| "A Souls Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] |
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Title: Mistake
Reviewed By: AngelGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 10:33 EDT
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SORRY I was reading yours and another story at the same time and i gave her your review and she got yours. i was trying to get in the read before my computer goes bonkers again. What i wanted to say was STOP TAKING SO LOOOOONG. HEHEHE no really this is one of my fav stories. its the only one that has all the pairings that i want with kagome in one shot. SOOOO please dont tortore us any longer and update alot sooner. JA NE>
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Reviewed By: neer On: March 26, 2007 22:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U BETTER UPDATE FASTER THEN U DID LAST TIME !!!! THE story is sooo good how could u not update 4 such a long time :( its really really good so update SOON
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Reviewed By: DragonKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 21:24 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAAAAA!! I LOVED IT! GO KURAMA FOR TELLING KEIKO OFF LIKE THAT!!
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 21:15 EDT
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ahh so glad u updated... its been a while. i dint really remember wut happened so i jus read all of the chapters over again. luv it!!! keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: MidnightTimberWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 20:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that was a jammin chapter.... I liked it so when will the tension snap I can imagine Kaogme's look when all three take her like before. So when will the so called evil show its ugly head again? Update soon
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 20:32 EDT
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Oh my gosh!! That was awesome!! I'm so flattered you dedicated it to me, too. *blush* There was just SO much great stuff in there! Loved her "normal" outing with her mates -- had to laugh at them being jealous of the apple vendor. Then Hiei nixing half the clothes she picked out -- too funny. Oh, and the ice cream incident -- that little devil! Loved it when they beat up those guys and she realized even Kurama had contributed to it. Then, of course, there's poor ji-chan. Shame on Yusuke for teasing her! What in the world is the girl going to do?!!? (I'm surprised they let her out of the house!) So, she hadn't thought about the grandbabies yet, huh? Hmmm. Loved the party they went to. She doesn't know Yukina is Hiei's sister yet? And her miko powers are dormant? (Or is it that she's just too under the spell of their marks right now? Heh heh!) I can't believe Kurama answered Shizuru's question like that!! Naughty!! And Keiko had better watch what she says, hadn't she? This chapter was a real treat!! Nice and long and chock-full of good stuff!! I can't wait for more!! I noticed you kept Takehiko's name and threat alive. And the mention of Kagome's powers. And of course, all the yummy lemony goodness she gets to have now. Whoopie! More!
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Reviewed By: Dawn Illusion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 18:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice!! I was really happy when I saw you finally updated. Very good chapter too, I hope you keep writing and can update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 17:04 EDT
Comment/Review:
Great work! I really loved it and update asap please! :P
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 12:52 EDT
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This is awesome please update
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Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 23:36 EDT
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i love it! you have to update asap!!! i love the way you write and leave you wanting more!
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Title: what's next?
Reviewed By: lady silverfox aka mychelle 79 On: January 19, 2007 19:21 EST
Comment/Review:
please write more please good story!!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 01:13 EST
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Still completely loving this story!! I hope you get a chance to write some more soon! I need you to help me get my new year off to a good start with some of my favorite fanfiction. Hope all is going good for you and you find the new year full of inspiration and satisfaction!
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Reviewed By: AngelGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 16:58 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED UT LOVED IT LOVED IT!!!!! u really no how to draw the reader in and leave them in suspense. now all u need to do now is UPDATE. please and soon.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune12 On: December 30, 2006 14:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY...I REALLY HOPE U UPDATE REALLY REALLY SOON
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 14:46 EST
Comment/Review:
very good!!!! you wrote it exactly how i pictured it.. better in fact!! soo keep it up.... and ill bring cookies.. yay cookies!! ^^ ~Ja Ne Mysterious_Tears
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