| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] |
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Reviewed By: Breezie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 00:41 PDT
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Well great work as always but relax and stop and breath, if you need to consintrate on school then go ahead you stories will be here when you are done. Don't worry what other people say about how long you are taking to update at any of your Stories school is more importment,ok :P. It is bout time for inu to warm up kags take her freaking out to happend :D Alsome job now relax ok the stress isn't good for you ok sweety.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 23:44 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... feel bad for kagome being caught up in everything... but nice that inuyasha & kagome are talking to each other again... what or who will they encounter next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 20:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know what it is like to struggle with writer's block and I just want to thank you for not giving up and continuing your amazing story. My finals at college ended last Thursday. Now I have the nice long relaxing break, unfortunately for me, my nice long break ends this Tuesday when I start my first summer class. Plus I'm still working at both my jobs so I was never really on vacation in the first place but anyway back to your story. So Inuyasha's family is getting suspicious of Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship, particularly how they smell of each other. Is it only the non-natural Nightwalkers having this problem with Sesshomaru and Kagura, who are natural Nightwalkers, being able to smell Inuyasha and Kagome's scents more easily or are they in the dark too? Also, is it unusual for a Nightwalker to have sex with a human? I can't remember one hundred percent but I am pretty sure that after Inuyasha bit and slept with Kagome he was more angry with his loss of control, not that he had sex with her. So did Inuyasha break a taboo by having sex with Kagome or is it just an uncommon occurrence? Anyway, thank you for fighting the writer's block and posting this chapter. Good luck with finals and as always, I eagerly await the next chapter of your many amazing stories. Your friend and fan, Zach
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 14:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good luck with college, I hope things go well. Lovely chapter!!!
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Title: chapter 22
Reviewed By: megumu192 On: May 18, 2008 10:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, can't wait to see if Inuyasha falls even deeper for her and Kagome for him.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 09:17 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. And good, realistic view of the trauma Kagome faces. You're absolutely right; you couldn't see the things Kagome has seen and not be affected by them in some way. I'm glad that you addressed that. Also, I'm glad that Kagome and Inuyasha are speaking to each other again. I wonder when Inuyasha is going to admit that Kagome is his mate? Everyone seems to know anyway, lol. But, then again, he is just too darned stubborn to admit any sort of "weakness" easily. I 'll just have to wait, I guess. Good story.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 03:13 PDT
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oops i meant (from the accident in the cave) that they kinda mated but anyways, ooo take ya time.. and i understand the philosophy part... i couldnt do it, so i dropped it lol
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 03:10 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg Kagome had a melt down.. i think i would have had that melt down ages ago... but aww soft side of Inuyasha :P when Lilliana said that Inuyasha is carrying Kagome's scent on him.. it kinda sounded like (from the accident that they kinda mated... but anyways, ooo take ya time.. and i understand the philosophy part... i couldnt do it, so i dropped it lol
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Reviewed By: Ookami Hime Suriya On: May 11, 2008 11:20 PDT
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OOOOOH!!! I know what Fenrir is!! Not in your story, but just a Fenrir in general...this story was the first thing I thought of because I recognized the name... "The Fenrir is a ravonous wolf that is the offspring of the Norse God Loki. Fenrir is bound with an invisable chain, but is destined to break free at the end of the world, swallowing the Sun and biting the Moon. He then joins Loki on the battlefield where he kills the God Odin and is then killed himself. " I was so exited.... T_T
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Reviewed By: Kanna Mizuo Megami On: April 30, 2008 14:38 PDT
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AHHHHHHHHHHH!!! HOW CAN YOU END IT THERE!?!?!?! Ok I'm calm now. Well that was certainly a surprise. Narek has the blood stone… and what's with Inuyasha being able to go so long without Kagome's blood. I wonder who the real king is supposed to be. I don't know why but I get the feeling that it's going to be Kagome… even though she's not a nightwalker. Then again I could be COMPLETELY wrong. I cannot wait until the next update. Kanna
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 01:43 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kagome is doing fine... who is that man in the photo that they seem to recognize... what's up with inuyasha & kagome... they can't seem to get any closer because they are always so far apart... and the bad guys seem to have the upper hand... what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Title: commnets
Reviewed By: megumi192 On: April 27, 2008 16:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, just when the trail grows cold. My only question is are you going to use another stone like the jewel of 4 souls that can help Inuyasha's family out. Also when is Kagome going to admit she loves him and he going to admit he loves her? great job can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Title: "Enigma"_comment
Reviewed By: Quimera-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 15:23 PDT
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Miss Ji-an, I so much apreciate the dedication on this latest chapter my dear. I just expressed to you my most sincere feelings about this story (yes, because this is no longer a fanfiction, it has evolved into a story of your own). This latest chapter really showed the awfull waiting that our ladies have been submited too for 3 months. So frustrating...poor Kagome. She still didn't figure her feelings for Inuyasha. But i still wonder why inuyasha's body was still hot. Was it because he bited Kagome earlier or... something else? Hm...love a little surprise effect xD And yay! Finnally the stone happeared! I hope that now Kagome and Inuyasha can stay together a little longer. I so want their relationship to grow :3 And i really want to know wich Lilliana's memories have been erased, and the importance that they have...and who is the boy? OMG so many questions xDDD Well, update soon my dear! Love to receive e-mails notifying this fanfic :D they make my day.
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Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 13:00 PDT
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omg...on Narek's ring?!?! how're they gonna get it now?!?!? (=.=) anyways, yet another great chapter. update soon! Kimiko =D
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Reviewed By: fudge On: April 27, 2008 12:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kag's feelings are starting to show more and more, though i'm still waiting for some fluff haha. I hope you update soon!
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