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 Reviewed By: TheDemonQueen [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 10, 2006 12:35 EST
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I am glad you are writing this your way. It will not only flow better, but you will be happier with it. I loved this chapter, and can't wait for the next one. I am anxious to find out how Keiko handles this, I know how Kagome will since she has been in a simialr situation, but Keiko hasn't... this should be interesting. I hope you update soon. Until next time, ja ne!
 Reviewed By: Firedemon86(nsi)  On: November 09, 2006 11:47 EST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I can't wait to find out what hppens next. Hopefully Kurama's lemon?? Oh then Hiei.... I just giddy over all the lemon possiablities running through my head. One question and please don't take this the wrong way. When Kagome goes to Genkai for training, please tell me your not going to make her like an all powerful, kick ass fight; cause lots of fics do that and I just think that they lose Kagome's character in many of them. So other then that little question, hope I worded it right so you don't take offence (cause I love your writing and this story), love this chapter and this story. So Please update soon!!
 Reviewed By: Raizen [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 09, 2006 02:45 EST
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I laugh at Yusuke, HA HA HA HA HA HA!!! Yes i am cruel, and ironically he is my fave character, but i laugh! AH AHAHAHAH! Oh yes wonderful chapter! Now must be off (Smoke billows in)...(smoke fading with Raizen Running away awkwarly)
 Reviewed By: ShadowStar09 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 09, 2006 01:09 EST
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awwww Hiei should have fallen off the tree lol. And thats kinda weird what if Kags had hard core sex with Miroku? EWWW! *blanches* gross....YAY! I am on the honor thing! I feel Special! and I'm number 3! WOOT!update soon!
 Reviewed By: Fox_Hanyou  On: November 08, 2006 22:50 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YEAH!!! Kurama won! ^_^ *dances* i still say i love this fic!! you've done so well at the unfolding plot that i feel like a hungry wolf every time i wait for the new chapters ^_^!! i know life throws rocks at you, but if and when you can up date, please do ^_^
 Reviewed By: TheDemonQueen [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 08, 2006 19:15 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am so excited! I am glad Kurama won... I would have voted for him if I had gotten onto this site sooner! Well, I have to go now I have a test tomorrow, and need to study! Until next time, ja ne!
 Reviewed By: Hoshi Phoenix [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 08, 2006 17:20 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story so far! Can't wait for the next chapter. Oh and my vote is for Kurama! :)
 Reviewed By: fire_lily  On: November 08, 2006 15:51 EST
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Is kieko going to start screaming at kagome that she stole her boyfriend? This was a funny chapter. I just hope shippo comes in soon.
 Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 08, 2006 06:49 EST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this lost cpater there are all related in omne way or another priceless.
 Reviewed By: Anonymousfanfic [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 08, 2006 03:49 EST
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What kind of trouble will Keiko cause? Why does Kagome's mom, want her to call Hojo back so much? Wonder how the other female amoung the group will feel about the bonding/mating thing? Wonder how the guys will react to having a possible grown up over 500 year old son, who happens to be a fox? Since Kagome takes the rightful place as one of the ladies of the Wstern land who will the other demons feel? Knowing or not knowing her connections to either Sesshomaru or the SD group? Will Jin, Toya, Chu, Rinku and rest mak an appearance in this story? Please update ASAP.
 Reviewed By: AngelGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 08, 2006 02:22 EST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Well I must say that I'm impress. Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. First year of college is killin me. Any ways the way the plot has turned. I relly hadn't seen that comin. Some of my friends who happen to be huge inu fans and aren't that much into fanfic has even gotten into ur story. So congrads and keep up the good work. Hope to red the next chap soon.
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 08, 2006 00:56 EST
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Sorry my comments take up so much space -- I'm just so excited about this fic! And I have to add a P.S. to my last review. I love the way you're portraying Yuske, too! The way he was teasing Kagome was too funny! Completely spot on for his character, in my opinion. Gee, I'm feeling a little sorry for him having to go last. But I think his time getting to know her will be lots of fun, won't it? Can't wait for Keiko to show up! With Miroku gone, it's nice to still have a hentai in the house, ne?
 Reviewed By: Shinu 13th Sage Sage of Pain(not logged in)  On: November 08, 2006 00:51 EST
Comment/Review:
You are amazing. I love it... Just one question.... I don't know if it's in the summary or not so I'm asking... What pairings besides Kagome and the 3/4 were you planning?
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 08, 2006 00:45 EST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh, I am SO happy! Another great chapter! Kagome's Mom flirting with Sess like a schoolgirl -- how funny is that? If they get together, Kagome's enemies won't want to taunt her by saying, "Who's your daddy?" will they? Didn't Kagome evr tell her family about Sesshoumaru in the Feudal Era? Trying to kill her and Inuyasha? (Of course, I guess Sess could have prepared Kunloon for that and smoothed it over by letting her know he never really hurt her.) BUT, since Inu was questing with her, I'm guessing he didn't/doesn't know about Sesshoumaru's dealings with the family? Or does he? (Darn these time-travel paradoxes!) How embarassing for Kagome to have the effects of the curse strike while she's sitting in the kitchen ... with the guys ... and Sesshoumaru. Youko is having too much fun at everyone's expense, isn't he? Ha! And I guess Kagome was changing clothes and that was why she was in her underwear when she saw the spider? Great scene with Hiei -- he WOULD cover her mouth -- and a teasing Youko. Small wonder she would have arachnaphobia (sp!)now -- she'll have to explain that to them, ne? Love the way she stunned them with her little explanation of when she met Sess -- can't wait for the whole story to come out. They're going to be so impressed with their mate, aren't they? Loved her Mom sitting down to talk to the guys. And her comment definitely laid the groundwork for Hiei to see there's more to Kagome -- great job with that! Also really like the way you made it possible for Youko to emerge without needing a potion. And Hiei telling him, "You are making me sick," when he commented on the Higurashi women having large hearts -- how funny was that?!!? So, Sess knew the curse would happen to the 3 guys and because of the prophecy, sent a note to Koenma to okay Kagome's participation in breaking it? Interesting. Did he tell Inu it was going to happen? Or is he going to throw a fit when he finds out Sess played a hand in getting Kagome in that situation? Glad Inu is not mated yet -- he can cause more trouble that way. (But gotta hope you don't pair him off during the story -- this isn't about him, right? -- Yes, I just like him as an antagonist -- still can't stand to see him all lovey-dovey with anyone else.) Shippo not mated either? Nor Rin? Looking forward to Kagome's reunion with them. So, is she not going to need to get a job in the Ningenkai after all? I would imagine her duties as a Lady of the West will take up some time. Can't wait to see what you have planned for her in that capacity. Interesting news about Kagura. Does that mean Kanna was similarly affected? You've dropped so many hints, and I am just dying to find out how it all plays out! And, of course, now that you've revealed the mating order, I can't wait to find out how the guys decide it!! That's going to be a great scene, isn't it? Next chapter Friday? Friday? I love Friday!! I'd work your night shift for you if you'd write TWO chapters!! (Yes, I would!)
 Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 08, 2006 00:19 EST
Comment/Review:
So, new character. . . Kurame... hmm, that must be Kurama and Kagome's son. I meant to type Kurama.
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