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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 22:33 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, so he finally admit that hes falling hard for her, thats good, but to bad he won't tell her God knows how long. So I hope you update soon and keep up what you do best, write.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 21:55 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Don't keep us waiting to long!!! I can't wait to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 21:12 EDT
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That was a good good good chapter!! I loved it! Update soon!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: monk-miko On: September 21, 2006 16:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the best chapter. Now Inuyasha can't stop telling himself that he is not in love with Kagome. I just hope they hurry and get together. Kouga is smart in him getting them two together. Once they admit that they are in love I bet everything is going to come clean. Just hope that its soon cause they really need to get together so that Inuyasha can learn from Kagome and Kagome from Inuyasha. Just can't wait for the next chapter. I'll be waiting for it. Hope to see it real soon. Don't keep me waiting. LOL!!!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 15:35 EDT
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rollercoaster...fall...please tell me things don't get seriously f*ed up at the charity thing. hojo and yasha in the same room. the harder yasha tries to deny himself and his feelings the more he's struggling. he's angry at his friends for leaving him out then realizes that he's the one leaving them out. he wants to make it to the top but then what? at the rate he's going there will be nothing there, the top will be it. will he just let go then? and as nice as playing matchmaker is, his friends should realize that inuyasha is more than likely to just get pissed off instead of talking to kagome and finding out what's going on and then turn to kikyou and drag himself down even further. sometimes i think they really end up following 'the road to hell is paved with good intentions' it could end up hurting the band as well as any fragile bonds inuyasha and kagome are making. as always you leave me in suspense. until next time...
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 13:11 EDT
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Wow, I absolutely loved the last line of this chapter. It seemed powerful to me. That feeling of the inevitable; the feeling that some things happen without one's consent-like falling love. I enjoyed this chapter a great deal because there seemed to be a buzz of tension between Kagome and Inuyasha. I thought the static charge you mentioned fit the bill perfectly. A charge between them. Thanks for the chapter. I look forward to seeing more!
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Title: Chapter 15
Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: September 21, 2006 12:51 EDT
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Excellent chapter. I especially enjoyed the section where Kagome was interviewed and talked about what the band meant to her. That and the final scene. One thing worried me though, Rollercoaster? :( I don't want bad things to happen to the group. I want them to do good....but I also want to read more - so there must be some drama. I have enjoyed the music selections a lot as well. I really want to see Inu rocked out singing Undone...... Wish I could draw. oh well. Thanks for writing for us - It's been a great ride so far!
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: September 20, 2006 12:33 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Another fabulous chapter. For some reason I didn't get an email that 13 was up, so when I saw the note that 14 was up (explanation chapter) it was like an extra present! Anyway, great chapter. You did an excellent job with Inu's character this chapter. You really allowed the reader to not only feel his desire for Kagome, but also that twinge of fear at the thought of not seeing her and then the rage of jealousy. I don't know if I ever knew that song was really about suicide, I always thought it was about betrayal. So for me this was a really powerful addition to the story. I think that this may be the first time that you have specifically mentioned that Kikyou was tied up with Naraku. (I could be extra wrong too) But I worry about Inuyasha and the depths that he has gone to. I also worry about Kikyou and Naraku and their reaction if he should ever slow/stop the shit that he is doing. Lastly, there was a comment that the friends made that Kagome wouldn't sacrifice herself for Inuyasha.......The character that you have made Kagome into WOULD sacrifice herself for him. I know that you are the author and I'm not, but I really think that if Kagome thought that her sacrifice would bring Inuyasha back to belief (either in himself or in her diety) she would do it in an instant and never think twice. - once again, personal opinion. Thanks for writing for us. I have really enjoyed this story and have recommended it to others. You have a good storyline, but you have backed it up with even better characterization. Caitriona @ Juno
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 20:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading your story for awhile and I have to say it's good, realy good. At how you explain the religeon to the read through the character it amazed me and how you can make Inuyasha a complete ass. I'm starting to like Koga in this story, hes actully going to play matchmaker, I like that. I just hope it work. Now something tells me that Sango is going to find her long lost brother sometime soon, hope so. Well great story you made, update soon and keep up of what your doing.
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Reviewed By: Leah (leahrc13@hotmail.com) On: September 16, 2006 17:58 EDT
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Overall, this is a pretty decent story. You're doing a wonderful job of portraying Inuyasha's inner struggles with himself. One thing I need to point out from your Notes, though, is that Muslims are followers of Islam. They are not separate ideas of thought and both refer to the same religion. You may have been thinking of Islam, Judaism and Christianity, since most of Western thought and culture has a basis in Judeo-Christian belief. Anyways, good story, but know what you're taling about when you start spouting ideals about religion.
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Title: Bestbestbest Story!!!
Reviewed By: dofuihgdoiugea On: September 16, 2006 17:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!! It so sexy, yet it has a lot of 'friendship' between Kags&Inu. and it's nice to read a story where the girl is doing stuff for the guy and just the whole thing rox! Hope there's gonna be a lot of jealousy and smut in the near future! ;)
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 22:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. Your writing is really good, and it never cease's to amze it. I absolutely love it. I can't wait for the next chapter. ;-)
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 19:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yup! ...its gonna take a miracle...lol :D Great chappie....update when you can. :D
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: monk-miko On: September 15, 2006 19:00 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just getting to good. Man I can't believe Inuyasha fell for Kouga's trick. This chapter was the best. Knowing Inuyasha he is going to ask Kouga about the charity thing. Inuyasha needs to use some common sense sometimes. Though Kouga does have a good plan. Just hope that Inuyasha doesn't bring Kagome into anything that will hurt her. She has been into just as much as Inuyasha. Though I do wonder who is upstairs at Sesshomaru's mansion that Inuyasha is to scared to see. I just hope that Kagome gets Inuyasha out of whatever he has gotten himself into. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I hope that Inuyasha will let Kagome help him. That's all that she wants to do. Please write another chapter soon. I have been waiting for this chapter for a while now. I'll be waiting for it. Don't let me down. LOL!!!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 16:25 EDT
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i adore this story. the music is great (and yep, if i don't have it, i find it and listen to it while the chapter is going on) and the characters are intense. i think that the group does have to watch with kagome. she's strong. but she may sacrifice herself for inuyasha without realizing she's losing herself. to have someone that is so lost inside themselves it only seems right that the one to help would have to become a little bit lost too. at least he seems ready to try and give kagome a chance to be his friend. to be comfortable with him. i just can't bring myself to trust hojo. he seems so concerned with what is right and what would be best for kagome that he's failing to see what she wants out of life. i always look forward to your updates.
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