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| "Nightwalker" Reviews/Comments [ 472 ] | | Pages (32): [ « ‹ 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 › » ] | Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 11:38 PDT
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oooh the suspense. I really like this story and I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Tenshi no Hinote [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 10:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Great chapter. Nice twist with the bloodstone. I hope they can find more good guys! I can't wait to read more!
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 07:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I look forward to reading more soon.
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 04:27 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
before Narek?? what the hell are you on about?? anyways 3 months... i cant believe Inuyasha was still kicking lol im happy Inuyasha is back ^^ and i was sooo happy when you updated ^^
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 03:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh god!!!!!! 3 whole months.... I would like a battle or some thing to brighten up my life... (3 months with only two people who can really understand you... start to go nuts) no wonder the bad guy has it... who was the night king before Narek??????
| Reviewed By: BEST REVIEW EVER! On: April 18, 2008 12:10 PDT
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I have just finished reading your story "Nightwalker" and...i am so addicted, like inuyasha xD The way that the characters evolved till this last chapter, was alarming. They all grew so much in 20 chapters, and i adore the way that they feel so at ease on Kagome's presence.A complete family.Your own characters are adorable, so easy to accept and to imagine...all of them. Love Rukiya and Claire! Their personalities are the most captivating, and i just adore every line they say xD Claire is so good hearted, everything she says is just to laugh out loud xDDDD Hm...as much i would love to say that i like Lilliana i have to say that i can´t stand her bad mood. LOL im sorry, it must be because my name is also Liliana and i so dont have that grumpy attitude. I do understand that her time during the war, when she was human, gave her the worst impression of the world and thats why she is like this. But on this last chapters, thank God, she was getting so much nicer, specially towards Kagome! That made me very happy :3 The romance of Inuyasha and Kagome is so tense...ahhhh, love hard romances ^___^ they're the most satisfying ones. I know, and agree, that you dont like love at first sight, because thats too easy on fanfics! But let me tell you a thing: a little more romance on their thinking and on their lines, besides the intense lemon parts, would suit them alot better now. Yes, they are having a hard time accepting this "instictive" relationship, but i still dont understand why hasn't kagome, an ultra thinking brain that she is xD, thing about..."am i getting in love with him?". I wont even say, that Inuyasha could thing that because.....he couldnt xD LOOOL Just couldnt, poor thing. But im expecting a lot of love in the next chapters! A little lemon with them again would be nice, in the future eheh xD, but im talking about realization on both parts, and a lot of protection coming from inuyasha...i just love when he protects her from danger ^o^ Daam.....what a long review .___. Just wanted to add that i like very much your way of writting. Its very detailed, specially on the lemon parts wich, i may say, are very very well writen. I read that you said that you still didnt like the way that they sounded, and i think that part of it, is that the action is sometimes a little confusing xD On some parts i dont even know if kagome is turned towards inuyasha, the pose that they are presented and location that they are on. The description of the bg during the action, and how it affects the characters is many times a very important point on this scnenes. Besides that, nothing very relevant...love the way you used Hotel California on the lovingly chapter that Inu danced with kags ^___^ and, that you could sometimes help a little bit more on the way that they are dressed xD sometimes i have a hard time trying to figure out their clothing xp Hmmm....let's see, talked about the characters, romance, way of writting... Yup, I think i didnt forget anything ^_____^ And with this i say goodbye, and wish soon lots of other chapters :D Hope that my review isnt too long and annoying ;3 Best wishes (Keep up the great work! ;D) A new addicted follower Quimera-chan***
| Reviewed By: bellabelieves On: April 13, 2008 22:07 PDT
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Your story is of a very creative sort; I enjoy it immensely. It reminds me of a series of novels written by Stephanie Meyer, the first called Eclipse. Maybe you based your story off it? They are remarkably similar much to my pleasure. If not I'd recommend you read them, it is fascinating the resemblance your stories share. Once again, I really enjoy reading your piece.
| Reviewed By: Kimiko Sakaki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 15:50 PDT
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EEK! ...wanted to read how Inu bited her. xD aww well, awesome chapter. cant wait to read more!!! Kimiko =D
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 20:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kewl, more things in store I see. Awesome story. She can say no all she wants to, but Kags likes it when Inu bites her, hehe. Update when ya can! ;)
| Reviewed By: InuyashaGirl08 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 20:06 PDT
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i sense exciting things coming up next chapter with the way this one ended, wink wink. haha. sad to see miroku and sango go though.
| Reviewed By: Soveriegnty(athellschool) On: April 07, 2008 18:34 PDT
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When her mind cleared, her saw six dead nightwalkers in the dirt. second her should be she... It's something natural bon nightwalkers do when they want to get stronger. you missed the 'r' in born... NO ITS OVER!!!!! Waiting for more!!!! not caught for reading yet...
| Reviewed By: Soveriegnty(athellschool) On: April 07, 2008 17:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
but he is horny
| Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: April 07, 2008 15:32 PDT
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You know I try 2 review every chapter but for some reason my stupid comp won't let me sometimes. Anyway I liked this chapter, it showed that Kags is having feelings for Inu now, even if she doesn't realize it. And yea I don't really believe in love at first sight either but I'm still getting impatient for some fluff. U know I also have to wonder if Lilliana also has beaf with Kags cuz Inu needs her and Lilly has a crush on him so I think she's also jealous. *shrug* but that's just what I think. And maybe this time apart will help Inu and Kags figure out that they do have feelings for eachother. Well update soon ok ja!!!
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 04:09 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. It's a dangerous situation for Inuyasha and his family, though. And I thought for a minute that Sango had been tuned into a nughtwalker, but I guess not. I'll be looking forward tot he update.
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 03:55 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm Kagome is going on her alone?? ouch, that cant be smart lol awww Sango and Miroku are going back?? unfriendly letter?? who should i hurt?? ^^
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