| "The Price You Pay" Reviews/Comments [ 187 ] |
| Pages (13): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 › » ] |
Reviewed By: Veglma On: October 24, 2004 23:31 EDT
Comment/Review:
Are Vegeta and Bulma go though the spiritual part of the bond or is it as butterflyV says a side-effect of them be different races? Why did the third candle glow the brightly after the other ones burned out? What the He-HFIL does Rash'kin a sonat su ma. Skar shinta mun a kin'moshan Rash'kin a sonat su ma. Skar shinta mun a kin'moshan mean? And who in the heck is Sonat su-sei? Good luck in get over 100 pages! Time for me to wait for more chapters.
|
Reviewed By: :) On: October 20, 2004 21:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this is one hell of a story! i love it!! i cant wait until your next chapter comes out!!!!
|
Reviewed By: vegetaslindalou On: October 12, 2004 08:43 EDT
Comment/Review:
US+REVIEW=UPDATE. It is still great, and i can't wate for you to update again so i am giving another big thumbs up on this fic. so please.... update soon again. ^.^
|
Title: thr price you pay
Reviewed By: ccfleursdelys [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 08:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
such a great fic keep the good work
|
Reviewed By: vegetasLindalou On: October 09, 2004 13:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
It is sooooo Good. Please update soon!!!! Keep up the great job. I love your work!
|
Reviewed By: Dark Rain On: September 26, 2004 11:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, it's been a very long time since a fic has held my attention so raptly like this as yours has! You've done an excellent job capturing their personalities! I am so looking forward to the next update! Don't keep everyone waiting too long!!
|
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: September 26, 2004 05:19 EDT
Comment/Review:
This is really getting interesting now!!! I'm guessing that Vegeta's memory loss from the ritual could be from the fact that they're from different races and the was bound to be some kind of side-effect. Then again...that's probably too obvious!! LOL.
|
Title: YES!!!!
Reviewed By: harmony_22 On: September 20, 2004 20:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you.....I've been waiting for an update for a long time and it was more than worth the wait. Keep up the great writing. I want to read more from you!!
|
Reviewed By: MistressChaos [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 15:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! It's so beautiful. It's VERY original when it comes to the mating ritual, and I love that. I love candles *sigh*. Anyways, please update soon. I really want to know what comes next. Is he really going to leave her? I hope not. Well, Ja ne.
|
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: September 24, 2003 06:07 EDT
Comment/Review:
If you find it hard to access Media Miner, try and update the story on FF.NET instead for a while.
|
Reviewed By: sakura On: July 09, 2003 14:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You kept the characters intacted, that's a rare thing. much love for the story, great! keep it up, and give us more!
love, peace & punk rock sheep
sakura |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: April 15, 2003 07:26 EDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE THIS NOW!!! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: January 27, 2003 07:30 EST
Comment/Review:
Wow. That was just... incredible. Very well written and you captured the emotions so well. Good use of those mysterious words again... what do they mean? Looking forward to the next chapter :) |
Reviewed By: Sakura On: January 06, 2003 01:21 EST
Comment/Review:
It is very good so far. That was one of the best intupurtations I have every heard of a mating ritul. It is more refreashing then most of the stories about Bulma & Vegeta. All & all i liked it. |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 09:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kami... I am speechless....This fic is clearly the best I have ever read, I have read chap 1-20 and I just couldnt stop... Oh you must update it soon, I can't wait to read more!!!! |
| Pages (13): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 › » ] |
