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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: January 15, 2008 21:46 EST
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I just read your comments on the new chapter and had to write a review... I haven't even read the chapter yet...lol I know this is going to be my fav chap so far I can tell by the way you ended the last one... I love your story so much...! I want my review to fill you with bugs bunny and tweedy and all of those playful characters. Whenever you get discouraged...think of InuPriestess and this..... *cue evil grin* "Oh your so sweet, I could kiss you!" *picture the bugs bunny- elmer fudd smooch!* *cue evil grin and laugh* Have a great day!!! InuPriestess
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 21:17 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is the first chapter that has been done completely in the modern era. It was quite interesting to see how Souta an Gramps feel about Kagome and her time traveling. I feel so bad for Souta. I wonder if he will ever be told why a white dog might have red eyes lol. I liked the puzzle thing... it made me feel a lot of things, but one of those things was to get a puzzle and put my dining room table to use for a change! I would just have to find a way to protect it from my cats... I suppose that Mokomoko didn't get any blood on it... You didn't mention if she was still wearing it or if it got bloody, but it probably didn't seeing as her pants were OK and the blood was flowing while she lay back... That was very naughty of Sesshoumaru to keep Kagome's bra from her... and just about everything else he did with her in that stall... bad dog! Good thing Kagome's hair is long enough to cover those things... It will be quite interesting to see what happens when Hojo tells his story and there is no evidence anymore to support it. I'm sure the police will want to question Kagome... and possibly Sesshoumaru even though it's obvious to them that Hojo is a little off. Well I hope you can post the next chapter soon! I'll be looking forward to it.
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Title: review 71
Reviewed By: Arry (aka. Sex Goddess) On: January 15, 2008 19:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ye you naughty girl I was owndering why you haven't done reveiwer responses...but I forgive you I understand how the flow thing works. I loved this chappie tone hojo's crazy ass needs to be locked up already but Kags is amazing s usual. But sess needs more confidence damnit lol Your hubbyis reading your story now freaking awesome I tried getting my BF to read mine psh it's like trying a putll a tooth so I dn't try anymore buut he's awesome to read it LUCKY!! I'll be sure to tell Sess personally to come and spank you tonight for sure lol well UWUC Loves Arry Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 18:39 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for another wonderful chapter. I'm enjoying Sesshoumaru and Kagome in the modern era. Don't worry about the reviewers response. Anyone who complains doesn't really need to have your attention anyway. You just keep on writing and I'm sure we can find it in our hearts to forgive you. lol. What's your new story about? I can't wait for it. I love this story but I'm sure I could love anything you write.
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Reviewed By: Broken Tainted Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 17:58 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i just keep finding this story on a whole bunch of different sites, and I have to say I love it! For some reason the sever I use goes down but I can still read your fantastic writing. Your character interactions still amaze me along with the plot. I love your work! ^^
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Title: Awsomeness
Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 21:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great transitional chapter. Kouga's in for it, and I'm completely enjoying watching that play out. I'm also feeling a few ounces pity for Inuyasha for not having a woman of his own, and I'm proud of him for his current attitude on the matter. Hojo... dear little loony-toons himself... I never once had him figured for wielding a knife. He really is a beer or two short of a six pack. At least Kagome's gaggle of teen girlfriends are safely squirreled away in another store and won't have to see whatever is unfolding. Sesshoumaru just knows how to roll with the punches, doesn't he? I wonder if he's going to let Kagome out of his sight after this. I can just see him guarding the bathroom door, for example. It's a good thing he never got a chance to snoop in her Victoria Secret's bag. Yes, this story is developing nicely and at a very believable pace. Well done. I'm looking forward to the next installment.
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Title: Ultra coolnes chappie review
Reviewed By: Arry(aka Sex Goddess) On: January 13, 2008 18:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very intense! Whew can't wait for more. I really wan't you to explain her beast or whatever it is but I guess you will on your own time.The plan is getting better and better man I love this story hehe. I'm actually finally updating my story today too I hope you read it. Well UWUC. Loves Arry
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 17:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was ok. just that y did hojo have to come and mess things up? y couldnt he have just oh i dont know. dated momoko. she's a bitch. he's a .... uh... nice guy? ( whispers- he's a weirdo..) oppisites attract. and im still happy that kikyo died. -victorydance- finnally! someone actually killed her!!!!!! -stops dancing- everytimew she dies she comes back to life. it makes my life as a kikyo hater soooo much more difficult. update soon k? ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: January 13, 2008 17:17 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alas! Another Cliffee to keep me on my toes... hehe..! Bravo! I love this cliffy. Did Kags fall on the blade? Will she get more of Sess' Youki in order to heal it quickly? Will it then cause her to change even faster? I am most definately a cat right now who is about to become the favourite snack item for a dog named curiosity. LOL. You have fun with cliffys don't you? Aww. But that is okay because you do it so that we kinda know you are gonna do it... ^.^ I am glad to help with your up-and-coming stardomm.. "All hail the Queen, Sunset Miko".... Ahem.. I mean... yeah... *wink* anyhoo.. Chao!
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Title: great cliffie
Reviewed By: Yashaslove On: January 13, 2008 15:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh...Sessh is going to be pissed!! Great cliffie. But i'm dying here! Please update soon...today even :) A girl can dream.
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 14:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Somehow I get the feeling Kaede has one of them looking glass-thingies herself. How else would she know so much? But if that is so, then the question arise on what connection she has to Kagome's parents... I'm really curious about what will happen when all is done with Kouga's pack. Like Kaede said, what will happen when he figures it out? And I can't wait to see what will happen with poor Hojo. XD
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 14:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is getting better and better. I get so excited when I open my mail and see another update from you. I love all the mystery surrounding the transformations Kagome is going through. I can't wait to figure out what exactly is going on with her. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: January 10, 2008 22:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I nominated you for the dokuga awards =.* I hope you get it!!! You deserve it. Your portrayals of the main characters are très magnifique... n'est pas? I hope you win that way your ever-growing fan club will increase and then you can take over the world... *cue evil laugh* mewaahhahahahha... mewahahahah,,, *cough...cough...* meweahhahahaha.. I loved this chapter. I was slapping my forhead at miroku and sango with the kouga chapter... I happened to be drinking my organic soy milk at the time and ended up almost squirting it up my nose Q_Q hehehe !!! happy writing!!! oh, and I will gladly send you our snow.. But I believe it will leak on the way down...hmmm.. Thats too bad, I would have liked to see your face if a semi showed up and dumped a truck load of snow on your front lawn !!! hehehe..... I am so evil... Snowmen,,, in florida *ppssstttt... You are in florida right?* ..hmm...where are you again? some place hot right? or else that joke just blew up in my face!! hahahehhe.. *hic* anywhooo.... JaNe!! InuPriestess
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Title: If it's Victoria's Secret, why does she have a store in the mall?
Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 21:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snicker* Once again I'm sitting in front of my computer giggling out loud reading. Bravo! I'm really glad to see the Kouga pranks begin. Poor Shippou, trying to keep a straight face while Kouga gropes him. I think the funniest part is Mirouku... he's such a perv, he just HAD to compare. I really enjoyed this chapter. As far as our hero and heroine, the mall scene was priceless. :)
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: January 10, 2008 20:11 EST
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That was a wonderful chapter. I'm glad we finally got to the day Kouga's comeuppance started. That first phase was so funny. I can't wait to see what happens next. The shopping trip was fun too. Sessy-poo might as well get used to guys wanting Kagome. At least Kyo doesn't seem to live in a pink unicorn world like someone else we know. Keep up the fantastic work on this. I eagerly look forward to the next update.
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