| "She Who the Prophecy Foretold" Reviews/Comments [ 489 ] |
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 18:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, the pranks are getting started! :D I wonder what they'll do to him next. And I wonder how long he'll be out. Poor thing...
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Title: 69 (oohh kinky maybe a sess kag postion in the near future hehe) Review
Reviewed By: Arry(aka Sex Goddess) On: January 10, 2008 11:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was too cute! I most say I love the shoppingness with kag and sess it's just something about that is romantic when it comes to them especially in Victoria's Secret! hehe soo sexy can't wait for another lime and remember sesshy can't stop her next time you had kags say so herself and sess agreed. heheehe I do love kagome's exploring and with free reign!? mmm *ficgams* galore lol And the prank was ingenious can't wait for more but I have to admit I can't stand how kouga acts but knowing kouga has a big one puts not so clean thoughts in ppl's heads makes me ponder things I don't want to ponder I mean come on it's KOUGA! Ewwww lol But it's funny anyways. Can't wait for more!!! UWUC LOves Arry
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Reviewed By: Kimiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 09:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A few tense problems but overall I have ENJOYED what I have read so far. Very nice. I love a good Kag/Sess story. It's not enough of them. You definitely have good taste. ^^ Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 03:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an awesome update! I laughed so much from the prank they pulled on Kouga! I can't believe that Shippo kept his composure after being groped by that nasty wolf! He is really starting to act like a real fox demon with this trick! I think that's cool about Miroku being a good photographer. It makes perfect since with him being a monk... and one who seems to appreciate his vision. I think you know the paragraphs of elaborate explanation I hinted at there. There were a lot of other cool things (like the mall trip) that I would like to comment on, but I have some things I need to do and I don't want to put off my comment, otherwise I will not remember to.
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2008 20:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cute. sesshy dosent understand a thing and kag's helping him. so sweet. try to update soon. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2008 16:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh, it's gonna be nice to see what happens on the mall. :) Will they perhaps bump into a certain mad boy? Or a certain slut? Ooh, the possibilities! :D Man, this is gonna be one long fanfic! I'm guessing it's gonna be over 100 chapters. Ooh, but don't we all love a good long story? :)
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2008 11:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor sessh, i bet the car kinda freaked him out a little huh. i wonder if those two will suffer some discomfort with all the noise. yay soon phase 1 of annoying and humiliating kouga will soon go into effect. can't wait for that one can't you tell XD.
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Title: 68 review
Reviewed By: Arry On: January 06, 2008 21:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEHE very happy destiny loves the gift tried to find you something but it became quite hard to find just what I wanted to get that I thought you'd like. Ahhh the little lovers spat finally came was too cute I just love the dynamics between the two. And YAY! the plan get kouga is starting finally. Can't wait for more love UWUC(update when you can) Loves Arry
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 21:00 EST
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he heee heeeeeeee ^,~ it's so cute seeing them together... =) good job so far!
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Title: Cute!
Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 19:41 EST
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I love what you're doing with Rin. I have been feeling a little bit sorry for Inuyasha for being the oddball out. Giving him Rin to protect plot wise, he will be a happier hanyou. (to other readers, I am NOT suggesting romance here. He's no pedophile.)The "big dog" shirt was priceless. I got a giggle out of that. Thanks!
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Title: syoze
Reviewed By: syoze [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 19:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really great chapter. cant wait til next one. sorry cant really type 2 much, got a bd party 2 go 2. anyway later, syoze
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Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 11:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are most positively a god.
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Reviewed By: Little Rini On: January 04, 2008 12:20 EST
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Thank you for updating on my birthday. :)
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 05:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*wipes away drool* Aw, come ooooon! Can't they do the real thing soon? :) These sexual frustrations they have are starting to transfer! XD *looks around for her husband* Heeeere boy! ;)
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Reviewed By: InuAtashi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 00:08 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have been going nuts waiting for this chapter! Cant wait for the next one! Im getting really curious about Rin again, hopefully you'll reveal her secret soon. Like i said before, this story keeps getting better & better. you are doing a wonderful job!! TTYL....^_^
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