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Reviewed By: wind sorceress kagura On: January 27, 2008 23:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story its like the greatest ever!! i think sesshomaru is so sweet to kagome they should be together always! your such a great writer and i hope this story is really long because i cant seem to get enough! ^.^ by the way my email is demoness_of_the_wind_kagura@yahoo.com i would really like to know when your story updates!!!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 22:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's really nice that Sesshoumaru and Souta had that talk. Hopefully it will be the beginning of things getting easier for Souta to handle. I wonder that they the Higurashi family and Sesshoumaru will have something good to tell the investigators when they talk to them about Hojo. I have been wondering about what will happen with the blood on that knife when they test it and if they actually connect it to Kagome and then wonder why she didn't have a cut when they saw her... That lime was really hot. Poor Sessh seems to be finding out how difficult it can be to stick to one's own standards... but so delicious at the same time to wait for something so good. I wonder if Inuyasha is going to have an interesting dream... It must be nice to go to sleep while watching the stars...
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Reviewed By: Hate2LoveU [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 21:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story !!!!!
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Title: Sexy Lime Yummyness review!
Reviewed By: Arry (aka. Sex Goddess) On: January 27, 2008 21:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh That was hott!!!! Man what a lime that was yummy hehe literally I hope she is inspired to put sesshy delicious velvety steel in her mouth hehehe gods lucky Kagome. And Hojo is finally committed YAY! Now for exams Hope sesshy can massage well I'll bet Kags will need it. Plus more tricks in the feudal era I'm sure well I'm loving it UWUC hon Loves Arry
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Title: Ahhh.....
Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 21:11 EST
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I really liked the Sess/Souta scene. Sess is getting a second chance at being a big brother, and Souta gets a glimpse at a bigger family picture. I still think Souta will go through the well someday. He'd get along so well with Shippo! I found the "Hojo bites the white coat guy" scene very entertaining. Should he really be biting people while others think he's hallucinating about animals overrunning the mall? LOL Yeay! The authorities will be testing the knife... now that's something to look forward to. So Kagome finally got to show off her Victoria Secret purchases. That was so worth the wait. Don't let anyone tell you you're waiting too long for the lemon. The journey is just as important. I liked the humor moment where Kagome falls off the bed. One of the best characteristics emerging from this story is the balance between seriousness and fun. You got Naraku and his minions being all plotting and dangerous, while you got the boys and Inuyasha all plotting and ripping on Kouga, for example. You know just when to insert a little comedy, and that's nice. Oh... are we going to get Inuyasha sharing dreams with someone, too? (grasping hands together and grinning wildly) I await with baited breath!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 22:56 EST
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~sessh- uh.. tba's not here today. ~ inu- then who's writing? ~ fg- uh.. who do u think? ~ both-..... its obvious ~ fg- sigh- trick question. anywayz tba says keep up the good work and she'll be glad if u update. ~ inu- y isn't she here? ~ fg- i, am, not, phycic ~bye~ update soon! ~FG~
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: January 24, 2008 22:50 EST
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The dream sequences were great. Though, they do lead me to believe you might be cooking up a connection between Rin and Kagome we don't know about yet. I can't wait to see Inuyasha's reaction when he learns the truth about Rin's nightmares. Kouga's life will be so over. It's nice to know Hojo will finally get the help he needs. As, usual, can't wait to read the next chapter. I keep thinking I'll wait for a couple of updates, that way I'll have two or more chapters to read. But every time I see an update, I can't resist. I just have to read it. Pleas update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: redroseonblacksatin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 22:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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counting crows mrs potter true? and greatstorie by the way you are so truley awsome
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 20:23 EST
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Wow I have good timeing I got to read an new chapter right after if finished reading all the other 72...well almost one day never killed any one.......hehe....and just cause you said so I would like to thank lloveprettysilverhair......that is a long name...hehe................ok now I'm really happy I thought it was kinda stockerish the way Hojo fallowed Kagome always showing up when she was alone...*shiver* just creepy .....so glad he gets to have a nice stay in a padded room.............now the only thing Kagome has to worry about in her time is her energtic friends, a perverted demon, passing her finals, her talk with her mother, getting Sesshoumaru to ask if he can court her, creepy dreames about being some one else, and what ever Momoka is going to do to her for her imbarassment, she vowed revenge and stuff,(did I spell her name right?), not to much right....XD.....Well at least Hojo is going to have a nice nap.....hehe............I can't believe it hasn't even been three whole days in her time yet she still has seven more to go....that is going to take a while is suppose....well can't wait untill the next update even if your computer blows up I think I can wait for the replacement or something....XD........thankyou for writing........Nyuka..............Meow
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 19:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hojo...is a little demented. I know he's telling the truth about Sesshoumaru being a demon but to say things like that about Kagome,...wow! And the thing about it is, I don't really know if this is so far from the truth. Even in the anime, he shows signs of obsessivness. If the search were to go on as long as you have said it has, then I have to say that this is how I would think things would turn out with Hojo. Kagome could never let that boy be disappointed. She would die before she would hurt someone's feelings. You're being sneaky about Rin's abilities. I'm more convinced now than ever that Kagome and Rin have more of a connection than you're letting on. Great chappie! I love this story!
