| "A Souls Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] |
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Title: YEY!
Reviewed By: Syd Vicious On: November 04, 2006 09:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story so far!! Please update it soon!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 17:10 EST
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LoL. I really loved it! Great work! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 13:16 EST
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*"Whattttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt� 8230;…"* Well, it's not like she minded *THAT* much, considering the youkai in question - after all, to be a mate to a gorgeous youkai is quite pleasant, to be a mate to 3 of them is thrice as pleasant...Possibly... I hope...^_~ She just had no idea, *HOW* she's going to explain her 3 (!!!)boyfriends (or, rather, husbands) to her mother and everyone! ^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^ P. S. Do you really believe, that, between 3 of them, she'd have a time for work or something else?^_~ P. P. S. 3 or 4 mates? Yes, Youko and Kurama are sharing the body, but it would be logically to assume, that each of their souls needs it's own bonding.
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Reviewed By: Anonymousfanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 03:09 EST
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Why would they need some of Kurama's hair? What are they up to? Shouldn't she have kissed Kurama first, before they started talking? What will Kagome do? (If she agrees, she will be one heck of a lucky girl.) Please update ASAP
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Reviewed By: ShadowStar09 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 11:28 EST
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AWWWW! Poor Kagome being forced into mating with 3 hot demons lol I would have so much fun if that where to happen ROFL!!! I hope you update soon! ^^
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 10:07 EST
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Whos the bad guy!? I think i have an idea but I'm not sure.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 10:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to see who she getts with first will a coin be tossed and piss her off. *S*
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 10:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god you have to so update sso soon please I can't wait.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 06:23 EST
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Okay, just read the whole story through again. And I have a couple of more thoughts/questions. They really can't pursue another way to cure the guys because according to the villain they met, SHE will die if she doesn't go through with the permanent cure. So, she really doesn't have a choice with Yuske and Hiei -- what's done is done. The only question is whether she'll add Kurama in. (Might as well!) Also, I took it that by forming a true bond, they meant a marking, not just one-time sex. Am I right? And finally, I have to confess to being intrigued at the hints of Botan liking Kuwabara. Never seen that pairing before -- hope you follow it up. As you can see, I really love this story, and I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 02:50 EST
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TOO good! Loved this chapter! Hoo boy, what a curse! (Poor Kagome - NOT.) Oh, the possibilities for future chapters! Of course, why should she hesitate to kiss Kurama and Youko if she's already "doomed" to bond with Yuske and Hiei? May as well go for broke, ne? (Good thing Kurama has that 3-bedroom apartment -ha!) And is our villain planning to clone Kurama? He seems to have a personal grudge agains the YYH guys -- can't wait to find out who he is. Loved the way he was taunting the detectives about Kuwabara! A job at a pharmacy? Guess she could stock up on birth control supplies. Is Koenma going to be in trouble with a certain demon lord over Kagome's predicament? Or did Sess know all along since he seems to have given Koenma permission to contact her in the first place. (Or am I wrong about that?) Will Yomi and Shura be involved in the rest of this? So many questions -- so much goodness to come! I'm loving it! Please write more soon!! I'm going to sit back and read this all through AGAIN.
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Reviewed By: LmKiTsUnE [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 20:35 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for updating, man is Kagome going to have to think this one over. Lol update update update!!!
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 20:16 EST
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o my! wat iz it!? I can wait 2 c the next chappie.
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Reviewed By: fire_lily On: November 01, 2006 19:58 EST
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that sounds like fun. how will she take it in the next chapter. I am really wanting to find out.
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Reviewed By: XxhellzgurlxX [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 20:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ UPDATE SOON!!! i dont really have aby ideas 4 a job but if u dont mind it b kool if u put kagome n kurama in the same job lol(mixing work with pleasure ;Dlol) i would lov 2 see dat
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Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 08:24 EDT
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hello... i like the story.. its great!!!! lol.. and for the job... hmm... weiner hut??? i have not a clue what that is.. but it sounds funny... he he .. or the strip thing sounds apealing too.. lol... please keep up the good work!! :)
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