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| "A Souls Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] | | Pages (17): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 › » ] | Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 15:38 EST
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One more wicked thought -- had to share! Perhaps Takehiko's master knows who she is and about her past, and has her put in a room with ... INUYASHA with the potion's effects coming on!!
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 15:35 EST
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Hurray! Just read the latest through twice. (I can't help it -- I just have to do that.) LOVE IT!! It just gets better and better, and I don't know how that's possible. Straight to comments/questions: Wicked cliffy!! The curse's symptome sure do play right into her image as "the sick girl." (Ha!) Talk with keiko -- so tastefully done! Nice that you didn't make Keiko horrible. Realistic. Of course Kurama and hiei were eavesdropping! They learned some things, didn't they? Kagome is coming to terms with her feelings for the 3. Nicely done. Loved the look into Kurama's thoughts -- his worries about losing control and hurting her -- so sweet! Youko's "yes, yes, yes!" when the curse struck with her in his room -- dead on! Ha! Great, believable interruption. Thought I'd die laughing over Kagome's "ouch that's going to hurt." Hiei the voyeur -- who knew? Kagome heard Takehito call hiei "forbidden child," does she know what that means? I hoped it was Botan and not Yukina. Does kagome know she's Hiei's sister? Does Yukina know? (Stray weird thought -- Yukina/Keiko. Ice maidens don't need men, right? With Kuwabara with Botan and Yusuke with Kagome ...) Kagome's really having trouble with those powers -- can't wait to find the cause of that. Curse + lust potion, huh? OUCH! Who is Takehiko planning to put in the room with Kagome? Himself? His master? Read a review that suggested Kagome's two other friends each, separately, meet up with her with one of the other mates. That could be hilarious! Can't you see the 3 girls talking about Kagome's new man, and slowly realizing they're talking about 3 different men? Thank you so much for this chapter today! Any chance for another one this weekend? (Oh, I am so GREEDY!) I just can't wait to see what happens with the kidnapped and the rescue, not mention the 3 new "Dads'" reaction to their "son." Is Inuyasha going to show up? Maybe to help rescue her? Now that Kurama and Hiei know about him, it could really be fun! Keep up the awesome work!!
| Reviewed By: Fox_Hanyou On: November 11, 2006 14:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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| Reviewed By: Anonymousfanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 04:53 EST
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What if someone over heard Kuwabara's conversation with Keiko about the curse? The ones who did the curse thought he was the one, but if they over heard him telling Kagome, wouldn't that put her in even more danger. For Kuwbara's sake, although I'm sure they would even blame him, if something does happen to Kagome, even if it's not his part. How will things turn out between Keiko and Kagome. Will they be friends or will Keiko try to win Yusuke back, regardless of the curse. Thinking that after they do it, he be free or something like that? Wonder what Genkia knows about Kagome that she's not saying right now? What is it about Hojo that Hiei and Yusuke aren't saying? Is Hojo really engaged to Kagome's friend? It would be interesting to have Kagome's two other friends that isn't engaged to Hojo meet Kurama and Hiei. Before they find out about Yusuke. Wonder what they would think? One thing for sure, if anything happens to Kagome, whoever is responsible not only have to deal with three very furious protective guys, but also Sesshomaru and Kagome's pest friends like Koga. Will Jin, Chu, Ranku, Toya, and others make an appearance? Wonder how they would react when they find out all three of them are/going to be mates to one person? How will the guys react when they meet other demons from Kagome's past? Please update ASAP. How exciting, can't wait. I never had cyber cookies before. Are they good? One thing for sure, if you are one of those that worry about gaining weight, those cookies are probably just the thing to have.
| Reviewed By: Fox_Hanyou On: November 10, 2006 23:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oookay, so you decided on the lemon line up urself, thats fine ^_^, author writes, author chooses. yet again, i applaude this chapter and eagerly await the next addition ^_^ *gives you ur favorite treat* that definatly deserves a treat. Dessy
| Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 21:36 EST
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hmmm... how r keiko and kagome gunna get along? can't wait to c more action next chapter!
| Reviewed By: Hieisexymiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 20:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*twitches* YOU ARE SO FRIGGIN' EVIL! Leaving it right there! *dabs eyes with kleenex* Well as I'm sure you've realized with my ratings and previous reviews, I love this story and am always eager to see what happens next!
| Title: A Soul's Seduction
Reviewed By: Aymia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 18:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I think it's kinda cute, though you show a side of Keiko rarely seen though I can see her acting that way. Tai
| Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 17:04 EST
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Geart work and update asap please!
| Reviewed By: ShadowStar09 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 16:25 EST
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Awwww poor Kuwabara....heh well he did drag Keiko over to Genkais....I hope to see a update from ya soon! ^^ I'm to attached to it to wait to long lol maybe I can last a week...or maybe not lol cant wait to see them pretty lemons! *grins* Update soon! ^^ -Star!
| Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: November 10, 2006 14:33 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Is Kagomegoin to curse her out she should that bitch got it coming. I hate her with anyone!!!
| Reviewed By: LmKiTsUnE [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 13:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HHmmmm, Kagome might know what Keiko is feeling. (Inuyasha, Kikyo, etc) Anyways I love this chapter and you really know how to write a story. update please!
| Reviewed By: Icywolfflame [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 13:42 EST
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I agree whole heatedly with MadMiko....YAY!!!I love it when Kagome is eiher Midoroko-sama's desendent or 'reincarnation'....more when shes a decendant....allot of paradox-ial things though...i cant help but want Kikyo to be Kagomes ancestor as well though....if only for her powers to be sent through the line, AND the only reson why Kikyo was so 'powerful' harumph!I dont like kikyo right now..... -Woofie Flam...lolz
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 13:28 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry! My ratings for this story are always all 10's!!! I must have let the mouse slip for that 9 to show up!! I beg for your forgiveness!
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2006 13:25 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You make me so very happy! I never expected your chapter to be up this morning --yay!! Love the cold shower routine going on. Serves Hiei right for checking out her dream -- he should have known better. (Ha!) Funny with Hojo's parents asking her how she feels all the time and him pushing her to buy more vitamins! Is Yusuke going to tell the others what Hojo said about her having a two-timing boyfriend? Have any of them even thought to ask her if she had someone else she cared for? I mean, she IS a beautiful young woman, right? I really loved it that the guys had obviously already talked about Hojo being attracted to her. You covered a lot of ground very smoothly and subtly in this chapter. SO well done! What did Genkai see in her? Will she tell her during this visit? Love the way Kurama and Hiei discussed how Keiko might affect Kagome being able to be with Yusuke if she felt he still had feelings for her. (If Yusuke goes last, this is the perfect reason why -- Kagome wanting to be sure he doesn't permanently screw things up with Keiko -- making sure of his feelings.) You sent Kagome to talk with Keiko! Brilliant! This opened up another way for the guys to see there's something special about her. Loved the humorous touch at the end! Next chapter sounds great -- the talk with Keiko, more cursedness, danger, and a possible moment with at least one of the guys, ne? Questions: Have the guys even discussed how the mating was going to go -- I don't mean the order -- I mean basically whether or not it's a group event or individual? (WE know it's going to be individual, but do they?) Are they each waiting for "the right moment?" Will Inuyasha enter the story before she mates with any of them? And, the most important question I have: will there be another chapter this weekend? (Sorry -- I'm a pain in the butt, aren't I?) You did so much in this chapter -- I really liked the way you handled so many things going on. I had to read this chappy twice already. And I was so happy it was up. And now I'm so ... sad. Because it's over for now. And ... I have to wait for the next one. Oh darn, oh darn, oh darn, oh darn.
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