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Reviewed By: fallingphoenix On: April 21, 2008 21:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww...I don't know whether to smile and laugh or cry and laugh or all of the above. That chapter was just too sweet. Keep it up...I'm still loving it. :)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty(notlogin) On: April 21, 2008 21:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww so cute!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 20:19 EDT
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=] i liked this update =D finally sessy-sama and lady kags have hit it off lol it would be funny if lady kags tried to try to help sessy-sama by helping him to get her own attention XD lol
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 19:16 EDT
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ah this was so cute! i wonder what kagome and the others are going to think when they realizes that sesshomaru looks at her pictures online, and how will kagome react to the apartment the guys are making for her. I love your stories and hope to read updates to all my favorites soon (including another one for the syndrome)
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 19:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think the song fits sessh. as well as many other songs. ~sessh- no one has ever compared me to a rock... just a ice cube... or something like that. ~tba-cause ur colder than ice. but the thing is... rocks are all diffrent. but ice isnt always. but enough of that, i think it would be cute for them to spend sometime together. ~sessh-*thinks8 sheblushed from seeing my boxers? `tba-better boxers than berifs, eh sessh? ~sessh-uh.... ok.. ~tba-smile*oh well.. wats done is done.update soon! bye! ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 15:39 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sooooo good! Even the the whole "Sesshoumaru wearing a dark hoodie peeking around corners and stalking Kagome" but....please don't let it lead to how Hojo was with Kagome in SWtPF. That was just plain creepy! Oh and Shippou's back story was very sad. I hate those situations...I see it alot. But I'm glad Kagome and Shippou found each other. I'm really enjoying your story. Keep up the good work *gives thumbs up sign* (cheesy I know ^^)
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Reviewed By: a_MikoS_heartache [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 08:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! Very nice!!! I just recently found out about this fic and instantly fell in love with it. you have an extensive vocabulary. I had this idea, that maybe Kagome could hear Sess singing Akon's Mr. Lonely. in not sure how... maybe she could hear him singing in the shower or something!!! But wherever this story is going... I know that it will be fabulous!! Please keep it up.
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 00:53 EDT
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omfg omfg omfg omfg please update soon i must know what sessy does and how kags will act! and i wonder y inuyasha wants sessy to die so much!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 21:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how cute!!!! Poor Shippo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: April 15, 2008 19:48 EDT
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So good...so good! I really enjoyed this chapter if you couldn't tell. Shippo's story was sad with the foster homes. I know kids who have gone through stuff like that and it really makes me mad..you can place your own string of profanity here. I love the fact that they went to a carnival! I had a gift bought like that for me at one once as a surprise so this chapter brought back some fond memories. Please keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 15:49 EDT
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poor shippo, i wonder what he did as soon as he received his money? did he help out his nice foster parents, did he give kagome money, did any of his friends even know he would be a millionaire? poor sess having to go to a fair and sneak around to see kagome.
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 13:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally we learn about Shippo! That's a good story for him too. Sad, but good. At least Shippo's story gets a happy ending... as much of an ending as a 14 year old high school senior can have to their story. The thought of Sesshoumaru at the fair was really funny and I'm glad that he got another nice 'stalker date' with her. This time it didn't have a bittersweet ending. That's nice. Oh, yeah I can just imagine that bug burly guy from the panther demon tribe running a booth at the fair. I don't know if that's who you had in mind, but the thought of Sesshy having to ask a panther demon for anything, especially one from that tribe is kinda funny. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. The last present chapter left a tight feeling in my throat. Kagome is going to be supper pissed at Inuyasha once she finds out what he did... well I would anyway. I'd be pissed at them all.
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Reviewed By: kodiaqkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 12:33 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm addicted to your story. Wonderful and exciting. I'm interested to see how this ends up! I found it highly amusing that sesh would 'lower' himself to attend the fair. I can only imagine him creeping in the dark corners, trying to stay undetected. Funny mental picture if I do say so myself! Keep up the great work. I will be patiently waiting for more!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 12:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't usually rate, but your coordination of this chapter was wonderful...or maybe it's because I've finally found my favorite scent. Yup, sure did. Aw, poor Shippou. I know what you mean about the system, too. Just think of all the kids who can count on being homeless once they graduate. Kinda sucks. We now know Shippou's story, which was a bit depressing then the chapter began to lighten up. The true adventure began when there were the clandestine and unexpected meetings that Sesshoumaru set up. I really liked it. Sesshoumaru's adventure at the carnival, being able to be with Kagome, was all so beautiful. It didn't matter a bit that they truly weren't visiting each other. It was enough for him. It made him happy. I'm a bit confused though. Was 'Butterfly' what she had said? And if so, what was she referring to? I'm definitely reading it again. I'm hoping that these meetings will play a role with what is to happen next between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. sigh. And Inuyasha hasn't a clue of the things that Sesshoumaru has shared with Kagome. This makes me wonder what other things he has done for her. It has been four years after all. There must be many more chance meetings and gifts. I would hope so and it would be nice for you to share a few...hint, hint, wink, wink. You painted the picture too well for me to not do a little begging. The imagery was well done. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: inu_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2008 12:49 EDT
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i love your stories, everytime i get on here i'm always looking to see if you updated. but you have me on the edge of my seat waiting for swtpf. hope your writers block unblocks itself soon...i know how frustrating it is.
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