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| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] | | Pages (158): [ « ‹ 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 › » ] | Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 00:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know I'm driving on my way home and I think, you know I wonder if Sueric has updated, it's been ages (for your VERY regular updates(although I know you said that you had stuff on...)) and here I find out that you have a new update... VERY COOL!!!! Great chapter... It's funny because I think that even if Evan had all this stuff it wouldn't make him under the influence, he would have a fabulous metabolism...
| Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 22:41 PDT
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Heh, that was a sad, uninformative, rudundant series of interviews. Well, what did Val expect, they were all drunk and high! Keep up the good work, dark
| Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 15:56 PDT
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*wouldn't want*
| Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 15:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh... it seems like the clan is covering for someone...I wonder who it could be. It doesn't surprise me that Evan, being the sweetheart he is, would want someone he cared about to take the blame for something of such caliber. I hope V gets him off...he doesn't deserve jail. I love their compatibility. It's adorable. I love bad boys that are sweet Mama's boys. They are the cutest! Well I hope all is better with your son and yourself! Don't overwork your self. I can't wait until the next chapter! Keep Up the awesome work on the best story for my FAVORITE character! ~MSMND
| Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 15:11 PDT
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they're all definitely protecting someone. glad that ur back hope everything is ok at home and with your son. i really needed a pick me up when i saw this chapter in my email. so thank u. really thank u for posting a new chapter today, ull never know how much it meant to me to stop my tears for just a moment. i hope you got the picture i sent to u of morio and kagome. until next time. great chapter i luv all of evans friends and of course evan himself. and really. thank u so much.
| Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 09:13 PDT
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I'm getting the feeling that soemone else crashed that car and Evan's covering. Knowing Evan, it's not that far-fetched an idea...
| Reviewed By: Migoto [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 08:48 PDT
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I'm still thoroughly confused as to what actually happened in the accident. Have you told us the details of what he's being charged with and I forgot or is that something we'll be learning soon? I mean, I feel like someone died in the other car, but I also think Evan would be a lot more cooperative if that were the case. Then again, I feel like he wasn't driving, and it was probably family that was.
| Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 07:22 PDT
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YAY! I was so excited when i got the email about a new chapter =3 I cant wait until V finds out Evan is a hanyou
| Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 06:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, at least we have one more piece to the puzzle. Whatever happened that Even's not sharing has something to do with who all left together. If I had to venture a guess, it would be that it's one of his family members and he wants to keep them out of the press. I'm guessing Morio or maybe Mikio...could be any number of people. Thank you so much for the update. You made my entire week. I hope everything and everyone in your life is doing better.
| Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 06:53 PDT
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okay nevermind scratch my last comment....wow, its just been one of those mornings you know? I'm JUST now reading Purity 3 and NOW I understand the whole youkai voice difference between purity 1 and 9. I've just never been a Ryo girl, Kich was always my fave so I sort of skipped that one... =^_^=
| Title: Val kicks butt!!
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 06:30 PDT
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Okay, so Subterfuge is Evan centered and Valerie (so far) is the heroine. She seriously kicks butt. I've been tired out of reading fics where the female is a helpless ole secretary gal who is saved by the male in the relationship. Financially, she is incapable and in danger. But Valerie is different. She doesnt need Evan in the classical sense of needing him for sustainability in life. With that aside, she can clearly want him without having to worry about "am i marrying/dating/having sex with Evan because I am using him" I think money is a problem that lots of couples dont think matters (which it really does). Valerie is also smart. Intelligent females are great to read and i cant thank you enough for writing her. What goes on in her brain is always interesting to think about. The chemistry is unmistakable between them and every chapter just amplifies it. Oh i know you dont do requests but have you ever thought about doing a another purity prequel with Sesshoumaru and Kagura? (I swear they are the couple that is least written about) Cuz i remember the one with Cain's parents.... >< random thought.... anyway, val in her element is amazing to read. (I love Bitches' answer about her legal name. I think my mother would have an aneurism if i ever changed my name to...bitches...) All in all, Zel's cast is hillarious and my fav? Oh and are you going to write a Gunnar/(insert name here) fic? He's STILL single and he needs to hurry up and get mated.... (laughing out loud... >
| Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2008 06:29 PDT
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so they're all covering. That's my take on this chapter, guess I will just have to wait and see if I'm correct. Also, I wanted to ask why in your earlier purities the youkai voice is either seldom heard or practically non-existent. Oh and I apologize for my previous asumption reguarding Cain, Bas, and Evan. I had to go back and reread your stories to better understand that. Bas might have the drive and the focus like Cain, but Evan in more like Cain than Bas is. I'm guessing you will reveal why Evan does not like the male members of his immediate family in this story. Thank you once again for your update and again I sincerely hope that you and your family are doing well! Ja!
