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Reviewed By: ShadowStar09 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 23:53 EDT
Comment/Review:
ooooo really good!! ^^ I like it!! ALOT!! ^^ hope you update soon!! oh and uh...it's Yusuke if you hadnt already been told. cant wait to see chapter 2! JANE! XD ~Star
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Title: A Souls Seduction
Reviewed By: O-sO-Fly On: September 13, 2006 23:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great start! hope you write more and update soon! hey btw is this going to be a Yusuke/Kagome/Kurama-Youko? IF it was it'd be soooooo cool!!! hey keep that idea in mind ok? Well you did good heres your appulase **more than a trillen ppl clap** and to make you more happy i cant tell if you spelled anything wrong cuz i cant spell my damn self!! I like your idea UPDATE SOON!!!!! i cant wait! 0-s0-Fly
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Shadow Maiden [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 18:23 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I saw a few spelling/grammar errors, but it was good, overall. I liked it. So is Kagome trained in this story (Or semi-trained) in her powers? I wonder what you have planned next. By the way, you will probably get more reviews if you allow anonymous reviewers, right now you have it set to registered reviews only. Anyway, keep up the good work, hope to see more soon.
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