| "The Price You Pay" Reviews/Comments [ 187 ] |
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Reviewed By: rennysusanto [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2013 06:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it... love it... love it... |
Reviewed By: saiyanwarriorprincess On: March 23, 2011 14:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow what an incredible story! i was totally hooked! i stayed up till all hours of the night, i just couldnt get enough! amazing! :) |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko ((offline)) On: November 20, 2010 02:13 EST
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100% awesome. I really enjoyed your story... thank you |
Title: WOWZA
Reviewed By: girness On: September 03, 2010 18:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was so amazing that I was glued to it for hours. I even stayed up until 1am before i decided to finish it the next day. Everything was amazing! Major kudos to you. Please write for original stories please! -venus
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Reviewed By: tspiteri1687 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2010 09:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just got done reading this story and found it extremely enjoyable. I like the story-line it was different from what I had previously have read. Keep up the good work and hope to read some more stories from you soon.
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Reviewed By: sdfssdfsd On: April 23, 2010 20:27 EDT
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bulma needs to figure out how to transfer the entire planet vegeta into her dimension..
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: ADancingFaerie On: April 18, 2010 02:43 EDT
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OMG she's alive!!!?? ack! honestly, from the past few (new) chapters I didn't see this one coming. Please, please, PLEASE continue to update and finish this amazing story! I remember when this first came out...i'd almost given up hope that it would be finished, but alas I am proven wrong!!! now so many questions to be answered, will bulma and vegita be transported back into their 'dimension' or will the opt to 'stay will bulma be completely okay? will vegita be okay? what about trunks? ack! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2010 22:00 EDT
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Love this!!! Keep updating!!! I want to know how this ends!! Good Work!
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Title: THIS IS A MUST FOR ALL B/V FANS
Reviewed By: VEGETA 'S LOVER On: April 13, 2010 15:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS SO O O O GOOD!!! PLEASE PLEASE GIVE US MORE, JUST DO NOT TAKE SO LONG! WE LOVE YOU!
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_the_Sayains [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2010 16:29 EDT
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Holy spam in my email! Guess since its all been revised I'm going to have to reread it lol. I'll get started on that this evening then ^_^
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Reviewed By: sdfs On: April 04, 2010 17:43 EDT
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read this years ago and just finished re-reading, very excited about new chapters!
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Reviewed By: Vegeta's Blue-Haired Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2010 08:40 EDT
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This is a great story! I can't wait for more revised chapters!
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Reviewed By: nutnatz [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2009 08:23 EDT
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I am very intrigued by what you have going on here and I would be very disapointed if you indeed never finished it. I loved the twist of the transport to the alternate dimention. It's a twist I had yet to see in all my years reading B/V. I hope I get to read the end
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 10:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! I'm glad you're back; I've been missing this story.
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Reviewed By: ADancingGoddess On: August 14, 2008 02:15 EDT
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So I just stumbled upon this story today...and finished it in a matter of 3 hours I was that enthralled (let me tell you, my eyes are a little sore from staring at the computer screen for so long). I do hope you update quickly, as waiting an entire month would be cruel and unusual punishment...absolutely wonderful! Finally an A/U that has originality! And is well written, AND has a great plot line AND...well, you get the picture UPDATE PLEASE, :o)
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