| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 12:26 PDT
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Awwww... not Quite Romeo spooking Juliet on the balcony, but eh, that's "The hEVAN" for ya. I can't wait till she figures out he was the one from that college party in the Prologue. 'Cause that was her, wasn't it? It's so sweet. ^_^
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 12:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 11:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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They are so cute! I love that he fixed his name on her phone to say the hEVAN. He's almost too good, isn't he? I wish she would meet some of his other family soon. I can't wait until she meets 'bubby'. That should be good. I can only imagine what that would be like. Then there's Inuyasha. It's always fun when they meet him and Sesshoumaru for the first time. Thanks for the update!
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Title: So sleepy...
Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 11:22 PDT
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At least he didn't get into trouble this time... He has so fallen for her, and she doesn't want to admit she has feelings for him too.. Very sweet - makes me want to sleep in some warm arms! Thanks for updating - I'd been looking forward to it!
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Reviewed By: Migoto [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 10:39 PDT
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Well that certainly was a tame way to get rid of his boredom. I was imagining all sorts of interesting escapades. I definitely I prefer this one though. I'm thinking either she didn't initially want to be a lawyer for the money or she needed the money for something. I seem to be remembering some kids back in, what was it, Kentucky?
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Reviewed By: rachainu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2008 13:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My mom died and not too long ago was the one year anniversary of her death and I was feeling really bad. But I started reading one of your stories and it made my day a little bit better. So thank you so much for writing the wonderful story that helped to get me through the day. I lost my internet connection for for like four months, so I had a lot of catching up to do. I had to finish reading Avouchment, read Vendetta, and now I'm reading Subterfuge. It was like I was in fanfiction heaven! But now on to this chapter. Did Evan just say he was "bored"? Oh no, what's he going to do now? lol. I like Evan and Valerie a lot and I trust your writing skills enough to know that this story is going to be great just like the others. I think it was sweet that Evan helped Dieter when he forget his anniversary! And before when he was teaching those children? He really is a great guy. But I'm curious as to what he's holding back about the night he had that accident. Does it have anything to do with Dieter and his recent release from jail?
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Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2008 09:41 PDT
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He's bored? This ought to be interesting. May I also say I love Dieter... yeah that's all. I hope your son is feeling better and that life is treating you kindly right now. Something I find to be sort of pathetic on my part is every morning now I wake up and check to see if there's a new chapter and then I check on my lunch break via my cell phone and then I check at night when I get home. I have become an addict. I suppose I should at least be thankful that I'm addicted to something that enriches my life and doesn't harm it... Thank You for your awesome writing and keeping the general masses entertained...(did i spell that right?.... oh well....)
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 17:16 PDT
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He's bored... isn't that partially what got him into trouble in the first place? Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 23:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWW poor thing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 17:08 PDT
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call V xD shes always buckets of fun!!! 8DDDDD ask her over for a slumber party LOLZ XXXDDD standing at the highest point of the statue of liberty would be fun, if i were a youkai xD, otherwise i'd pee my pants lol
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Title: (Sorry for my bad english!)
Reviewed By: darkcherryblossom [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 16:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Sueric, first of all I am going to thank you very much because every single purity story have mean the world to me.Every time I felt down your stories make smile and laugh another time. I thinki your stories are as good as the original manga. You make the characters seem real. I love the way you write, your characters, your plots, heck I love everything about your stories. And in the end all I want to say is thanks for sharing your universe with us, for updating frequently and for never giving up even when some persons were mean to you so...... THANKS!!! P.S. I hope your son feels better and everything is going well for you!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 15:25 PDT
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Uh oh...Evan and bored is NOT good. I hope he calls V before he gets into more trouble!
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 15:22 PDT
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uh oh...o dear. evan luv may the force be with u as u fight the pull of the dark side that beckons u. may the pull of ur boredoms devious behavior be lessoned this night as u seek to stay out of jail. lol did u like that sue? hehe lol cant wait to see wat happens next
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 13:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWW! Evan is the ULTIMATE sweetheart! I loved the past two chapters! So sweet & so Evan! I hope everything with you and your son is alright. Do give him my "Get Better" wishes :D Well Keep up the marvelous work! OH! and news from the front: I got a few of my friends to start your...saga, and THEY ALL LOVE IT! They're making accounts just to read your Series!! ~MSMND and Friends
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 13:05 PDT
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this is soo good! im glad ur back! i cant wait for evan and V to get closer and share their pasts with each other!!!
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