"A Souls Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] |
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Reviewed By: Elemental_dea (not logged in) On: December 04, 2006 15:47 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I finally finished reading all 15 chapters you have posted so far... I want more!!!!!! I love your style, it also has a twist of perversion in it too ^.^ Damn that Houjo.....though I'm finally glad someone did something to the bastard! Please Update Soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tallia On: December 02, 2006 22:30 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Your story rocks!!!! You have such an amazing plot I simply can't wait to read more!!! I love how good you are at keeping them all in character and I really love that you don't make Kagome some pathetic weak human like alot of other authors do. Please keep up the great work & I'll be waiting in suspense for the next update! ^^
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Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 00:50 EST Comment/Review: wow that was REALLY great!!!!!!!!!! i hope you update soon!!! XXXXDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!! i cant wait to read the rest!
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Reviewed By: Kielle On: December 01, 2006 17:38 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG Your story is amazing! Please please please! Keep writing! I hope you continue this story for as long as you can - its one of the best I've read in a long time! You plot is amazing, your writing style is perfect, and your characters are wicked - you have so much amazing talent - I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for more!!!
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Reviewed By: crazibum8 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 07:44 EST Comment/Review: i LOVED it!! please please please update soon!! :)
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Title: Continue Reviewed By: Vampire Kitty On: November 28, 2006 10:54 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I am not sure if the higher the number the better it is or the other way around but I realy like this story PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Ookami K On: November 26, 2006 20:53 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: What can I say but that was just so damn awesome. I live to read and your story is the top of the bin I can never get enough of this one lots of action, drama, and some Kinky yet loving scenes makes the everyday paperback romance novels seem tasteless. Anyways, I loved the Hojo bashing on Kagome's part I hate when other author make Kagome a weakling that she cannot defend herself thumbs up on that.... Anyways, the chapter was totally awesome I can't wait until the next. Keep them coming, I may not always review but when I do I make the author know just how much I adored their treasure. Until next time. Ookami K.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 15:34 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: OH please update very soon, I like what you have so far I want to see what happens with shess.
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Reviewed By: Cassial_Darkfox [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 16:32 EST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: heck yeah!! you did excellent!! I don't like Hojo too much and I loved the part where he got his face punched in!! keep up the awesome work!!!!!
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Title: ooo la la Reviewed By: Tinker Bell From Hell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 21:21 EST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: love the story... i really want to know what happens next.. anjd those cliffy's are truly evil... i love them... a perfect balance of steamy sex, adventure, kickassness, and heroism.... love it... please keep writing.... and all i can say is that i REALLY wish that i was kagome... i would certianly not have minded starting over with those delectible bits of eye candy... ;) anywho... love the story. keep writing or ill come after you with a pichfork and a torch like in the movie shreck... though i wont be singing any songs lol.... toodles! CopperFairy
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: November 23, 2006 11:14 EST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: This is great! And I vote MATE! MATE! MATE! MATE! WOOHOOO!
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: November 23, 2006 11:14 EST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: This is great! And I vote MATE! MATE! MATE! MATE! WOOHOOO!
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Reviewed By: Anonymousfanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 04:29 EST Comment/Review: Will Hojo try to press charges against Hojo or better yet, maybe Kagome should press sexual harassment charges against Hojo? Maybe next time Hojo tries something, she could warn him. Wonder what would've happened if it was Sesshomaru who was there. Hojo should be careful, one of these days, someone who Kagome knows, might have the power and the connections that could cause him/family blackballed from everything to no longer have job to bad credit or something like that. To bad his mother doesn't what kind of son he is. Wonder why Kagome's friend is going out with him? It seems that Kagome doesn't remember what happen to Hiei and her, does Hiei know of this and how does he feel about it? For some reason I keep thinking Kagome would be pregnant, with four babies at the same time. each one of them are the fathers. Hiei, Yusuke, Kurama, and Yoko. I'm crazy. Please update ASAP
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Reviewed By: babygirl20008 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 04:18 EST Comment/Review: well done. I can't wait till you upate again. I wonder how the other are going to handel what happen with Hojou. Well untill next time. See ya
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Reviewed By: Acd-Brn On: November 23, 2006 02:49 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OmG your story os amazing and hobo got beat up hurahhh any ways your story rocks please update soon! ^_^
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