| "The Price You Pay" Reviews/Comments [ 187 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hetchi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2002 20:36 EDT
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okay, a review for an update. |
Reviewed By: bmar On: September 21, 2002 20:01 EDT
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Your story is definately fun to read, please keep the chapters coming, I took way too long to get this one |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 21, 2002 16:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what an update. The marking part of the physical bond was awesome, especially the part where Bulma realized that the symbol was pulsing with her own heartbeat. I almost started to tear up. It also looks like Veggie has a softer side. I absolutely loved this chapter, although I almost missed it. If I hadn't seen the update on FFN I would never have known that a new chap was up. You see back in late July alot of fics seemed to have gotten lost. MMO kinda crashed and I couldn't locate any of my fave fics. So what you have to do is relist your fic again in the dbz section so they'll show up on the new fics page. Your update in august and this latest one didn't show up on that page. Well needless to say I can't wait for more chaps, and btw, the artwork is awesome. For whatever reason I can't seem to access the review box in the fanart section. Till next time TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: autumn On: August 16, 2002 20:20 EDT
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The rituals have started and they're very original! I really enjoyed this chapter and the idea that Vegeta himself is a little uncertain about everything too since he hasn't been through it yet either. I like the idea that they're truly experiencing something unique together. Great story! |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2002 01:42 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
och! Like you people with over a hundred need more reviews....lol
This just keeps getting better...: )
I really love the gentler, Geta...and I am fascinated by the Saiyan Rituals...
:::drools:::
More More More!
Jada |
Reviewed By: Dragon Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 14:31 EDT
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Very good. I can't wait for the next chapter. :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 07, 2002 03:55 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was some serious mental bonding. Your description of this part of the ritual made me feel like I was actually watching it happen. Great job!! |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2002 01:14 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story, I do...You have all kinds of tensions raging in this thing...I can not wait to read the next chapter...maybe get a little relief...
excellent work.
Jada |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2002 22:04 EDT
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This was great! Update soon. :) |
Reviewed By: autumn On: August 02, 2002 09:56 EDT
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Oh no! You're leaving it there?? What a cliffhanger :) Please hurry with the next chapter, your story is very enjoyable. |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2002 13:08 EDT
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Noooooooooo! Not another cliff hanger! You evil evil writer! You just love watching me suffer don't you? (sigh) pleeeeeze hurry with the next chappie |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2002 13:07 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noooooooooo! Not another cliff hanger! You evil evil writer! You just love watching me suffer don't you? (sigh) pleeeeeze hurry with the next chappie |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 17:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"So without further delay or hesitation, he began."
So ... begin already, Veggie-boy!! lol I just LOVE this story, Veggie's thoughts(they are SO him:), and everything about it!! heh. I was one of those that kept wondering WHY he had the tail(though I don't mind him having one;) ... and then I saw the words AU. I understand. What rituals will they have to perform!? PLEASE, write more because then I'll write more reviews!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2002 23:01 EDT
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i love this fic! plzplzPLZ post more ASAP
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: Layla On: July 28, 2002 22:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love it!!!!!!UPDATE!!!!!ASAP!!!!!i WANT MORE!!!!!!!!CONGRATULATIONS & KEEP^ THE GOOD WORK. |
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