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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 14:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so totally LOVE YOU! OK, I really LOVE this chapter and how InuYasha's dog won't let his human side make all the decision in his life. Especially stupid ones like just being friends with Kagome. YEAH! Thank You! THANK YOU! for sharing again.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 09:15 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Kagome and Inuyasha's feelings "the morning after" were so realistic! I don't care how casual a person is about sex, there would still be some awkwardness the next morning. And if something like that happened between friends, you add fear to the awkwardness, fear of losing any type of relationship with that person. And when you add the terrible baggage that Kagome has with sex....wow. My favorite part was the end, though, when Inuyasha was forced to admit to himself that things beteeen him and Kagome were much more serious than he wanted to admit. You did such a great job with all of that. As for Kouga, he is INSANE. I really hope that Inuyasha is ready to deal with him.....because he's coming. I can't wait to see what happnes next.
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 06:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that is now my most favorite chapter please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: oh yeah..
Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 04:52 PDT
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And I thought that last chapter was awesome (I think you said you were unsure about it, didn't you?) so yepp, i was satisfied (understatement of the week) XD.. oh, and I love the way OLDDOG333 refers to him as 'wolfshit'.. very appropriate, i believe XDD
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Title: I'm ba-ack :)
Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 04:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i haven't been reviewing, but my internet has been down! I just wanted to say that that was AMAZING! im soooooooooo glad that theyre finally together! its exciting! and i rele loved the way Inuyasha literally had no clue how he had gotten to Kagome's house; hilarious! lol, well, i havent slept in a long time, so im going to cut the review short and wish you the best! Happy Writings, and keep up the amazing work!! :)
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Title: WOW IT IS HOT IN HERE !!!!
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 23:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW IT IS HOT IN HERE !!!! TWO CHAPTERS IN A ROW WITH SO MUCH LEMONY GOODNESS!!!!@!!!! OOO MY IT'S ALWAYS AMAZING HOW THE MORNING AFTER IS SO FULL OF QUESTIONS ALTHO THE FIRST ONE,,,, "NOW WHAT DOER HE/SHE THINK OF ME" USUALLY HAS ENTIRELY DIFFERENT MEANINGS!!!! AND #2 WHAT NOW????? KAGOMES FEELINGS WAKING UP AND FINDING HIM GONE WERE DEVASTATING TO HER BUT HIM COMING BACK REALLY HELPED HER!!!! AND HIS LITTLE SPEECH TYPICAL I'M AFRAID TO COMMIT RIGHT NOW,,,, LOVED THE WAY HOW IT WAS CHANGED IN A FEW MINUTES TO ICAN'T LIVE WITHOUT HERhehehe POOR GINTA HE REALLY IS TRYING TO DO THE RIGHT THING.... WITH WOLFSHIT GOING TO TOKYO THINGS COULD GET MESSY BUT ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS^-^ OTES GET THE NAME RITE IT'S OLDDOG333 NOT Olddog333
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 22:46 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squels* i have no doubt that Inuyashs will keep Kagome safe from Koga!!
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Reviewed By: Little Miss Lulu On: September 06, 2008 18:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing! I had no idea on how you were going to write Inuyasha and Kagome the day after their little fun in the sheets, but you surprised me and I absolutely loved this chapter! At first my heart went out to Kagome when she believed that Inuyasha had snuck out to avoid her, but then you had a very good and nice reason for Inuyasha to do what he did. The way Inuyasha and Kagome talked over about what happened was very well done. Loved the cow joke, you had me laughing. It is good to see that Inuyasha is more than attached to Kagome.Your doing a great job. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: hopelessromantic_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 18:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow well i'm so glad inu didn't treat kag like a one night stand i hope the end up a couple in the end good chappie and please update soon
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 16:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter!! Although I would walk on egg shells around you... yeah... I fear what might happen. I'm enjoying too that, in an awkward way, he opened up a bit, he complimented her and, he is seriously thinking how serious this is. Yep, it's a threat too... but, deep down in his heart he is realizing that he needs her more than he would admit. Thanks sweetie, thanks for updating and sharing it with us. Hope your things are going better. ::huggggssssssss:
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2008 16:14 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 05:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been so busy and finally have been able to read the last few chapters.. they are amazing. My skin is still tingling. Thank you so much for sharing this.
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Reviewed By: ikikik On: August 29, 2008 21:08 PDT
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please update soon! this is one of the best stories i always look forward to reading the latest update...so please, please, update!!
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Reviewed By: ~Jasmine~ On: August 29, 2008 20:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter was...GREAT! Plz say your gonna update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 20:34 PDT
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Awesome! Loved it! I'm glad that they finally did the dirty deed and enjoyed themselves throughly. I hope that Inuyasha shows some tact on the day after. But is that hoping for too much? :-) Great stuff. Keep writing.
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