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| "A Souls Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] | | Pages (17): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 › » ] | Reviewed By: LmKiTsUnE [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 20:47 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, you updated and finished the lemon. That stupid Hodo, I don't like him at all! Then the meeting with Kurama's mom. I kinda thought it would be longer, but I love it how it is. Poor Yusuke; *Gasp* Only one day left!!! He better hurry, Or else. (not that Hiei and Kurama would mind doing ....that..again....I think.=/)
| Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 19:55 EST
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haha luved it! still has me wondering wut is gunna happen to kags relationship w/ the 3 demons. well she's kinda kurama's gf now so wut bout hiei and yus? anyways keep up the good work!!
| Title: Chap15-14 not viewed.
Reviewed By: Icywolfflame [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 19:40 EST
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umm....I don't know why, it might just be my coputer, but i can't read chapter 14...I was half wondering if there is/was any thing you could do about it...Ill click a link or use the bar and clik 'view' and it will come up, just barley and close, gone, exit, what ever...is this happining to anybody else?what ever...The chapter was great!!can't wait to see what Kurama is going to do
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 17:45 EST
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You knew it was coming: my second thoughts on the latest chapter's developments. Kagome was angry, and righfully so, at Houjo's words and actions. But I wonder if this incident will create big problems for her. #1 She's got 3 men(demons) in her life. #2 It's still only been such a short while since she MET them, she's bound to feel strange about having such feelings for all 3 of them -- (it's not normal, after all) ;) #3 The public's opinion of her relationships is going to be hard to deal with. BECAUSE, even if they all agree to let Shuichi be the public "boyfriend," there are going to be times she will want to (or have to) be out with one of the other two, and she won't want to have to hide her feelings for him. I think she is going to feel guilty about having to slight the other two relationships in the public eye. I can picture the upcoming mating being preceded by a heart-to-heart talk with our resident badass with a heart of gold, where she might feel compelled to assure him she doesn't love him any less than the others. (Hey, he DID have to wait to go last, and she DID choose to go to Kurama next. Which was perfectly understandable since she had more contact with him after returning from being kidnapped, AND she knows he LOVES her.) I really LOVE the way you have handled the different relationships amongst the mates -- aces! There's a wealth of material to work with here -- you're just a genius! I am just looking forward to how they work all this out. And the different scenes you can play out with different groups (her friends, Houjo, her family, Sess, et.al., Genkai and crew, the workplace, etc.) -- well, it just makes me drool with anticipation. And, of course, the best scenes of all are those with just Kgome and her mates! As another reviewer said, I can't wait to hear Kuama and Yuko's thoughts this time, along with Hiei's, while she's with Yusuke! It's all so much FUN! And, BTW, I really liked the way you handled houjo's feelings on seeing her with Yusuke and then hearing she's supposed to be with Shuichi -- his wondering if HE was supposed to be the respectable boyfriend was not such a strtch of the imagination, was it? Completely believable. SO well-done! I will be checking my computer regularly for more updates!! Thanks!!
| Reviewed By: Fox_Hanyou On: November 22, 2006 17:35 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol! well, i forgive you since you asked. lol also, this chapter was a HIT! i loved it!.....havent i said that in all my reviews for you?........sorry, i must sound like a broken record. my bad- but i still love it so much! keep it up, and lets see if Yusuke can really keep up with Kags. lol
| Reviewed By: Touketsu Kaijin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 16:26 EST
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YES! u should have had yusuke hit hobo again tho. *sigh* to bad. i guess hiei can just go kill him later. what i wonder tho is y in the world hojo thought he could beat yusuke.
| Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 16:20 EST
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Great work! I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
| Reviewed By: ShadowStar09 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 15:52 EST
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OMG! ROFL! Hojo so diserved that! WOOT! Yusuke you are the smex! Lol Cant wait to see what heppends next! *drools over Yusuke and Kagome lemoness* heh...pretty....Eh...yea update soon ^^
| Reviewed By: TheDemonQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 13:33 EST
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Another great chapter. I knew it wouldn't be Hiei who encountered Hojo, because he would not have held back... Yusuke was right he would have made him chopped sui. And as amusing as that would have been a broken nose is better for keeping up appearences. I hope you update soon, I am very curious as to what she will find out about being a Lady of the West. It should be interesting. And I can't wait for the lemon with Yusuke. Hiei won't be the only one getting extremly jealous this time, and I hope you get into Kurama and Youko's minds so we know what is going on with the fox. Well, I hope you update soon. Until next time, ja ne!
