| "A Souls Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] |
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 13:29 EST
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Oh, WOW!!! Fabulous chapter! Awesome lemon! I hate to hear you've been unhappy because your writing makes ME so happy. Hopefully the holidays will cheer you up! Gotta comment: loved Youko and Kurama's reaction to her thong, and the fact that they caught on to her teasing of Yusuke first. Also loved that they kept their link to her closed because of the great possibility of jumping her before the bonding was complete --a 99.9% possibility-Ha! Thank goodness they held out! Really laughed at her reaction to Yusuke going Commando. (I knew I liked the way you think -- I was thinking along similar lines for Hiei in my story.) 'Bout fell out of my chair laughing over Kagome's comment on Yusuke sitting behind her in the bed - "It was nice someone was happy in the morning." Whoa! How 'bout that blood bond -- reinforcing their marks was extremely erotic!! And yay! Now they can all go get her!! And NO ONE is going to answer that phone, are they? Heh heh!! Excellent way to end this chapter! You're a genius! Wonder who'll be the first one out of that bed? I am so looking forward to your next chapter!! You really, really made my day today!! (And I will probably go back and read the whole story through again at least once today.) This is such a wonderful and satisfying read. MORE!! MORE!! (Oh heck! I'm going to read it all again right now!)
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Reviewed By: Magiknight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 10:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh I've been checking this story everyday for updates!It was like Christmas come early today. I love that you gave kagome some controll in this chapter, and just think, she didn't even have to break out the sit necklaces. I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 07:17 EST
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Great story! You must update soon!
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Reviewed By: fairytales... On: December 13, 2006 01:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write the sequel soon... it is very nice ... :]
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Reviewed By: fairytales... On: December 13, 2006 01:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write the sequel soon... it is very nice ... :]
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 03:41 EST
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Had to read it again -- it always leaves me with a smile on my face. Ihope you get a chance to update soon -- I'm going into serious withdrawal. Can't wait for the Yusuke lemon and the blood bond. Will it be a free-for-all for her time and attention after that? Hiei can claim he's gone the longest since his mating, and he didn't get to take his time under the circumstances. Kurama and Youko can just claim they're too worked up because of Youko's constant teasing of her. And Yusuke can just say too damn bad, I waited the longest in the first place. (Or they can always rock, paper, scissors each night - heh heh!) Or they can each hover around and try to win her favor each day, ne? Oh, to be Kagome!! Still looking forward to more interaction with the rest of the Yu Yu gang. Kuwabara, Yukina, and Botan. a little Keiko, perhaps. Some Shizuru. Shippo needs to come back and torment his 3 "Dads." And, Hojo might not remeber what happened or his thoughts about Kagome running around with 2 guys, but he still wants her, right? She needs to meet up with her 3 girlfriends and him sometime. Wouldn't her mates like to know she'll be having contact with him again through her other friends? Did they tell her what Hiei did to his memory? I'm sure he wouldn't tell her about the nightmares he implanted, though. That still makes me giggle! And she's got to find another job. And be outfitted to please Sess. Perhaps some nice, formal, but dull clothing is what he has in mind, and she has them modified so they're slinky and "Wow"? He and Inuyasha can both get mad at her mates for corrupting her. That Miroku blood has to come out sometimes, doesn't it? I am still so enthused and excited about this story! Loving every minute of it! I just need MORE!!
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Title: yays!!
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 07:09 EST
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Kudos to you... very nice chapters!! lol... well keep up the good work.. cant wait to read when all 3/4 of them are together!!!MUHA ha ha ha ... XD
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Reviewed By: Starlet Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 00:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, a great chapter! I'm looking forward to the lemon to come :) I'm sorry to hear about a bump on your head. I hope you had a great holiday!
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: December 06, 2006 00:02 EST
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Does Hiei know/sense that Kagome doesn't remember their mating? Would it still count? Please update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: LmKiTsUnE [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 20:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Well, I dont have much to say. The end was pretty funny, them betting...(lol). Update soon so we can see how this turns out.
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Reviewed By: Cassial_Darkfox [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 18:25 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to read about Kagome and Yusuke! keep up the excellent work!!
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Reviewed By: babygirl20008 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 17:41 EST
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wonderful job. I can't wait till you update again. untill then see ya.
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 17:19 EST
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Lol! Great work! Keep it up and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: TheDemonQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 16:09 EST
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I can't wait for the next chapter. I get so into a chapter... and then it ends... it is really sad. I loved this chapter, and you had Genkai's reactions pegged perfectly. I loved your portrayal of Youko with his tails... he really would tease her like that once he knew of hre fondness for tails. Well hope you update soon. Until next time, ja ne!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 12:58 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurray! I have been waiting SO LONG for this chapter, and it definitely didn't disappoint! (Already read it twice!) Loved that Hiei and Kurama were jealous of her treating Yusuke like a hero. Glad they both went to check on her, too. Loved the way hiei "cleaned up the mess" --erasing Hojo's memories and leaving him with some nightmares. Heh heh! Loved kagome's thoughts about her feelings for the 3. Was a bit surprised she opted for the cold shower instead of Yusuke, though. (Can't wait to see what you have planned for the upcoming mating!!) Myoga's visit was great. Can't wait to see how Sess wants her to dress. Will her mates object? Will she rebel? The scenes with Youko teasing and tormenting her were SO Funny! Loved them!! And it was great that she teased him back! (And Kurama had to beg Youko to stop.) Genkai's talk to her about her powers was interesting. Loved Youko and Genkai betting on how long before the mating took place! And the way Yusuke was teasing her was so well done, too. You know, between Youko and Yusuke, they're going to keep her stirred up a lot, aren't they? Kurama and Hiei had better get with it if they want some time, too! Or maybe SHE'LL be the one to torment THEM. I am still so in love with this fic! Looking forward to seeing what new job she comes up with. After the mating and blood bond, the bad guy will return, right? I'm looking forward to more of the scenes you do so well with just all of them adjusting to being together. I really missed you the last week or so!! Hope you have more for me soon!
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