| "A Souls Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] |
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: Raizen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 04:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eh it was good, albeit a few mistakes with names and such ITs MIROKU aNd King ENMA and Yomi had his eyes gouged out,, and uh a few spellin' errors but i like it CONTINUE! BWA HA HA HA HA!!!! I am Naraku's offspring! Though muchmore uni-gendered!
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 22:32 EST
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I've got a suggestion no one else has made. Hiei should go first. You see, both Yusuke and Kurama (and Youko) know they want her and are attracted to her. They get into a snit with each other about who goes first, and then Hiei annouces "he'll go first to stop the others fighting over it" and Kagome agrees to that plan. But of course, you always remember your first (even guys do) so that opens up the plot to permit some emotional ties between Kagome and Hiei
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Reviewed By: LmKiTsUnE [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 22:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oops, I meant : I cant wait for the next chapter. update update
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Reviewed By: LmKiTsUnE [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 22:19 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I would like kurama to go first, and I can wait for the next chapter. update!!!
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 22:00 EST
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ooo sesshomaru is here interesting... well anyways im luvin this story and i think kurama should be first...
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: November 04, 2006 18:55 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHMIFUCK! AAAAHHHHHHH! SHIT! I MEAN I KNE IT WAS COMING WHEN RIN POPPED UP, BUT AHH!! WHEN IS YOU NEXT UPDATE? WHEN ARE THEY GOING TO FUCK THE SHIT OUT OF KAGOME? IS KUWABARA GOIN TO FORGET YUKINA FOR BOTAN? OR WILL SOTA GET HER? KAGOME'S MOTHER DOESN'T HAVE A NAME ON THE SHOW THEY JUST CALL HER KAGOME'S MOM...THOUGH THE PERSON(IN ENGLISH)NAME IS CATHY SO YOU COULD USE THAT ONE. YOU SHOULD LET KAGOME WORK AS A MESSAGE THEROPYS. IF RINS ALIVE ARE SANGO, MIROKU, INUYASHA, SHIPPO, KIRARA, KOGA, AND JANIGI STILL ALIVE? PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: blackXangelX101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 18:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think heie(sp?) or kurama should go first
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 17:52 EST
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Yay!! Another great chapter!! Oh, I am SO loving it!! I hope we get to read the guys discussion over "who goes first" in the next chapter!! I dare Yuske to suggest "rock, paper, scissors!" Will they discuss among themselves and then with her? Will she accidentally overhear them? What will HER thoughts be about who should be first? Gotta think it'll be Kurama -- Youko's gonna insist, right? And Hiei says he doesn't want anything to do with her -- will that change soon? Because that attitude would seem to put him last. Will he get all possessive? That'll piss him off. I'm looking forward to the evolution of his feelings and relationship with her the most, I think. (She's always such a great match with any of these YYH guys, but I always feel like Hiei needs her the most.) Love the way Kurama is thinking ahead and being rational, as well as a little sentimental about it all. Can't wait for him to bring up to the others the need for one of them to have a public relationship with her. That's going to cause some problems, ne? Of course, Kurama is the logical one for that with his Mom and all. And is she going to move into the apartment with them? Before or after the matings? They've got the moon cycle, right? Are you going to have them get to know each other a bit first? I like that, but at the same time am anxious for the lemons!! (Heh heh!) Interesting the way you've got her Mom meeting with Sess!! Didn't see that coming. Is he going to have a "talk" with the 3 mates? And I'm really liking the thing you've got going on with her powers. That's going to play into the action part of the story, ne? Koenma definitely needs to send her to Genkai for some help. When are the bad guys going to find out she's the one curing them and not Kuwabara? Will they try to get her to stop it? (Guess her being attacked could propel some Hiei feelings, ne?) So, WILL she need to be with Kurama in both forms? I like it that you're going to do the matings separately. She should maybe go on a "date" with each one. Oh man!! There's just so much coming, isn't there? I can't wait, I can't wait, I can't wait!! I know you have a life, and I know you just posted, but I'm begging you to post another one SOON! (Or two, or three!) Tonight? This weekend? Of all my favorite fics, this is the one I'm most anxiously watching!! You're great!! I'm your fan forever!
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar09 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 17:17 EST
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Have her do it with Yusuke first!! then we move our way up to the prettyer ones Yes Yusuke is a smexy beast but we want the smexy er to go first lol. I knew it was Sesshomaru I had the feeeling saying that it was lol update soon please! cant wait for them Lemons!!
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Reviewed By: Julietmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 15:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it should be Yuske she should mate with first.
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 15:06 EST
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Definitely, Kurama. I agree with Youko - she is a virgin, the experience of her first partner is very important.
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Reviewed By: Firedemon86(nsi) On: November 04, 2006 13:10 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I love your story and can't wait to read more. Please update soon! OH and please Kurama first!
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Title: maranjade@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: maranjade On: November 04, 2006 12:49 EST
Comment/Review:
I like it, I don't know if you know but you spelled Sesshomaru's name wrong. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 12:31 EST
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lol! I knew it! I knew it was sess! and that she was gonna mate with them, that alwayz happenz! Kagome's mom doesn't have a name, itz never revealed so feel free to call her watever u want. wat a quick update!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 12:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesh is there I love this please update soon.
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