| Title: LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT
Reviewed By: AngelGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 13:33 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was absolutely great. Although i wwished u had hurt Houjo a little more. {im not that fond of houjo as u can see} oh well as wells ends well. I cant wait for ur next update. soooooooooooo PLEASE HURRY UP. ok. r there going to be any kuwabara and boton love goin on. i hope sooo cause botan is deffinitely one of my fav characters. And who is Hie's sister in love with? JEEZ the suspence is killin me. well not really but it pinches. ;-} well hope to read ur next update real soon. until Hosta Luego and Sayanara.
| Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 12:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes G Yu! I can't wait to see what will happen next. Happy Thanks Giving
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 10:05 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hee hee! I must have done something REALLY good, because the kamis smiled on me and blessed me with a new chapter of my favorite story to read this morning! Loved the lemony goodness! Lots of good stuff going on besides the sex, too. I was surprised Kurama used some seeds and vines and Youko didn't. There's more kitsune to Kurama than he thought, isn't there? Kurama didn't mark her, though -- just Youko? Hiei's mark is on the left side of her neck and youko's is on the right -- where will Yusuke's go? Will it be on the neck or somewhere else? (Maybe right over the heart? I'm sure that general region would appeal to him. Heh heh.) Wow! She was so demanding with Kurama --go Kagome!! But, of course, Youko was completely in charge after initiating "My turn!" That Hiei! A voyeur -- figures. And a glutton for punishment, too. What was he thinking opening his link with her while she was having sex with Kurama? That was just asking for it! Loved his thoughts about teaching the fox not to mess with him. And of course that he plans to let her know how he feels without Kurama's interference. I'm so sad Kagome doesn't remember her 1st time, though -- like I said, that ought to hurt Hiei's pride a bit. (He'll have to make it up to her later, ne?) Loved the scene of Yusuke's frustration while listening to them! Perfectly done! And how great was Hiei's interruption the morning after? Oh yeah! He definitely got to pay Kurama back, didn't he? He just jumped in the bedroom and told him to get dressed! LOVED IT! (Of course, Kurama did get to display that smug smile at Kagome's obvious interest.) Then Hiei kept baiting her -- too funny! Your take on their relationship is so good! Loved yusuke's comments about her being feisty and that Kurama and Youko must be slipping since they didn't tire her out. Bet he and Hiei both felt rather smug about that, didn't they? And kurama really did drop the ball and mess up by not telling her about his family -- specifically his mother, and HIS OWN NAME! Really like Yusuke's thoughts about the difference between Kagome and Keiko -- that's why she's right for him, right? So, will she look for another job? Is Houjo's part in the story over? Or will he come back and play another nasty, vicious little part out of his jealousy and lust? Will he stir up more trouble? Will her girlfriends show up? Ayumi will probably be pretty mad because of Yusuke breaking his nose, won't she? And why were kagome's marks hurting when Houjo was questioning/accusing her? Were they alerting her two mates to her plight? Will she and Yusuke run into two irate demons on the way home? You are just serving up continually great chapters!! (Especially for someone with a lump on their head -- ouch! Where's Yusuke when you REALLY need him?!?) Thanks for this installment!! Can't wait for the next one, as always!!
| Reviewed By: TheDemonQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 00:09 EST
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That is cruel. I am glad she will be meeting Shiori... that should be interesting. I like the reason you gave for Hiei going first, it was a good reason, and I think it sounds a lot like Kurama to have come up with that. Well I have to go now. HOpe you update soon. Until next time, ja ne!
| Reviewed By: Fox_Hanyou On: November 21, 2006 21:39 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was evil of you!!!! Just when it was getting good too! (pout) well, please, please, PLEASE update asap!!! i love it!!!!! *cheers Kurama on* GO FOR IT FOXBOY!
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Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 20:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
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