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Reviewed By: myangelamy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 23:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't normally get into the sess/kag pairing but i have to say that your story has been very intriguing. although it is painful waiting for the first lemon, the limes are written so well that i'm sure it is worth the wait. keep up the wonderful work, i look forward to the torturing of kouga.
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: January 03, 2008 22:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, you make me laugh. thank you. The part about Kags looking at a wang for the first time cracked me up. "it moved!" HAHAHAHA!!! *cough...cough* You nailed the innocent, never seen a wang before type attitude. It brought back my first experience with a wang. HAHAHAHA. I had forgotten what it was like the first time. You always make me laugh... hehehe... Innocence is so funny when it is their first time. How did you think of that> Do you remember yours? I thought the wang had a mind of its own...hehehe. I freaked out when it moved. ...*stops to ponder with finger on chin* kinda like the way kags did...lol *grin*.... ^.^ HEHEHE my favourite chapter so far...hehe... It kept away the winter blues... Here in East Coast Canada, we had 4 huge storms in a week and have accumulated about 2 meters of snow (2 yards roughly) and it is -2O'Cs or -15'F/-19'F. Very cold... Your humor made me forget the 10 foot high snow banks.... THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU... *hands over homemade cappachino* WITH SPRINKLES...hehe *wink* Happy writings InuPriestess (from atlantic canada)
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Title: She Who the Prophecy Foretold
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 22:22 EST
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Of course Momoko doesn't know. She's a whore and whores don't keep track of anything, they just remember if they had sex or not and that's it. She's an idiot. But I'm actually surprise that she's thinking about it and not about sex. Bravo for her!! This is awesome!! :D:D
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Title: 67 review
Reviewed By: Arry On: January 03, 2008 21:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! finally she touches sesshy's wonderous cock yummy lol. Can't wait till she gives him head you did say she wouldn't stop in her words next time and that she wants to make him feel amazing like he does her hope you keep to it. But simply amazing hon great job this time around once again can't wait for more! Loves Arry
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Title: Awwwwww
Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 21:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww... Inuyasha has a daddy moment with Rin. That was so unbelievably sweet we all run the risk of becoming diabetic just reading it. The panther demon really knew how to slip one over on Naraku. He's such and unbelievable deviant! There's a special place in the seven layers of hell for his kind of pervert. I hope the panther tribe keeps the upper hand. I can't help giggle a little bit when I think of anyone going after Inuyasha not knowing about the additional pack members beyond the traditional group. They're now up to 18 members, counting the kids and AhUn and Kirrara. (Uh... have a missed anyone?) Anyway, approaching that group would take a little different strategy than if they had never merged, don't you think? Glad Naraku busted that mirror earlier. Momoko... well, I almost feel sorry for her, too, as one of the other reviewers pointed out. I don't necessarily feel sorry for her pregnancy so much as I feel sorry for her baby. She invited the consequences with her actions; the baby is innocent. Wonder if the child is Hojo's? (Just kidding! We all know he only wants Kagome.) Maybe Hojo's just stalker-psychotic enough to have done her while imagining Kagome? I must be sick to find that possible scenario funny. Saving the best for last... Kagome and Sesshomaru. It's about damn time Sesshomaru got some satisfaction! I like how you can take an intimate setting and make it real with the details. This isn't some Fabio sex scene. This is reality with Kagome noting that Sesshomaru's size is bigger than the anatomy books suggest of humans. This is reality that they would have to change the bedsheets. This is reality that Kagome is not easy with describing in great detail just exactly where she wants his hands. What is fairy-tale is Sesshomaru's undying control and commitment to his value systems by not mounting her and screwing her senseless because he wants to do it right. It's both painful and touching to see that over and over and over. Painful in that each time you know the poor guy's getting blue balls, but touching in that he's willing to do it all for the love of Kagome. Yet, even if painful, I know that when the deed is done to completion, the build up itself will make it just that much more meaningful in the story. *sigh* Every girl wants to be on a pedestal to some degree. Kagome must be the luckiest miko alive. I hope that when the deed is done she doesn't blow the roof off of wherever they are, though. Is anyone else worried about the discharge of pure miko powers when they finally mate? Will he have an enormous power surge of his own? Dang, when you think on it that way, they might burn down the house or forest if they're not careful. I just hope she doesn't purify him into a higher voice. (grin) Again, great chapter. Well worth the wait.
