| "The Price You Pay" Reviews/Comments [ 187 ] |
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Reviewed By: OujoNoSuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 18:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! Oh, i love this fic. I haven't ever seen the whole bond consept describe like this! I love it, please write somemore so we can all enjoy it! You're really talented. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 30, 2002 01:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! The feeling of their bond pulling them together, their thoughts about each other, Bulma's dream...This chapter was excellent!! |
Reviewed By: louie On: June 30, 2002 00:33 EDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is to good to be left unfinished!!!!!!! SO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2002 22:09 EDT
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i like the image. i was thinking of drawing something similar to that myself. i love that scene... ^^ thanx for drawing the pictures! |
Reviewed By: Amanda On: July 05, 2002 02:19 EDT
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I LOVE this story (and Geta too) I wished it was finished already!!! I can't wait for the next chapter, so keep writing! This is definaltly one of the best V/B stories I've read and there are not many out there. |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2002 20:46 EDT
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ok.. this is what I wanted to draw ever since I read your scene on the balconey with him glowing and stuff.. I'm no award winning artist so I'm quite pleased with how it turned out.. please feel free to put this on your site, or hand it out to friends or whatever, it's my gift to you for writing such a nice story :)
http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php?id=47249
I hope you like it, I enjoyed working on it :) |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails On: June 23, 2002 07:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Things seemed to happen a little quickly and without much reason here, but overall it's still good work. :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 23, 2002 04:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, the eyes glowing part is a real turn on. How did you think up this stuff? I loved their talk and I have to wonder what'll happen when they finally "converge". Great chap and I can't wait for the next post. |
Reviewed By: Goat On: June 21, 2002 23:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This may very well be the most original B/V I have ever read. |
Reviewed By: Re-o-ko On: June 21, 2002 23:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH!! I LOVED IT!!! I ABSOLUTLY LOVED IT!! YOU DIDN'T FINISH!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!! E-MAIL ME WHEN THE NEXT CHAPTER IS POSTED PLEASE! I LOVE THIS STORY I BET YOU A MILLLION DALLORS THAT THIS STORY WILL BE IN MY HEAD FOR THE NEXT COUPLE OF WEEKS!! ahhhhhhhhhhh! ( small_lady30@hotmail.com ) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 21, 2002 03:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my Kami, they're bonded! Oops. Great and different way to bring this about. Eyes glowing? I commend you. Great job. So now their bodies have to "converge" (hehehe)? Can't wait. Oh btw, I saw your drawings. Boy you are talented. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 21, 2002 03:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you are developing their characters. Vegeta's concern and Bulma's fear seem so real. They're connected now and Veggie is none too pleased about it. Great chapter!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 21, 2002 03:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm, looks like Bulma finally started noticing Veggie. She touched the orb, so I wonder what that will do to her. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 21, 2002 03:06 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe Bulma would feel guilty about the way she treated Yamcha. I mean the guy cheated on her for Kami's sake. Anywho, good info on the importance of saiyan bonds. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 21, 2002 02:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't you just love them. What a dysfunctional couple they make. So Bulma isn't that terrible to look at, eh? Looks like someone has taken notice ^_^. |
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