| "The Price You Pay" Reviews/Comments [ 187 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: June 21, 2002 02:46 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this idea of the Khon'daia na. For once Veggie isn't going into a full blown heat. It'll be interesting to how you work this into the B/V get together. Very good chap! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 21, 2002 02:15 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jeez, Veggie can be such an @$$hole at times. He destroyed 5 bots just cause he was bored and needed to piss off Bulma for some entertainment. Oh btw, good chapter ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 21, 2002 02:08 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! I'll say it again, love your writing style. The B/V scenes are great. You gotta love the way Bulma taunts Veggie ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 21, 2002 01:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I finally decided to r/r. The deciding factor was that reviews skyrocketed so I figured it must be entertaining. I enjoyed the prologue and your writing style and I get the feeling that this won't be your average B/V fic. So I guess it's on to chapter #1. |
Reviewed By: Storm On: June 20, 2002 17:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I'm loving the story. Just finished chapter 8 and I'm hooked! You reilize that I'm now going to have to visit everyday until this fic is finished eh? In any case you have great descriptions, charactor development, plot line and I really like your overall style or writing. Cant wait for the next chapters!! |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2002 15:48 EDT
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hehe not my best but not my worst either.. hope you like it -> http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php?id=44881 |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2002 11:38 EDT
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Well I'm left thursting for more.. was that the effect you were trying for? ;)
hmm glowing eyes.. I think I may just try to draw that for you.. sounds fun, can't promise anything, but being such a great updater, you deserve the attempt at least :D *goes off to find her sketch pencils* |
Reviewed By: hachitajhii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2002 11:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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(font color="purple" font size="5")this story had back bone, i like the way you explaned the sayin(i hoped i spelled it right?)bonding and other rituals even the frezzer (ihoped i spelled it right?)thing. i can what 'till the next chapter. keep up the great work.(font) |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2002 09:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, at least we now know what was going on. A little, anyway. I look forward to seeing them work this out. :) Good job, as usual. :) |
Reviewed By: Carrie On: June 19, 2002 23:51 EDT
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I can't wait to read what happens next. Good character development. |
Reviewed By: Mary On: June 19, 2002 22:05 EDT
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Well, you've got me hooked. |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2002 10:54 EDT
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ohhh glowing eyes.. this sounds fun! I'm really loving it so you keep that fast updating going and I'll just wait here by my email program for the update messages :D |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails On: June 19, 2002 09:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Arrrrgh! You did it again! Well, like you said, you do update daily so I can't get too upset, but still.... I wanna know why his eyes are glowing! I guess it's part of this Moon thing (cool name you chose for it, but I can't spell it), but I wanna see more! :) |
Reviewed By: louie On: June 19, 2002 08:30 EDT
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UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!! I Love the frequent updates!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: louie On: June 18, 2002 09:35 EDT
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UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! U LEFT US AT A CLIF HANGER!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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