makes sense . . . but does this mean that InuYasha will get breasts? Ewwww! I mean, it has to come from somewhere, right? On another note, how did InuTaisho and Izayoi keep Sesshomaru from just rushing off immediately to look for his lost mate? Being who he is, what reason does he have for patience and waiting? Another question, on a more random note: Seeing as InuTaisho and Izayoi are still alive in this AU, and, as far as I know, birth control was limited to abstainance in the feudal era, why didn't they have any more children? They both obviously love InuYasha, and do not feel that his birth was a bad thing, so why didn't they have more kids? I remember you mentioning them going at it in a previous chapter, and sex + no birth control for 15 to 20 years = babies. Just thought that I'd point this out. And now for the appreciation and flattery. This is the fic that I most consistently review and look at of all of the fics on MM.org, and I have about fifty fanfics in my favorites (I only keep the ones that I really like the read more than once - I'm pretty choosy). This fic truly makes me need to know what happens next, and I can't easily predict outcomes, as I can with many of the other fics that I read (especially those "happily ever after" ones that we discussed previously. Another reason that I like to read this fic is that I know that my questions will be answered - when I know that I probably won't get a response, I feel less inclined to write. As you may have noticed by now, I am the type that likes to question and complement and ramble, and not all authors like to hear this - most just want a quick "wow, I love your fic! please update soon!". But that doesn't cut it for me. Thank you so much for paying attention to individual queries - It's like going to an author's fair and being able to ask your favorite writer why they did such-and-such or what something means. On the whole, I just feel listened to - which is a good way to feel in the immense fabric of cyberspace. Thank you once again for your awesome writing and responses. In two weeks, when I am out for the summer, I will be even more attentive and discerning in my writing! Yay for philosophical questions and inane ramblings (grins maniacally). Domo Arigato!
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Reviewed By: the tell-tale kitten On: June 02, 2006 09:16 EDT
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See. I knew it was possible to see another fairly long chapter. Thanks.. and an update has been added with out me knowing..Ha. Oh well that's also good. Hmm, I have to say this chapter intersted me more than the last. I think that more action needs to be taken on Inu Taisho or Sesshoumaru's part and something needs to happen that isn't reapeated rape from Naraku, but I have no problem with that either..take that whichever way you please.. but something is happening none the less and that is progress. Well I'm kind of in Japanese class now and should get back to work..so...yeah..that's about all I have to say for the time being. Just keep it up..it's going well..
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Reviewed By: ____insert user here [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 18:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just listened to the preview thing that they show people for "what do they know" and they don't show the part that i was referencing to, so sorry for the link because it made no sense!!. (everyone who looked thinks: wow. makes sense... that didn't relate to anything at all...) okay what i was really referencing to was this part where it says "beat me up, beat me down, mess me up beyond recognition"-- could be non-evil person's general condition. then the next line: "for what it's worth, i'd do it again, with no consequence i would do it again"--yeah, and who is the evil villain here? and then the next line (takes up much energy and bolts out song)-- "hard up, so hunt me down.."-- who is the non-villain's special youkai? see where i'm going? (good, because i don't...) okay i'm going to stop now, i was just telling anyone who was like "WTF THAT HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH THIS STORY HM HM HM!" -angry mob throws fire at window- okay you get the rest. keep posting! agh! you're keeping me on story-watch! -gets anti-story watch pills- thanks!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: fawn of the woods (not logged in) On: June 01, 2006 13:27 EDT
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i know i haven't reviewed in a few chaps so i thought i better; you are driving me CRAZZZZZZZYY! ok that actually felt good; come on get them free and have 'em show up and surprise sess or their father or something; please help me out here, AAAAHHHHHHH whew ok update soon ^_*
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Title: chapter 60 and 61
Reviewed By: FXL-lazy On: May 31, 2006 23:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man you sure did surprise me by putting two chapters in one day. But they both were good! Chapter 60 really did show Sesshomarus feeling and it's sad that he can't go to find Inuyusha because he has to stay with his two sons. Maybe he can put his scent on a blanket or something to make them thing he is still there so he can go rescue Inu. Also I didn't even know one of the boys name was a girls name. Sesshomaru must be going thru alot because he can feel what Inuyasha is feeling. So sad... So with chapter 61 it was so sad how he couldn't feed Naraku and the amount of times he said Naraku raped him! Why does Naraku have to be so evil? Well what else would I expect from the guy? He is EVIL and MEAN and he does have a BLACK HOLE for a heart not like he is going to make Inuyasha fall in love with him with his charm... So I guess it wasn't a surprise when Inuyasha got raped again and again it's just sad to read. but I could see why he would be able to give milk after a while. It would be like his body and mind knew that if he couldn't feed Tsukiko she would end up dying so his body forced him to have the ability to produce milk in the span of time he has been there which is like one day. It's been only one day right?? So maybe you could put something about how guilty Rin feels about the whole thing? I hope Sesshomaru and Inuyasha ends up happily at the end... Damn Naraku!!!!! I hate Naraku even more now then I did from the anime!! I love this story more then the anime which I haven't watched in about seven weeks. I'm to busy reading stories with Yaoi because I hate Kagome and Inuyasha together!! Yaoi rules!!! This story rules!!! Inuyasha and Sesshomaru rules!!! Naraku sucks!!! I can't wait for more!! I love this story so much!! So now that I'm done typing alI that I'll say til next time keep up the good work and have a nice day. FXL
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Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: Crazy-Inuyasha-Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 22:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome chapter please update soon.
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