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| "A Souls Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] | | Pages (17): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 › » ] | Reviewed By: Cassial_Darkfox [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 19:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!!! that was mean!! why stop there??? -pout- update soon!!! pwease!!!
| Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner *Offline* On: November 21, 2006 18:23 EST
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UPDATE
| Reviewed By: Anonymousfanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 02:36 EST
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Very, very very, very, very, very cruel. Is it a dream, or is it really happening? I sure thought it would be Yusuke who would be next. How will Shuichi's mom and Kagome go? What will Hojo do, that Kagome may need rescuing? Since he knows about Yusuke, will he really want to take a chance or does he have a death wish? Although if Kurama or Hiei was there, what will happen? Please update ASAP
| Reviewed By: AngelGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 23:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UHHHHHHHH I hate U. IT WAS SOOOOOO GETTIN GOOD. I cant wait 4 the next part. But hopfully you'll put some more sesshomeru parts in :-] cant wait to read the rest. PLEASE dont take toooo long. until next time.
| Reviewed By: LmKiTsUnE [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 21:32 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooooooooo, How could you? lol, Anyways, I really lked the ending "MINE"!! Poor Hojo (not) I hope he gets whats coming for him. I can picture it now, and as you can (or cant) tell I kinda-really-dont like him. *mummbling: Stupid....(insert things that make people choke on their own spit) That happend one time.........Update!
| Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 20:13 EST
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ahhh noooo!!! keep going!!!
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 20:08 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, yes, yes!! SO worth the wait! Fantastic chapter! Let's dive into it, shall we? Great way to handle the Kuwabara/Botan situation -- through Shizuru's thoughts. Can't wait to find out who Yukina has fallen for!! Loved Kagome being angry at Takehiko because she couldn't rmember much of being with Hiei. (Hiei wouldn't be too happy to know that, either, I bet, -- especially since he has to wait to refresh her memory! Ha!) LOVED her plans for Takehiko -- to "twist his balls off and purify them in front of his eyes." Kuramam did a nice job of trying to smooth things over when she felt sad and angry that Hiei wasn't there. I can see him having to take that role a lot in their future, ne -- for Hiei and Yusuke. Love the effect of her touching the mark -- cool that it will affect ALL of them -- THAT's going to be fun. Yusuke and Kurama's talk was great. Kurama's reasons fro Hiei going first hit the mark -- he really is an "evil, cunning bastard." Funny when Hiei showed up and surprised him. And how great that he was amused and not angry after hearing Kurama's little plot! Guess he'd already come to some realizations, ne? But, OH, am I ever looking forward to that possessive jealousy! I am oh so scared and worried about that look Kurama gave Yusuke when he told them they will all have to adapt because they're all 3 possessive. Can't wait to see exactly what he meant by that. Youko was jealous of Iuyasha -- was he the only one who remembered Kagome telling Keiko how much she had loved him? And Kagome advancing on Hiei to show him she could get close to him and Krama having to stop her because he knew where it would lead -- how funny was THAT? Hope Hiei gets a chance to thwart HIM while they're waiting for her to mate with Yusuke. Poetic justice. Loved the reactions to her past and looking forward to hiei letting her know about his own. Really, really loved Yusuke stepping on Inu. Bringing us to the brilliant cliffhanger: awesome scene with Youko trying to get Kurama to peek! The way you revealed Kurama's feelings and longing for her love was perfect -- top-notch. And Kgome coming in to seduce HIM -- YAY!! The chapter-ending word: MINE! Does it get any better than THAT? I think not. As much as i am now longing for the NEXT chapter, I don't think you could have ended that one any more perfectly. I bow to the master. Can't wait to find out about her disappointing news anf for Hojo to try to comfort her. Who will see them? What will happen? Sure don't want to be Hojo! Please, may Ihave some MORE?
| Reviewed By: XxhellzgurlxX [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 19:52 EST
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U FREAKIN GRRRRRRRR U NEED 2 UPDATE NOW!!!! FREAKIN PISSED ME OFF BUT I LOVED IT!!!
| Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 15:26 EST
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I agree with Madmiko. When? pretty please? Although I'm torn between wanting results NOW and saying take the time you need and want to satisfy yourself and write it the way you want it. I assume you do have a life, and those pesky things can interrupt our getting our fix. Everything has been great so far.
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 19:01 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still here. Waiting. Oh so patiently. Okay, NOT so patiently. Because I love this story! And i can't wait for the guys to bring her home and see what happens next. And WHO happens next. And HOW it happens next. Will Shippo go to their place to make sure she's okay? Will she show up for work, or will she have to "call in sick?" Will Hojo be waiting to walk her home? My mind is just spinning with the possibilities, and I am just hoping, and praying that you will be able to add another chapter (or TWO) this weekend. Because I'm having SERIOUS withdrawal symptoms. Please feed my addiction!
| Reviewed By: ShadowStar09 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 02:03 EST
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OMG! That Lemon was sooooo PRETTY! *drools* I cant wait for the ones to come!! ^^ update soon!
| Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 20:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, Hiei. I knew he would be sweet and gentle, in a sexy powerful kind of way. Yum. That is SO telling that he wanted to make sure Kagome knew who he was, but to call her "onna" was rude, and she rightly called him on it. Now, it seems you are leaving hints there is a master to your villain, as well as a master plan. This sort of mind game/twist smells of Naraku. The villain is looking forward to the time they all get blood bonded together so clearly something bad is planned. You have spoiled us so with updates. I want. I want. I want.
| Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 18:15 EST
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Great work! Keep it up and update soon!
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 10:29 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You must think all I have on my mind is this story -- what have you done to me? I woke up this morning thinking about it, and now am COMPELLED to ask another question. Kurama is worried Kagome will be upset, right? Because of the circumstances and the potion and all. Since Hiei wanted to be sure she knew him before procedding, will he also be worried about her reaction when she's back to her normal herself? Will he insist on staying with her until she wakes up so they can talk? That could be such a great moment. He could be prepared to apologise, and she would probbly thank him for trying to make sure it was good in spite of everything. (Hey this is KAGOME we're talking about, right?) Will the 4 of them try to talk now that the time has been taken out of their hands? Who will be next to mate with our beloved miko? Guess she'll be going to work as a newly-mated woman, huh? Will Hiei be openly escorting here this time? Is he going to feel guilty that she got snatched in the first place on his watch and get all paranoid? Can't wait for her to meet Kurama's family. How is Yusuke taking all of this? An awful lot has happened to HIM in just a few days, too. Keiko, developing feelings for Kagome, her getting kidnapped, having to step aside. Wonder what HE's thinking. And what will happen with Botan and Kuwabara? Their lives just got more complicated, didn't they? And will Sess feel the need to talk to the mates about being a little more careful about protecting her? I just can't wait to see what you do next!!! (But I promise not to review the next chapter more than twice.) :) Think I'll go back and re-read the whole story...
| Reviewed By: TheDemonQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 01:15 EST
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Okay, I am stoked to read more, I can't wait to find out how the boys react to Shippo! That should be quite interesting especially since he said son... they are probably freakin out right about now, and have no idea how to react, but all will be revealed soon I hope. Until next time, ja ne!
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