| "The Price You Pay" Reviews/Comments [ 187 ] |
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Reviewed By: nanaseven On: July 27, 2002 22:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, just mentally up the enjoyment factor. wow, this is so good! i should have read the updated part earlier, lol! ANOTHER GREAT B/V FIC! BWAHAHA! see you sunday! |
Reviewed By: Ms2ry Angle7 On: July 27, 2002 11:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh, poor Bulma, apparently she forgot all good things come to those who wait (:
Update soon, I like it, I love it, I want more of it!!!!! |
Reviewed By: yume On: July 26, 2002 12:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhh! the suspense is killing me! i love your story~~ can't wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2002 02:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... and to think, I thought 16 chapters looked intimidating when I started reading this... but it's not finished!?!?! you NEED to finish this fic because I think I know what Bulma's dream means and I want to know if it's true! Keep up the great work! I hope you know what the rituals are going to be, but if you don't ... I wouldn't mind helpin you brainstorm so the fic will be closer to being finished! ;) Write more, please, because this is one of the best B/V get together fics I've ever read. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 23, 2002 11:29 EDT
Comment/Review:
The last couple of chapters have been very sweet without overdoing Vegeta's feelings and making him OOC. Very well done!! This fic is fantastic, can't wait for more. :) |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2002 01:23 EDT
Comment/Review:
Let the rituals commence already! Comeon, I'm dying here. |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin On: July 22, 2002 17:29 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I just finished reading the whole story, or what you have posted so far, and I love it. This is a refreshing change from the ususal Bulma and Vegeta tales (tails) : )
I know you just posted today, but a girl can dream for another can't she?
Waiting impatiently...
JadaKirin |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin On: July 22, 2002 15:31 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a terrific take on Vegeta's character...I can't wait to read more...
Jada |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 22, 2002 03:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bulma's not the only one. I'd like to know why he's pushing her away too. Looks like things are starting to heat up, so naturally I can't wait for the next chap ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2002 04:39 EDT
Comment/Review:
*lights a small candle and starts to whisper out a chant* "please continue, please update, please satisfy my insatiable hunger for more of your story" |
Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 00:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
thanx for the review brenda. i think i'm still logged on though at your house. do you think that next time you get on this site you could log me off your computer please? your review came up under my name. thanx. ~abbi (theblueone) |
Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2002 23:15 EDT
Comment/Review:
lol. i'm glad you enjoyed it, brenda. i think i'm still logged onto your computer. your review came up over my name. could you maybe log-out for me? thanx. lol. |
Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2002 20:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cant wait to read more. Very entertaining. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 14, 2002 04:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Veggie is so lonely and he misses his planet so much. I always love the B/V moments when they talk instead of just jumping in the sack. Pls update soon. |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2002 13:26 EDT
Comment/Review:
just keeps getting better and better.. I hope you update again soon! |
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