| "The Price You Pay" Reviews/Comments [ 187 ] |
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Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails On: June 18, 2002 07:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Got some mistakes in there again, but the story is still wonderful! I wanna know what he was saying, I do hope you tell us next time. :) |
Reviewed By: Bulma Wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2002 05:24 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Just read chap 6 - good work! I'm glad you decided to build a relationship between B/V before moving on to the romance. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2002 02:50 EDT
Comment/Review:
arg.. why do I always start reading these just when the last chapter up has such a clif hanger of an ending.. damn.. well needless to say I can't WAIT to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: louie On: June 17, 2002 10:16 EDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE THE FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!lol |
Reviewed By: Bulma Wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2002 06:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the good work!!!^_^ |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails On: June 16, 2002 06:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got a few mistakes in here, like "bellow" instead of "below", but the writing and characters are still solid. It doesn't hurt that you seem to update two chapters at a time. Whee! |
Reviewed By: louie On: June 15, 2002 20:48 EDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!! SO WELL WRITTEN!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: louie On: June 15, 2002 18:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is so AUSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U MUST CONTINUE TO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: louie On: June 14, 2002 21:53 EDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: louie On: June 14, 2002 17:43 EDT
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LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol |
Reviewed By: louie On: June 14, 2002 10:33 EDT
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This is a very well begening. Vegeta is still in character. You should DEFENATLE continue with this fic!!!! UPDATE!!!!! lol |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails On: June 14, 2002 07:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good solid beginning with Vegeta firmly in character, too. If there's one thing I can't stand, it's all the "Wow, Bulma's hot-- Hey! What am I thinking?!" stuff and this is refreshingly free of it. Also, I like the way you've depicted their relationship (or lack thereof at the moment). |
Reviewed By: Lynn On: June 18, 2002 23:42 EDT
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I'm really liking this story. Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 28, 2002 23:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man oh man, the tensions' building up and I can't wait to hear what Veggie has to tell her. Great chap ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2002 19:17 EDT
Comment/Review:
ohh your right.. things are starting to heat up :) I like the way it's playing out and can't wait for more :) |
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