| Title: Finaly all caught up! (Ch. 24)
Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 15:34 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I fell behind near the end of Purity 7, then didn't visit mediaminer for a long time. I came back and pounded out the rest of 7, all of 8, and up to this chapter in the space of 2 weeks. As before, I have nothing but the highest praise to offer you. Your work is truly amazing on a scale that I only wish I saw more often. I absolutely love it. You take all the time in the world that you need for your writing, and anything that's more important than them. I will eagerly but patiently wait for more of your magic.
| Title: There's a First time for everything.
Reviewed By: lemonera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 00:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, Sueric. I have been reading your fanfics for years now, am a big fan of the purity series, and Metamorphosis. You were my saving grace douring those long hours of Chemistry, and you were the reason I stalked the internet for a text importing program to my iPod so I could carry your stories everywhere I go. I kid you not, all of the Purity series is in there. Anyways, I feel I'm long overdue for this particular review, I don't know if you'll read it, and maybe it's not much, but it's kind of my way of thanking you for years of giggles, tears and lopsided smiles. You're an extremely talented writer, but you know that already. You have a way with characters, a way to enrich them that makes them universal, and I have seldom felt like that about characters, being that it is often pretty easy to fall into the lines of stereotypes and not be able to free them from the jaws of simplicity. I'm an avid reader, especially the good ye olde classics such as Shakespeare, Gogol and Tolstoy. Your fanfics are the ONLY ones, and I have read my fair share, mostly due to boredom, that I have re-read, and will probably re-read douring my lifetime, and I live in a third world country (Panama), there is really not much we can do around here. Don't be surprised if I actually print your stories and send them to get hardcovered so I can stock em up in my precious library, which is my most precious possession. I don't want to sound arrogant, and I know this will sound as if its permeated permanently with the stench of undeserved hubris, but I don't just re-read any book. I guess, what I want to say, is that, you're just too damn good. I wish I was able to put the stories and characters that live in my head on paper (or computer screen) so well. Consider this, a personal thanks, for years of delight. I love you, I love your stories, and I hate myself for sounding sappy, this is so not me. See what you do to me? You're amazing. Ah, Evan, I am another one of those who was anxiously waiting for his story, and it has exceeded my expectations so far, and If you keep it up, I just won't be able to handle so much goodness! I identify myself with Evan so much, and I've been aching for this story. I am the daughter of a relatively famous and talented mother, and well, living under her shadow, is very, very hard. How many times had I wished I could have my own Zel Roka side, and just not care. Ah, but the tight reins of society, you know how it is. Books are my Zel Roka, and no one does Zel Roka like you. (Unless you count Valerie). It is such a joy to come home from college and find a new chapter. I wish I can someday come to be like you, affect people the way you affect me, and from what I read, thousand others who either speak up, like me, or lurk in the darkness for years as I had until this point. One of your most avid fans, Lemonera P.S: Hope your Son gets well soon. Lucky kid, it must be so cool to have you as a friend, let alone a mom. P.P.S: I'm naming one of my sons Evan. And If I never have a son, a dog. And If I never have a dog, a Pet Rock. And if... oh well, you get the point.
| Reviewed By: Titiana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2008 14:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first time I've ever actually written a review for any of your stories. Probably because I just finished reading ALL of your stories and may I say they are all wonderful. I was going to bug you and beg for another chapter and ask you what happened to your "mad skillz" but then I read that your son broke is arm, so.... I won't. I hope your son feels better soon.
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