| "The Price You Pay" Reviews/Comments [ 187 ] |
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Reviewed By: Layla On: October 01, 2002 16:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is so freaking great!!!!!!!!Plz!Update!!!!!ASAP!!!!!!!!Keep^ the good work!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2002 17:41 EDT
Comment/Review:
oh very nice :) I like the way that Vegeta seems to be staying in character, and yet, being rather sensative.. keep it up, it's really nice. He's not mushy like in some fics, but he's not the total jerk he is in others.. yup that's a perfect way for him to be. The tough, bad guy in love :) He has his pride and royal arrogance, but he is a prince not a brainless brute :)
So I take it, this energy Bulma now has from him, isn't going to go away.. or at least not right away.. I like that idea :) I always liked the idea of Bulma learning to fight.. she's got the attitude for it, the calculating mind that would make one dangerous warrior :) On the other hand, I always liked the fact that she created amazing inventions that allowed Vegeta to get even stronger, thus making them the perfect pair.. Some fics can take it overboard with her fighting though.. I'd like to see her take on Krillian, maybe even Piccolo but making her stronger then that always seems a little far fetched to me :) I'd rather see her become strong, but no where close to Vegeta's power.. and yet, use the strength of her mind to make up for that small lack of power, having her mind make her more his equal then her pure strength alone..
eather way, I can't wait for the next addtion of your story, it's certianly got me hooked :) Sorry for the long review ;) I can get quite chatty when I get interested in something, and I'm sure interested in your fic here.. I think I'll go do more fan art while I wait patently for your next installment :) |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 18:22 EDT
Comment/Review:
man.. this really is getting good.. hurry up and update again *heh* I'm dying to read more |
Reviewed By: Jumpjetcity On: June 23, 2002 18:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story flows really well. I'm glad to see some originality also. Don't ask me aout the grammar or spelling I'm awful at both. I enjoyed the story very much and hope to see the next chapter out soon. |
Reviewed By: Jumpjetcity On: June 23, 2002 18:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story flows really well. I'm glad to see some originality also. Don't ask me aout the grammar or spelling I'm awful at both. I enjoyed the story very much and hope to see the next chapter out soon. |
Reviewed By: Bulma Wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2002 07:00 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Excellent Chap 9. A very original bonding method. Can't wait to read more! 0_0 |
Reviewed By: IneiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 18:47 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've totally fallen in love with this fic! I've been digging arounf FFnet for well over a year for fine authors, discovering only recently they posted here as well. I am pleasantly surprised when I landed upon your work. ^_^ I hope you update as soon as you return from your trip! |
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