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 19:10 EST
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Oh wow... Kagome and Rin have this sister parallel psychic thing going on. I like that, and I especially like the dream sequence way it was given to us. Again with the Inuyasha daddy moments: I won't tire of them. Now that we know for sure it was Kouga's tribe that killed Rin, I won't mind if you rip on Kouga with the pranks with reckless abandon. Hojo... *giggle*... I hope you're not done torturing him yet. He so asks for it. I'm looking forward to seeing how you torture the Mokomoko chick. She's just as jacked up as Hojo, but in a more calculating way. Again, you've delivered a great read.
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Title: She Who the Prophecy Foretold
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 18:01 EST
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Awesome! Shouldn't the officers go to the Higurashi Shrine to ask for Kagome or something? But anyways, it doesn't matter. This is awesome. Will that Momo-girl be in the chapters later? Or she won't be in the story anymore? Please update a.s.a.p, this is awesome!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 16:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was very well done! The dream thing that Rin and Kagome had was really interesting. I am really curious about how they both will end up needing the information they got from the dreams in the future. Obviously Kagome can use Rin's dream to comfort the child and now she knows the truth of Kouga's involvement. I kinda feel bad for Hojo because although he is crazy, he's not quite as crazy as it seems. He would probably get misdiagnosed and not really recover because of receiving treatments for seeing things that he did in fact see. It would probably be better in the long run though for him to believe that he didn't see those things. This was a really great chapter and I think that doing that The Syndrome has helped this story by reliving "creative congestion" or something of the sort. :P Well now I'm off to read the update on that story and then check to see if you beta has any new stories I haven't read yet...
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Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 03:06 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im luving this! so much to look forward to in the next chapters!! i CANNOT wait till they interrogate Hojo!! what a headcase! oh, and the 'incident' between Sesshy and Kags in the changing room was awesome. truly! I also wanted to thank you for the review you left me. it means a lot to me! catch you later...^_^
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 21:47 EST
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Do you write real books by any chance??.....the reason I ask is because I like to think I've read alot of fanfic's but non have ever been 72 chapters long and barly two weeks into the story, I think is rather amazing how you can exstend one day for severale chapters I'm mean just going and leaveing the mall took five chapters, its also great that you keep poping in on the rest of everyone else, because I've read a few that just compleatly ignore whats going on in another part of the story yet I never really notice cause I just get to inthrawled in the story....probably just me.....even if you don't write real books you seem to write really great fanfic's and I bet you really could write a book.....its amazing you come up with so meny ideas to have each day not only different but very eventfull, and I got a feeling that we (as in the readers of your story) haven't even reach the tip of the ice burg yet, it really makes me wander how long this fic will extend to, gosh it has to be long for it to only be two weeks in the story and 72 chapter.....I'll be honest with you now I could not stop thinking about this fic untill if finished reading it up to the last chapter you wrote, which took a while since I'm a slower reader then most my age oh well I like to think I also read more then most my age...hehe.....I think Sesshy's kids are sooooooo cute with how there mini Sesshoumarus, Awwwwwwww I just imajin them...=-=...I can't wait to see how they are going to travil with so meny people but more importanly how they are going to get rid of the terribly dence wolf...sigh...and poor Rin if freaking out....don't blaim her really.............oh and the pathers ya this is going to be great I have my own theory as to how things are going to go.....THEORY: Kagura is going to some how get the message about Kagomes abilities to adentify the real shard of the jewel shard and they will go to seek her help, but because they are still in the present Inuyasha will have to go get her, (unless this takes place after there fun with the wolves is over it really would get messed up), Sesshy and Kagome arrive on the seen and the Pathers tell them of their plot and they tell them of how Kagura helped them so she becomes trust worthy to assist them, Sesshy beat the crud out of Koga and when the night of the new moon comes in to play it will be Naraku that meets his end....................soooooooooooo was in a good theory, not really I'm sure cause it was so vag and stuff, sooooooooo when is Kagome going to ask her grandpa about the story he was going to tell her before this all started, I have a feeling that all this is going to have some kind of indication in that story, which really stinks cause a lot could have been avoided if she listoned to begin with....oh well I guess I'll just have to see if I'm right when you update more, oh and thats other thing it looks like you are a consistanct updater and that is sooooooooo koo I'm glad I hate it when it I really want the next chapter to a story and it takes like months some times a half a year....sigh well I guess I'm done with this review since this if my first on to your story it is natully longer cause of the 72 chapters I didn't review for, I'm so glad your writing this wonder full story please continue to do your best and thankyou for writing it so please update soon.......................................Nyuka says MMMMMMMmmmmmmmmeow
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