| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 20:42 PDT
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okay so I was reading the reviews just a moment ago and came across a review with the theory that Evan was covering for someone. Wow, I'm really sorry I didn't think of that. After all it makes sense doesn't it? I mean Evan is a trouble maker but he's also a great guy so why would he make light of a situation like that? But then again Evan IS a trouble maker so it is a great possibility that he DID do what he was committed of. Anywho, I'm interested to see where you take this. It's quickly becoming one of my favorites along with Vendetta, and the one with Gin and Cain, which I can't really remember at the moment! ciao! --'-@ sweetheart @-'--
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 20:22 PDT
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yay!! score one for Evan!!! actually sticking up for himself and showing he's not a common whore like Valerie truly believes!! =) in other words...I loved it!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 16:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that I say was the saddest chapter in this story... Evans a bit of a an idiot...
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Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 16:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. That was really harsh.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 16:09 PDT
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Oh man, that was intense wasn't it? I can't believe Marvin, he's just too sweet at making her feel guilty about things it's sickening! Wow, I don't blame Evan for being so cold to Valerie, but the coldness doesn't really suit him towards her; even if its understandable why he is being cold to her right now.
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 13:09 PDT
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In one way I can say that she got what she deserved, on the other, no. I wouldn't really be surprised if Evan found a new lawyer, and there goes her entire livlihood. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: bigdogboy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 11:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol so shameless groveling works and can i say holy shit that chapter was explosive like whoa that was rough and she finally got to evan even if he dosnt rember her from way back they both have a long history together great work keep it up
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Reviewed By: Migoto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 11:46 PDT
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I'm pretty conflicted. That was painful to read. I know Val needed a wake-up call on Marv's disregard for her wants/needs, but that was just out right cruel. It also seemed odd that she would submit to it with nothing to say. I've decided I'm not good with angst. I think he's being silly for being mad at her for "insulting" his mom because it was obvious that she was insulting someone she thought to be one of his bimbos because he did dress her in something extremely revealing and said he was on a date. I'm going to have to take a break for several chapters until this gets resolved so I can read the chapters all at once instead of suffering one day at a time.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 11:10 PDT
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Great chapter! update soon please and keep up the fantastic work! ^_^
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Title: Chapter 12: I love Gin and Evan moments...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 11:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He's such a mama's boy! It's so cute and such a pleasant reverse from what he generally puts out, personality-wise, to the masses (though, sometimes ya just gotta smile and shake your head at Gin's cluelessness--kinda cute how Evan's got her wrapped around his finger and vice versa). Marvin, to me, isn't a bad guy, per se...just short-sighted when matters of his research abound. I don't think he's purposely neglectful but impassioned. I dont' really see a love match in him and V, though...
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Reviewed By: AngelsRebellion [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 10:54 PDT
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Oh that was just brutal..
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 10:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, God. I don't know who to feel the most sorry for. I just can't imagine what would happen now. Will she still be his lawyer? Will he want her to be? I have no idea how anyone would handle that situation.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 10:08 PDT
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i dont know how everyone else feels about this chapter but i frickin loved it!. i think Evan put some sense into her head. LOVE LOVE LOE his ATTITUDE. now Valerie should take her ass to marvin, dump him and say pimp your own research and go home and reevaluate her life. i mean she really was about to suck Evan off just because she so carelessly threw out the promise of Anything for her fiance who im guessing definitely wouldn't have done the same for her. What if she had made that promise to someone else who wanted more and would have TAKEN it. Evan gets Kudos even if he went about it that way. sometime people have to learn things the hard way. ass for marvin would he take it in his upitty ass for his research? lol thats funny to me. i mean im not to happy with valerie right now but she said she had a headache and he still asked her to do something for him. feh wat a dick! KUDOS TO SUE FOR AN AMAZING CHAPTER!!!!!!! AND KUDOS TO THE CHARACTER OF EVAN he is still reigning supreme as my favorite character. then there's Morio and Ryomaru. ah my boys! ***Stares off dreamily into space***
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 08:31 PDT
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wow just wow. He really cares for her huh? And I don't know why she doesn't pay attention to some of the inconsiderate things Marvin does. No doesn't mean he's a bad guy, I just think that he cares more about his research then her. And thats how a lot of marriages fail, nothing should be more important then your family because you can lose your job but your family can ALWAYS be there for you if you let them. Am I on the right track as far as the Marvin thing? Great Chap
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 08:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dayum! What a nailbiter! I kept thinking "Is he really gonna make Val do that?" Jerk...but poor Gin didn't deserve what was said. I'm lovin' the storyline so far! Keep writing! ~Amber
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