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Title: Poor Momoko
Reviewed By: inuyashasgirl12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 18:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe Momoko is pregnant. I feel bad for her even though she tried to steal Sesshomaru away.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 15:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very awesome. It's so much fun to see what situations you will come up with our characters next. The scene with the panthers and Naraku is so disturbing in a great way. I have no idea how that will play out. I hope everything will turn out well but knowing our Naraku, he figure out some way to get a small amount of what he wants, even for a short amount of time. And the girl with the herpiegonasyillaids, he he. I can't wait to see what kind of mess she gets herself into. Her and Hojo both. So much torment, so little time...
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Title: I don't like it........................
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Kagome_lover_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 22:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I DON'T LIKE IT................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... .................................................. I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!And i really hope that you keep updating on it!!!! And have a very AWESOME New Years!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAVE A WONDERFUL LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~¢¾~Peace~¢¾~Sesshomaru_Kagome_lover_4ever~¢&f rac34;~
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2007 20:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, as promised, here is my real review. Wow! I love the heat between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. They are so sexy without being over sexed. It seems like a logical thing that they would crave each other so much. They've done so much but nothing can compare to the real thing even if you don't know what to expect for the first time. I can't wait to see what suprise Sesshoumaru has waiting for Kagome. I also can't wait for so many other things. I would love to know what the deal with Rin is. Also, I'm very excited about the party and what Sesshoumaru will do to that sluty girl (can't remember her name, starts with an 'm') when she tries something. The Hojo parts are so awesome. I can so see him pissing himself. I'm glad your mother and you are feeling better. I have been under the weather myself for about 2 weeks so I know how hard it can be to write and get well. I don't know how you do it. You update so often,...how? Well, I can always strive to update as often. Good luck with the next chapters. This is going to be a wonderfully long story and I want you to know that I have loved every second of reading it so far. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2007 15:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't been reading the updates because I've been trying to work on my own story. I'm trying to catch back up and I was going to wait until I was finished like I usually do but I wanted to say something before I forgot. It's not important but funny. I love the line 'I'm not even supposed to be here today'! I'm so glad I'm not the only one who loves the movie 'Clerks.'. I always love it when I see a fellow Kevin Smith fan. I can't wait to read the rest. You'll hear from me later on today if all goes well.
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Reviewed By: Machiavellian_Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 22:26 EST
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awww, leave us hangin' and wantin' for more like sesshomaru without kagome ^___~ haha you're amazing, dearest!
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Title: Freakin coolness
Reviewed By: Arry On: December 28, 2007 20:45 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOSH!! I hope she does it touches him finally it'll be freakin hott! can't wait till the pranks come into play and sango and miroku really do need a hut. LOL and Naraku's demise seems soonish hehe give me more and update soon Loves Arry
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Reviewed By: imanewme [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 15:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, you've delivered an awsome cliffe and left your readers pleading for more. So much to look forward too. . . so much enjoyed so far. . .loving every moment of it.
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2007 23:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry that people are rude and call you mean. I for one don't think that. There's supposed to be cliffie's and stuff otherwise the reader wouldn't have anything to look forward too. I know I've said it plenty of times before, but I truly LOVE the story and anticipate each and every update. So just brush off the negative comments. Those people are just pissy, cuz your doing something right and it makes them mad. BTW its snowing here and I know how much you miss it, so I'm thinking of you and will make a snowman for ya.. And I shall name him Lord Sesshomaru.
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Reviewed By: InuPriestess On: December 27, 2007 21:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry about the bummer complaints... I tried to make you laugh!! honest I did... *sniff...sniff* ~.~ *bashes bad reviewers over the head* Bam! Bam! @.@ That should take care of them. You are great! ^.^ You are fantastic! ^.^ You are a god!..... ^^' *psstt....* can I stop grovelling now? No more complaints even as jokes...*crosses finger over heart* I know there has to be a reason for what you write... So good luck and I hope to make you laugh in the Future... Ja Ne!
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