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Reviewed By: Eye's of Eden [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 19:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the way you use the "hate" factor in this chapter (hey that kinda rhymes!) to sort of emulate what Kagome's trying to say to him. That sort of thing where she hates what he's done to her because he can do things to her that she can't control (and you've effectively portrayed her as a woman who likes to be in control of her feelings at least after what Kouga did to her) but she just can't help but crave it. I also like what you've done with Ginta and how he's trying to remedy his mistakes. In my opinion, it takes a real man to own up to something like that. But don't tell Inuyasha I said that! lol. I would have given this a perfect 10 in the OVERALL category if you hadn't cheated me out of yet another FULL lemon. lol. I know i'm such a perv. ^_^ ~EoE
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Reviewed By: EoE On: August 28, 2008 19:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the way you use the "hate" factor in this chapter (hey that kinda rhymes!) to sort of emulate what Kagome's trying to say to him. That sort of thing where she hates what he's done to her because he can do things to her that she can't control (and you've effectively portrayed her as a woman who likes to be in control of her feelings at least after what Kouga did to her) but she just can't help but crave it. I also like what you've done with Ginta and how he's trying to remedy his mistakes. In my opinion, it takes a real man to own up to something like that. But don't tell Inuyasha I said that! lol. I would have given this a perfect 10 in the OVERALL category if you hadn't cheated me out of yet another FULL lemon. lol. I know i'm such a perv. ^_^ ~EoE
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Title: WoW!
Reviewed By: PanicMouse On: August 28, 2008 18:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the very few fanfics that I am currently reading and of all of them this is the one I am the most into! I love it! You are doing an excellent job and I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 15:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! You don't let me breathe with your updates!! Never get the opportunity to read and review!LOL Loved those two last chapters, there is a lot happening and -knowing you- I dread what is coming... because, certainly won't be what I want. Yep, to destroy Kouga and Kikyo!LOL At the same time, I'm afraid about Inu/Kag's reaction to "the day after". I'm sure that a helluva of drama is coming. They made themselves vulnerables, if you would call it like that, so they will start hurting each other. Or not... LOL Excellent chapters sweetie, excellent job! Thanks for sharing it with us!! :huggggggggs:
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Title: IS IT HOT IN HERE OR WHAT!!!!
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 11:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WELL THAT MUST HAVE BEEN QUITE AN INTERESTING EVENING,,,, HOW LONG DID HOJO KNOCK ON THE DOOR BEFORE HE FIGURED OUT THEY WEREN'T GOING TO ANSWER IT???? hehehe DID HE BRING FLOWERS,,,,DID HE TAKE THEM HOME TO HIS MOMMY????snicsnic WHAT WILL GINTA TELL KOUGA AKA WOLFSHIT.... OYEA WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO TO THEM IN THE MORNING???? ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" I AM OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS^-^
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Reviewed By: xyanblue On: August 28, 2008 10:26 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg what happened first thing i know she's at the door then the next thing there in the room i can't wait to see what happens in the morning. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon
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Reviewed By: Mela9898 On: August 28, 2008 09:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW just wow, I cant wait to see where you take this
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Reviewed By: Little Miss Lulu On: August 28, 2008 08:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They finally got down and dirty! That chapter was AMAZING! The connection Inuyasha and Kagome can so obviously feel, but at the same time feel compelled to deny it at times makes them being together even more great. You have me so curious to know what is going to happen in the next chapter. I love this story! Update soon.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 03:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... Just wow. I can't even think at the moment. So Im just goin' to say this... THAT WAS FUCKING AWSOME. Excuse my french. Well hope you update and keep it up. Peace...
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: August 28, 2008 00:11 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL i love that line 'i hate you' XD
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Reviewed By: mynera [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2008 20:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL. kagome so totally and obviously does not hate inuyasha to any extent. thanks so much for the update!
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2008 20:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter i can't wait 4 when the discuss their relationship PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Niiicko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 09:56 PDT
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Whoa! What's goin' on with Inuyasha's card? Who's doing that? x_____x;; I loved the last part. ^.^ That was so cute. Inuyasha picturing that being him and Kagome next! awwwww XD XDDDD Keep up the awesome work, dear!
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Reviewed By: 1love1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 10:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SONER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2008 10:03 PDT
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And here we are today, Ms Psycho-Bitch Jilter against Mr Two-timer Mafia Boss! Who will win the Greatest Shlock of the Year award? Your bets, ladies and gentlemen, your bets! And in lane two coming up, we have Mr Denial (shall we skip on the 'River in Egypt joke', please?) and Ms Panic'er'up in the blockhead contest, running head to head towards the goal! What an amazing competition, ladies and gentlemen! And Hate will be up next to make things that much hotter! Stay tuned for the latest news and plot twists! (grins right back)
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