| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: Migoto [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 12:45 PDT
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I'm getting the impression that Dieter is the person Evan's covering for, though I'm still not sure what that is. Unless whatever he did in the car was some sort of parole violation (he did just get out of jail a bit ago right?). Personally, I'm surprised he doesn't want more alone time. I feel like he's always either doing something or hanging with someone. Doesn't he ever just need to breathe?
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 11:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh oh. Evan gets in trouble when he's bored. He needs Val to save him!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 09:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, no...This can't be good.
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 08:40 PDT
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I'm with Val... he's bored? Oh, hell...
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 05:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evan really is a sweetie and understands the in's and outs of being famous - I love that he wants to do something for those kids :) Hope you are doing better now :) Another fantastic chappie .
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 21:58 PDT
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And this is why Gin can say that she's proud of her boy. He's not the complete pot-head drunk that most people see him as. And with his youkai heritage, it doesn't really affect him in the long term. Maybe next time Valerie can actually sit in on one of the lessons, maybe with a red rose in the end? Are all the kids doing piano (or guitar), there are other instruments out there, including the voice, though the piano is the most basic. I bet Valerie would have a wonderful singing voice! ^_^ Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 20:00 PDT
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Great job! Keep up the excellent work and update soon please! ^_^
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Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 19:57 PDT
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OMG I am so glad to see that you're back! Does this mean that you're son is feeling better? I really hope so. When I sprained my ankle it hurt so bad, I can't imagine what it was like to have something broken! Ouch! He must be a brave boy...Anyway, thank you so much for gracing us with your awesome presence once again! I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 17:00 PDT
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I absolutely love Nat King Cole and that song :) good chapter I like seeing my man with a sweet side to him ;) If I was a talented artist I would draw a picture of the little girl trying to push Evan. That is one of the sweetest scenes! Maybe I can write a song for this fic. lol that is one thing I am GOOD at ^^ Ja! until next time
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 14:56 PDT
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i frickin luv Evan!!!! luv luv luvvvvv him! tomorrow is so far away :-( alas i yearn for the next chapter. onward! lol great chapter
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 13:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Awww...how cute! But I can't wait to see Valerie beat him for it later, lol. Nice update! ~Amber
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 09:45 PDT
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I caught that. V and her daughter who is seven @_@ I'm still thinking that play she wanted to go to was her child's. Evan is such a nice guy, and letting V see this side of him shall up his chances with her damnit DX he still needs to think of a way to get rid of that tweeb of a fiance without doing something illegal lol.
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Reviewed By: Migoto [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 08:56 PDT
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Honestly, I thought he was going to be visiting the victim of his accident in the hospital, but this wasn't surprising. I'm curious to know why he feels like he has to be the screw-up. I've never really had a rebellious side, and I love volunteering with children. So if I had the money to just hang out with children all day every day, I'd do it in a heartbeat. It's interesting that he only allows himself this simple pleasure once a week.
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 08:51 PDT
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OMG! I wanna glomp Evan SOOOOO much right now! I mean, how SWEET was he with those kids? Oh, and seriosuly... Marvin's never given her a single damn flower? Not even a rose on valentine's day?! How bloody frigid is HE? C'mon, Val, switch to Evan, you knwo you wanna!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 07:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HE'S SO CUTE!!! It makes you wonder where all the good men are. If I would V, the press wouldn't have to eat him with a spoon, because I'd do it first. Thanks for the new chapter.
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