| "The Price You Pay" Reviews/Comments [ 187 ] |
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Reviewed By: Winddancer On: July 12, 2002 14:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ilove this story. It seems like it would be more likley to happen than a few other fan fics would.Just keep on updating, I totally luv it. |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2002 09:55 EDT
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Phew! I just finished reading all 17 chapters in one go! This is an awesome story. I must admit that I was a little reluctant at first, seeing as the bond was formed without much want on either part, but it has worked out quite well and is a credit to your writing abilities.
I hope things start to progress a little quicker now, you have set the scene very well so far, and now I look forward to finding out what the mating ritual will entail. Good story! |
Reviewed By: Leilia On: July 10, 2002 00:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!!! I've read a lot of B/V fanfics...but this is by far the best!!!Update ASAP!!!!! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 09, 2002 12:20 EDT
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I really like where you are going with the whole energy thing, I think that's a cool idea. I also like that their relationship is going to be built on respect, and not just raging hormones. That their emotions didn't just suddenly change because of what happened, and that Vegeta is coming to terms with having to deal with her even though he didn't really want this in the first place. He's actually the calm one for a change. I'm glad I came across this fic and look forward to reading more. |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 02:09 EDT
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hehehe, good chapter if i do say so myself, so whats the next part of the ritual??? cant wait until next chapter woohoo |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 07:05 EST
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Yay! Good to see this back, it's been too long! Oh darn, guess I'll just have to go back and re-read the rest to be sure I'm properly caught up. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 08, 2002 14:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanx for fixing up #14. This time it was a pleasure to read and I enjoyed it. I hope your next update will be that much anticipated talk between B/V. Good job. |
Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 14:21 EDT
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The problem with chapter fourteen has been corrected. |
Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 12:43 EDT
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I'm on a different computer right now, and for some reason the word program they have isn't compatable with MediaMiner. I keep trying to get it to load right, but I can't figure out how to get it to work. I got chapter thirteen to work, so now it's just figuring out what I did the first time. Sorry about this big mess. |
Reviewed By: Bulma Wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 07:57 EDT
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I think there's something wrong with chap 14. Like the reviewer above mentioned - what are all those boxy things? |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla On: July 08, 2002 02:35 EDT
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whats with all those boxy things? i err got confused and decided to maybe wait to see if you fxed it up |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 08, 2002 02:05 EDT
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Very good, although a little hard to read at times. I can't wait for them to start talking. There's alot he needs to inform her of. |
Reviewed By: Ms2ry Angle 7 On: July 06, 2002 09:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I saw the summary and said to myself "dam, not another one of those three year stories again". However, I saw your reviews pick up and thought what the hell. Needless to say I have read all of your chaps and thought it was time to take my foot out of my mouth and now if you will excusse me I have to go garggle now!
Memo to me never doubt a creative and orginal writer. Great story, waiting for the next chap! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 05, 2002 23:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, so I reread #13, and you added a bit of closure to the chapter. Very good ^_^. |
Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2002 21:44 EDT
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Hey, to everyone that read chapter thirteen, the first file I posted was the wrong one, so you might want to take another look at the chapter. The first file I uploaded was an incomplete one. Sorry about that. My bad. ^^ I promise you that what I re-uploaded IS the real and complete chapter. lol. |
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