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Reviewed By: alsnd12 On: May 13, 2008 06:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I love it! Please keep writing and don't leave us hanging? :)
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Reviewed By: Fran_kit On: May 04, 2008 04:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good take on the BV relationship, the setting/storyline is addictive and inspired. Keep writing
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Title: Chapter 39
Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 12:33 EDT
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I'm not sure if there was a problem temporarily with MediaMiner or what, but chapter 39 seems to be working just fine now. If not, this story is also posted on fanfiction.net. Hope it works for you this time! Abbi (theblueone)
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 18:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, there seems to be some kind of glitch with capter 39. It's not showing up at all. Just thought I'd let you know. Your fic is wonderful!!! Can't wait to read ch. 39!
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Title: Chapter 40
Reviewed By: DarkSaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 23:03 EDT
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Yay an update! So now Vegeta's going to make a plan to rescue his lovely family, but of course, it's not going to be easy right? hehe can't wait to see what happens next. 'Rash'kin a sonat su ma. Skar shinta mun a kin'moshan... something's going to happen, and it'll definitely be interesting. Another great chapter!
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: DarkSaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 14:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I spent the last night reading all over your story, and I must say that I'm in love with it. I'm so glad that you're updating this story. It's unbelievable how good you are. And chapter 39 was really good, it's so beautifully written. I can't wait to see what happens next, the suspense is killing me haha! Don't stop doing what you do, you're making people like me dream. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 20:53 EST
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Another great chapter. I just wish they had found out by now who is the traitor is. I can't wait to read more of this great story.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 12:31 EDT
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I've just spent two days reading your story, wow i love it. i even love the fact that there are no lemons in it( and i love lemons) please don't wait to long to update.
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Reviewed By: darkprince32 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 15:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what he's sayin', but this fic is awsome and i hope you continue to write
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 02:29 EDT
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Hey this is a great read... I've read it before and just came accross it again... you did an awesome job with it... I can't wait to see what else you may have in the future for it... ^_~ of course if you have time... life has this way of getting in the middle of things
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Reviewed By: Trisha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 01:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i remember reading this fic like 2 years ago and i thought chapter 20 was the last chapter but then i decided to read it again cuz it was so good and i guess i was wrong. i really thought that was the end, i think a lot of people did. anyway its really good. i wonder what the hell is going on tho haha. how did bulma get there and i wonder where vegeta is, is he going through the same thing? is he gonna show up? i thought Prince vegeta would be mated to a saiyan female when u mentioned that mark on his back. and what would happen to prince vegeta (the one in vegeta-sei) if bulma leaves. i mean bulma is dead in that dimension right, all eathlings were right? so he'd be all alone then, aww thats sad. man its getting even better pls update when u got the time.
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Title: how dare you
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: April 07, 2005 12:23 EDT
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you evil hooker, i would have rather had a cliff hanger, but know you had to end it at a good spot............why am i complaining again? good chappy hoorah
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Random Reviewer On: April 03, 2005 21:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An awesome fic I absolutely loved it and I hope you update soon!
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Title: Chapter 31
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 08:52 EST
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I liked this chapter, it seems that if Bulma and Vegeta are in some kind of bond dream on earth that its to test whether Vegeta would except Bulma, REALLY except her as his mate. For right before they got launched into this reality Vegeta was subconsciously rejecting the bond, the fact that on Vegteasei he chose Bulma and protected her may mean that they can return to the reality on Earth....or does it...i'm still confused about that haunting mantra though: 'Rash'kin a sonat su ma. Skar shinta mun a kin'moshan… Rash'kin a sonat su ma. Skar shinta mun a kin'moshan…' What could it mean, their at war with a planet called Sonat su sei and in this chapter Vegerta mentioned the above line dircetly after talking about the destruction of Earth. Was Earth one of their associate worlds, and did the saiyans have to destroy it under the orders of Frieza? Why would vegeta repeat that chant in his meditation as well?
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Title: VenusLegacy
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 08:30 EST
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well one thing i like about alternate universe fics is the originality and the fact that you don't know what to expect. That was some twist you gave to the story i'm still trying to figure out what happened. Is Bulma appearing on Vegetasei a part of the bonding process, which would mean that both vegeta and bulma are both asleep on Earth. And what is the significance of Sonat-sei and the fact that Vegetasei is at the brink of war with them? I'm beginning to think it is a part of the bonding process, since vegeta uttered sonat in his meditative mantra when they were back on Earth. And why is their marking black? Black seems like a sign for something bad, like an ominous warning but what could have gone wrong to cause that mark?
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