| "A Souls Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 16:39 EDT
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please! :P
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Reviewed By: Shadow fox 101 On: September 18, 2006 07:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOw! really good story! I can't wait to read more :)
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 16:14 EDT
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Great work! Keep it up and update soon! :P
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 13:08 EDT
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Well, can't help it, but Kurama\Kagome\Yusuke treesome is currently one of my favaurite, so, I'm stuck with you, for the time being...^_^
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Reviewed By: LCAR [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 00:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEEP IT UP I LIKE IT
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Kage Otome (Shadow Maiden-NSI) On: September 16, 2006 18:51 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoying it, a few spelling errors (Yuseke and Kuruma, Yusuke and Kurama) Anyway, I'm still enjoying this, I hope to see more, you have a good start to this story.
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Reviewed By: QuietShadows [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 17:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it very much, but I really want you to change from Yuseke to Yusuke, and from Kuruma to Kurama, because you've got their names wrong. It's quite funny...you got all the names right , even Kuwabara (which sometimes i mess up with), but tje most important characters have wrong names. If you dont believe me go to absoluteanime.com and look for Yu Yu Kakusho. You'll find there all the information you need. Once again i enjoy this fic, although i read sometime ago another story with approximately the same idea, but yours has much better grammar, and it is easier to read.
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar09 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 16:29 EDT
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YUSH! You have updated! *thumbs up* ^^ Cant wait for chapter 3!!! ~Star
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar09 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 16:28 EDT
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YUSH! You have updated! *thumbs up* ^^ Cant wait for chapter 3!!!
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar09 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 16:28 EDT
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YUSH! You have updated! *thumbs up* ^^ Cant wait for chapter 3!!!
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Reviewed By: bluemoon_175 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 01:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please you must write more, I have never been more excited to wait for an update. Plus this story is keeping me on my toes, I hope you keep up the job well done. Also this story sounds fantastic, so PLEASE UPDATE as SOON as you can.
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 16:42 EDT
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I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar09 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 23:53 EDT
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ooooo really good!! ^^ I like it!! ALOT!! ^^ hope you update soon!! oh and uh...it's Yusuke if you hadnt already been told. cant wait to see chapter 2! JANE! XD ~Star
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Title: A Souls Seduction
Reviewed By: O-sO-Fly On: September 13, 2006 23:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great start! hope you write more and update soon! hey btw is this going to be a Yusuke/Kagome/Kurama-Youko? IF it was it'd be soooooo cool!!! hey keep that idea in mind ok? Well you did good heres your appulase **more than a trillen ppl clap** and to make you more happy i cant tell if you spelled anything wrong cuz i cant spell my damn self!! I like your idea UPDATE SOON!!!!! i cant wait! 0-s0-Fly
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Shadow Maiden [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 18:23 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I saw a few spelling/grammar errors, but it was good, overall. I liked it. So is Kagome trained in this story (Or semi-trained) in her powers? I wonder what you have planned next. By the way, you will probably get more reviews if you allow anonymous reviewers, right now you have it set to registered reviews only. Anyway, keep up the good work, hope to see more soon.
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