| "Heart's Landfill" Reviews/Comments [ 1155 ] |
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Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 19:09 PDT
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O-O... ummmm, someone will save Sango, right?? Miroku? Anyone? ..Please? (I love Miroku! He really is amazing, and was always my favorite character in the anime XDD.. hes just so funny and sexy.. and hes just so sweet when hes serious
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 10:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Should've known things wouldn't go our way, we didn't get the whole " Miroku would be with Sango" but yeah... Well hopefully she wouldn't get you know what in the next chapter or just spill out were Kagome is... Either way Inuyasha will be by her side. (grins) Well hope you update and keep it up. Peace...
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Title: GOD HOW I LOVE MY "ISP"
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 15:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD HOW I LOVE MY "ISP" DANTHANG DIES FOR 5 DAYS THEN KICKS ON A SAYS YOU MAIL!!!! OOOMMMGGG HANG ON SANGO I'M COMING!!!! EVIL CLIFFIE WRITING AUTHORS!!!! GOD HOW I LOVE THEN;;;LOL WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT ONLY TIME AND MOR\E UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS^-^
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 03:58 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles* LOL poor Inuyasha... i was slowly getting confused myself XD and OMFG!!! SANGO!!! B'AWWWWWW SOMEONE HELP!!!
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2008 20:55 PDT
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oh no! poor sango! I hope somebody (miroku) gets there in time to help her!! And y is Inuyasha soo slow. Goodness he had better figure out all this mate stuff soon or else he might lose someone (Kagome) thats really important to him! Well update soon please! Great chappy!! Foxy Signing Off!
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 12:10 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! WOW! way to end this chapter! lol. you seriously are a genius. thank you so much for sharing your talent! you make people like me want to try harder in learning how to write great stories like yours!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: October 05, 2008 20:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ACK! That is SO not fair for you to stop the chapter right there! :( Great job, Yashi *lol* was cute as always with his "I'm not a pup! Blah Blah Blah!" I can't wait to see more.
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2008 18:53 PDT
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GAH!!! something bad cant happen to Sango D8!!!! Kagome will feel horrible. I need Inu to go beat the crap out of Kouga asap
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2008 17:58 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. But, my word Yash can be a DUMMY when he wants too. He is too smart to be that dense about what Totosai was trying to tell him. But, then again, he's one of the those types of people that can understand all of the people and things around him perfectly.....but be totallly clueless in his personal life, lol. I love your characterization of him. As for Sango....wow. She is in some serious trouble. But I have a feeling that smiling, easygoing Dr. Miroku is about to show what else he's really made of. I can't wait to see it!
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Reviewed By: Li!ttle Miss Lulu On: October 05, 2008 17:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you write Totosai! He is just so hilarious with the way he acts and speaks towards Inuyasha. So I am just pointing out the obvious to say that it cleary seems that Kagome is the choosen mate for Inuyasha. I love that. Now back to something serious. Sango. Please don't let that bastard harm her. You had me sitting at the edge of my seat biting my finger nails. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2008 16:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWW i didn't want it to end please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2008 07:28 PDT
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the September 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by artist/author, Inuyashloverr and author, KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://i286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction%20Sept08 /ikfic1st.jpg ~ Inuyashloverr & KnittingKnots Owners of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: MisfitBride [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2008 00:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... anything happens to Sango and it's your ass.... I will come after you! Great story so far, refreshing to see a different kind of villain than Naraku, yes i understand that he is the main bad guy but it's nice to see someone using another character. Good luck and keep writing! ^_^ P.s. the Overall Rating and the Enjoyment Factor may say 10 but really they're 15s.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 03:49 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Inuyasha's story was awful. Whoever his wife was, she did a real number on him. I just wonder WHY she left him, too. It has to worse not to even know what she thought he did wrong enough to be abandoned after only 24 hours of marriage. That was just an additional cruelty that she left him with. Good grief, these tow have been hurt badly. And now that they know each other's stories and how TERRIBLE they are, they should be able to see how extraordinary it is that they trusted each other enough to let things go as far as they have. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2008 22:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh oh Koga knows that Sango was lying!! Whats she gonna do?? Poor Inu and what is Kagome gonna do when she finds out Kogas back and looking for her? When is she gonna find out?? Wow anotha great drama filled chapter cant wait till the next one! Update soon! Foxy Signing Off!
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