| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2008 05:58 PDT
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yet another wonderful chapter ^^ I hope your son gets well soon!! Evan + Fluff + Blonde Valerie = omg sweet!!
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2008 08:11 PDT
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i really like this chapter it was sweet. AND i enjoyed Valerie this chapter. its like when Evans happy i'm happy lol. he really reminds me so much of myself its scary. i had asked u a question b4 about Evans singing. How and who do u imagine him sounding like? i'd like to get the complete sensory vision of him
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Reviewed By: vayne [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2008 07:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's my first time to review Subterfuge and what I can say, I love Evan to bits... eventhough he can really stick his foot in his mouth at the worst of times. I was actually waiting for this story to come out eversince you announced all the upcoming Purity stories waaay back. Honestly, I thought Evan would be so much worse (considering the fact that he was always pictured so)... heehee... but he really is a darling. I hope your son gets well soon.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2008 05:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another beautiful chapter , i like how these two are slowly gravitating to each other even in there worst moments. :) I hope your sons arm heals up soon. :)
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 22:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh it so nice to come home and see a chapter up and ready for me... (6am to 2pm, with about 5 hours sleep, (CANT they ****** call up earlier when they know that some one is going to be away!!!!) and basicly no breaks... ) Sad to hear about your son... I'm SO glad I've never broken any thing... (My brother is the one who get hospitalised not me...) Hope it heals Quickly and straight!
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Title: itching for updates!!!
Reviewed By: missmary [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 20:34 PDT
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hi sueric i got myself an account only to be able to post a review (im not into writing myself...especially not in english hihi) cuz i just had to tell you what an awsome job ur doin as an author. I've been with u since purity 1 and i enjoy the series very much, especially evan's escapades in subterfuge.He explaining the german word groß as in really big in the last chapter had me laughing 5 minutes straight.Im hanging in front of my laptop day and night waiting for you to update and make my day :-) Greetz from Frankfurt, Germany missmary
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Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 19:56 PDT
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AWWWW! EVAN FOUND HIS MATE! I'm happy for him but upset because he was one of my faves and damn sexy... but they're cute together! Keep it up and I hope your son gets better!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 19:29 PDT
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Great chapter! Keep it up and update soon please! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Migoto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 19:11 PDT
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Before this chapter I don't know if I would have said I enjoyed the story so much as I was compelled by it. I needed to read to find out what would happen, but really I'm just not very good with angst. It stresses me out and I feel uncomfortable, so it's difficult for me to say I 'like' an angsty story. I must say though, this chapter was extremely satisfying. I've had a lot of stress in my life outside of the story I've been reading, and I definitely needed "quiet". I'd like to say thank you very much for this chapter. I realize there is probably plenty of angst yet to arrive, but I think I'll be able to say that, yes, I'm enjoying reading this story from now on. PS Thank you for accepting my apology. I think we've all been duly chastised, and there will be no more arguments on the review board.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 16:56 PDT
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I really liked how soft and tender Evan was being with Valerie in this chapter. It just proves that even bad boys can have their soft sides as well. I hope your son gets better soon, Sue! As we always say, family first, so don't hesitate to take all the time you need!
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Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 16:36 PDT
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I love the fact that Evan now has admitted to himself out loud that he sees Valerie as his mate. It makes things more permanent. At least thats how I perceive them. I just cant wait to see how Evan will coerce Valerie into thinking that she belongs with him and how she'll go about breaking up with Marvin. I also cant wait when Valerie sees the real Evan. Thats the part that Im most excited about! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Awesome job Sue and cant wait for the next chapter to come out!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 16:33 PDT
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I hope that your son's break wasn't too bad. Heh, one word that Val would never say, and that Evan would take as a compliment: Dork. And not because of the modern common use for the word. ^_^ Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 15:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol. Evan is forgetting something. While Gin might like Valerie and Valerie might like Gin...Gin also likes "that darling Mr. Pinkle!" Which is why my money is on Marv...sorry Zel :P But I like that he acknowledged V as his mate..even though his youkai didn't really say anything about it(yet). Hope your son's arm gets better! I'll be looking forward to the update when you can manage it, but no rush. :D ~Amber
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Title: Yay! Mate acknowledgment!
Reviewed By: xcori [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 13:57 PDT
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It's always a wonderful A HA! EUREKA! moment when the youkai recognizes "My Mate". so... I know I left another review earlier today. What happened to that one?
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 13:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:dreamy sigh: I love these two. I wish V would ditch Mr. Pinkle already and just give in to Evan. I guess it would be hard to do that, though. I mean, Evan has built himself one of the worst repuations, hasn't he? He's going to have to prove that he means business. I can't wait for the 'I'm youkai' conversation. I love the one with Nez and this one is sure to be even more entertaining. I hope he figures out that he's been with her before, too. And V figures it out, of course. There is so much left to discover, I'm very excited!
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