"The Price You Pay" Reviews/Comments [ 187 ] |
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Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2002 20:17 EDT Comment/Review: ahh.. that's much better.. The little added part at the end makes the chapter more complete I think :) not to mention the fact that I'm in a constant state of wanting to read more of this story.. ;) |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2002 20:04 EDT Comment/Review: The chapter was great! The sexual tension is thick, why not make a lemon to slice it? :) *licks lips* |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2002 11:07 EDT Comment/Review: I can almost feel what she feels, man that must be amazing.. to have such a close tie with a man who has power to distory solar systems *heh* I'd say that's a bit of a rush alright.. can't wait to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome one in pigtails On: July 05, 2002 09:57 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: A little short this time, eh? But I understand that you're busy. :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 05, 2002 03:24 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Thank Kami Veggie is ok. Funny how Bulma was able to feel his ki and sense that something was wrong. Can't wait to find out more about the Khon'daia na's effects on Bulma. Great chap!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 04, 2002 03:27 EDT Comment/Review: This is great. I wasn't expecting you to post anything for a couple of weeks. Excellent chap. Veggie went SSJ, if only for a moment. I loved the talk they had with each other and I guess that's one of the things I really enjoy about this fic. They are actually communicating with each other before jumping each others bones. Good job! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 23:03 EDT Comment/Review: This fic is awesome! I love it, what happens next!? |
Reviewed By: Piccolodork On: July 03, 2002 20:46 EDT Comment/Review: i love this fic a lot! i had never even heard of mediaminor untill cruddy fanfcition.net decided to be evil and break down. im really oe for piccolo fics, lol, but Vegeta and bulma fics are just as good! ur an amazing author! keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: Bulma Wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 17:34 EDT Comment/Review: Can't wait for the next chap!! |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 17:21 EDT Comment/Review: ack.. man you just love ending these on a really emotional moment.. that's good, keeps us coming back for more more MORE! it's kinda funny.. I almost know how Vegeta feels about having to speed things up.. I can hardly take it, he must be going nuts! *LOL* |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails On: July 03, 2002 11:13 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Once again, a wonderful job. I, for one, am also ecstatic to see it posted so soon, too. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 03, 2002 03:14 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ok, be that way. You're gonna string this alone till you drive me crazy. I loved it and I can't wait till you update again. |
Reviewed By: nanaseven On: July 02, 2002 15:15 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow! well, i finally got my internet back up and one of the first things i read was this fic! lemme tell you, abbi, it's awesome. it's so un-cliche! you've honed vegeta's personality into your own little *thing* while still keeping him in-character (very cool) and i am nuts over the idea of the positive and negative energies. nice racy scenes, by the way--i never knew you had it in you! *wink, nudge* keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails On: July 01, 2002 08:00 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Well, that should be "He wasn't the kindest person"... there's no such thing as "most kind" but that's my only nit this time. Sorry, I teach English to non-native speakers and mistaken grammer just glows red and begs me to fix it. Your story is great, and I'll try to be patient while waiting for the next chapter. I liked that Bulma was seeing Vegeta as I imagine he still sees himself. :) |
Reviewed By: miayu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 02:34 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh my gosh! i haven't read a b/v fic like this in such a long time. You have know idea how many fics I've read, and yours is certainly one that stands out!! Hey, I'll try to draw you some fanart art, okay? You can check out the art I've already done on mediaminer. Keep up the good work. I'm really enjoying it. I thought it was going to be another cliche 'vejita gores into heat story' but I was pleasently suprised. I'm also glad that you decided NOT to give Bulma extra powers. That would of cheapened it. Love it! Love it!
miayu |
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