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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 16:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. Why the hell is InuYasha vomiting?
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Reviewed By: BowandArrow08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 10:12 PDT
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Whoa! You left quite a number of cliffhangers here! That was, at least in my opinion, one of the best chapters yet! I personally, haha don't like cliffhangers, but no matter how much i don't like them, they do give the story something "special", and more of a "sitting on the edge of your seat" type feel. I hope that made sense. So, even though i don't like them, i think they were well placed. Nice job! I really, really enjoyed this chapter. I think that Inuyasha is feeling nauscious because he is tied with Kagome, and SHE is the one feeling sick. You did a great job and i can't wait to see what the next part brings! Keep up the good work! And don't you dare let this story go! You have to finish it now that you have made it so good! Haha! .:.:Arrow:.:.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 06:39 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that they are all together again... but is christiano really dead?... did narek kill him?... really sad if he is... wht does narek want with kagome?... seems that everything was a trap... what will they do... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Title: chapter 23
Reviewed By: megumi192 On: June 23, 2008 06:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good, the suspense is killing me. Does Inuyasha love Kagome and what is Lillian suspecting.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2008 19:08 PDT
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Oh boy that was good...I am seeing your clues and I cant wait for them to get out in the open with the faily...big trouble there...but damn this is a great story and i love how u write them so well that none of them are OOC...I cant wait for an update so if u can please do it soon please and thank you
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty at hell (School) On: June 09, 2008 20:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is Kagome gonna turn into a Nightwalker and becoem the Nightwalker King??? or is the proper Nightwalker King some one we already know???? Baby teeth!!!!! Another good Chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 16:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh I did notice one clue you left, Inuyasha is sharing Kagome's sense of touch. After she pinched her arm you had Inuyasha in the next paragraph rubbing his shoulder like it was hurt. The same thing happened with Kagome's palm. So I wonder what that means? Whatever it is, I'm sure it will be good and I look forward to seeing what it is. Your friend and fan, Zach
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 16:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To answer your question in the start of the chapter, yes I am a guy, very much one if I do say so myself. Any particular thing that made me girly in your mind or just didn't want to assume anything?
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 14:27 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. There is so much going on that I'm losing track of things (my fault, not yours). I'm going to have to go back and re-read some stuff. But, having said that, I still know that poor Christiano is in trouble. I just hope that Inuyasha and the others can get to him in time. And I can't wait until what is going on with Kagome and Inuyasha becomes clear. They definitely have some sort of connection (the hand thing was a BIG clue of that, along with other stuff that has already happened). I will definitely be looking for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Ookami Hime Suriya On: June 09, 2008 11:45 PDT
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Oh neat!! - i already wrote my review, but i found something in a review that i didn't notice so i had to go back and read those parts - Inuyasha can feel Kagome's pain?! that's got to be something important, can't wait to see what happens with that...
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Reviewed By: Ookami Hime Suriya On: June 09, 2008 11:42 PDT
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great chapter - curious about nareks' new powers, and exactly what he can do with the blood stone - if anything. Im guessing that is was narek who found chris? You make a lot of spelling errors though. but other then that i loved it~! Update as soon as you can :) OHS
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 03:07 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one day?? im proud of ya ^__^ im all excited now XD Kagome hurtting her hand, pinching her arm, and Inuyasha feeling it XD OMG OMG OMG Christiano!!!! NO!!!
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Reviewed By: FullMetalChick1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 22:59 PDT
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So... Great story! I especially love the way you describe the characters in such detail! I also like that you make it clear that Kagome is average and some 'Gorgeous Babe' or something. Don't get me wrong, I think that the girl that the man falls in love with should have some sense of 'good looks', but being overly perfect is not always the way to go! Um...Oh yea, something I think that would make this story a little more interesting would be to have more scenes of InuYasha and Kagome's growing love for eachother...(if that makes any sense!XD) I just want to read a little more about their relationship i guess, but yeah, all in all a wonderful story...so good infact I could see this being a movie! So thanks for writing such a good story for me to read...I have been searching for a good one to read lately!
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Reviewed By: PLEASE UPDATE SOON! On: May 24, 2008 15:24 PDT
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I just started this story and I find it very intriguing. I love how you wrote this story. I cant wait to see how you bring Kagome and Inuyasha together. Please continue writing and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 13:21 PDT
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Come on girl! Bite the bit for just a little while longer and give the final push! Exams will pass too, same as the rest of time does; You'll be glad you hung on as well as you did in the end! Don't worry about the writer's block - its very normal to have in such a stressful time. A chapter for NW or BI from you are always very welcome, so take your time, tailor them, wait out the stress, and you'll see, it will all start falling into place again! This old girl is talking from experience here ^v~
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