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Reviewed By: Little Rini On: January 22, 2008 13:34 EST
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DAMN! I NEVER thought I'd say this...... Write more about Hojo. I want to know what they do to his psycho self. I feel bad for Rin. When Kouga attacks, that's going to be her fighting old memories more than fighting him.
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 22:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good^^ I was kinda expecting it to be a lil bit longer, but it didnt affect the story, promise! ^^
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Reviewed By: Redi Hebi On: January 20, 2008 21:47 EST
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You are a wonderful author!!!! please updat soon!!!!! I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 02:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MMMMM The Mighty Lord Sesshomaru in bondage pants Need I say more.. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!! Now, all we need is him in a nice pair of leather pants..*DROOLS* Please update soon.looking forward to each and every chapter.. Loved the lime...
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: January 19, 2008 23:35 EST
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Awww...! such a cute chapter.. In the famous fanfiction words... 'le wow, le purr, Le Fluff' The fluffiness was really great, eh. Nice pants too by the way...I loved them, eh. ^¿^ . Good luck on the new story. I will be reading it definately. I can't let my favourite authoress down. Now can I, eh? * pardon the canadian pun* smiles! happy writings Chao Chickie!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 21:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol! I bet Kagome's mom is going to enjoy making her daughter squirm. Kagome could have got a fresh bra from that bag for her soiled bra problem... or went and bought one... but then that fun in the dressing room would have taken longer! They must have went in a pretty big bookstore... the bookstore at the lame ass mall near where I live is too damned small to navigate the isles with shopping bags in the arms... my living room is bigger than that stupid bookstore, but I'm going off topic... I liked the bookstore thing. I would also like to know when our big bad demon will get the guts to admit just how old of a guy he is... lol I guess it just hasn't sunk in for him completely just how accepting Kagome is of him. I hope that Inuyasha doesn't hit the fan when he figures out just exactly what happened to our little Rin.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 16:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I excited about the 'sex talk'. Kagome's mother is always warm and understanding. I hope she doesn't make it too hard on her daughter. Me and my mother still haven't had 'the talk' and I'm 23. I still don't think I could hear her talk about it! It's just so strange to think about your parents and sex. Uggg... :shudders:
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Title: Cuteness...like always
Reviewed By: Arry (aka. Sex Goddess) On: January 19, 2008 16:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KYAAA!!! That was freakin tooo cute! I can't wait for more I love the interactions between kagome it's just amazing the way you write, and the oranks have me on the floor laughing lol UWUC! Loves Arry
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Title: Awww again...
Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 15:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to tell you I LOVE seeing Inuyasha having these "daddy" moments with Rin. Is there really going to be "the talk" with Kagome and her mother? (eep)Sesshoumaru in a bookstore? I'm surprised Kagome lured him out of there as quickly as she did. The nerd in me wonders how much the written language itself has changed from Sesshoumaru's time to Kagome's. (Nerd moment over.) I really liked the hanky-panky scene in the dressing room. Nicely naughty. Loved it. Kouga... poor Kouga... it's one against many for him. (Awesome!) Thank you for posting so quickly.
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Title: She Who the Prophecy Foretold
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 16:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lolz. Oh yea, your husband will be sooooo jealous. :) I hope Hojo will get whatever's coming to him, oh, and that Mono-person too. :) Poor Souta. I hope you update soon! This story is awesome!! :):)
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Title: Hojo in deep poopie...
Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 21:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*hanging head* Hojo really stepped off the deep end. I guess unrequited love can make a fella crazy. Brainshake beat me to the punch saying this, but it was one of the first things that popped to mind... what kind of DNA profile ARE they going to find on that knife, anyway. ROTFL.... Is it going to be human or puppy? Something else entirely? The real heart-cincher for me was Souta. Sure, the grandfather scene was touching, but it's not as painful as the Souta scene because the grandfather is at peace with the changes. Lest we not forget that Souta is born of two eras, too. . . so I'm hoping hoping hoping he gets to use the well one day. Maybe it's a coming of age thing (none shall pass unless this tall?). Please for the love of everything good and pure, let him finish that puzzle one day. Maybe dad has that piece. All this time he's guarding *something*... and we don't know what yet. Kagome still has to find at least two more pieces of heart, too... nope, not forgetting that. Sess is such a horn dawg! I guess if it takes you over 500 years to find your soul mate, you're bound to have a lot of pent up frustrations to ease. By the way, I've noticed that you've been jumping from scene to scene a little more frequently than in the earlier chapters. I like it. It works. It keeps us on our toes. hehe... no bra... as if anyone is going to notice in the mall. I have to side with Sessh on that one. I don't know about the mall where she is, but it's been my experience that you can see far more fascinating things than a bra-less teen girl at the mall. (like Hojo in a dress maybe?) There is so much to look forward to! I'm particularly interested to see how the conversations between Sesshoumarou and Kagome's mother play out. Once again, you've delivered a good punch of action and left us pining for more. Thanks for a great read, as always.
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 18:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. DIDNT KNOW THAT, THAT was going 2 happen. he needs to learn 2 control himself. and she needs to get her hands on her bags. maybe a sweater will fix that. anyways update soon. i luv the story. ~inu- how come I'm not in the chapter? ~ tba- I'm sure she's busy. ~ inu- keh. ` tba- well.... bye!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 03:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's gonna be very interesting what happens to Hojo now. If the police decide to investigate the knife further and make a DNA-analysis, what will they find? Or will the blood have healed itself off from the knife? If they take in Kagome for questioning, they'll see she has no wound. Either that, or Kagome have to open up a small wound so he gets busted when they see the matching blood! I bet Hojo will end up in the nut house. *evil grin*
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 23:48 EST
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HOJO the Fruitcake! LOL I always knew there was something odd about that boy. You just gave me the perfect reasoning for it. *grins* Keep it up hon. you have a beautiful flow going, and I'm looking forward to seeing just what kind of craziness each group will get into next. DD
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: January 15, 2008 22:49 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm back! Muahahahah! I loved this chapter. *cue grin* It reminded me of all of my favourite movies from the 80's and 90's. quote from [80's]'Circuit': "Stephanie changed colour!" Think about the whole no bra moment. priceless. Sess made me laugh *if you don't know this movie...OMG!* (its the one with the robot and the dude off of police academy. he played mahoney) Then there was the moment where I cackled like the witch off of snow white... kahahahaha. I think this was the moment when everyone realized Hojo had gone off the deep end with a parachute and decided he forgot his cookie *aka: crazy persobn...beware*. ...um... that didn't really make sense did it?...hahehe ^^' ~.^ I loved this chapter. But this time I was sad to see it end. It shocked me that it was at the end already. I was wanting to read more. Alas, i must wait. I was like... What! its the end? *cue confused look* and that is when it reminded me of the original just-for-laughs comedy tour: "mommy... it's ovvvverrrrr!!" Today was all about the tv flashbacks...lol Happy writing and I hope I brightened your day... wow...omg... wtf... Two reviews for one chapter.. Gosh! you are special.. *cue sarcasm* JK! you're a doll! `.` InuPriestess
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