| "Purity 9: Subterfuge" Reviews/Comments [ 2359 ] |
| Pages (158): [ « ‹ 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151 152 153 › » ] |
Reviewed By: Migoto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 07:14 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm glad a couple more people feel like being upset at Val for what she said is irrational because she was saying it about another one of Zel's floozies, not Evan's mom.
|
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2008 03:41 PDT
Comment/Review:
$1,250,000? 0_0 That's, like, two-thirds more than what Bubby got... (my maths teacher is in my head, dammit)... I wonder when he and Val are gonna make up? Ahhh, that sucked. He shoulda told her that Gin was his mama from the start instead of playing around. Baka... I wish SexxhoMaru had gone up as bachelor number four... I think my house would fetch enough to buy him if I combined it wuth my life's savings and my parent's retirement money... give me a bidding paddle!
|
Reviewed By: bigdogboy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 21:38 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay so who dun it who got into the trouble that evan was said to have gotten into maddy, bas, bone, dieter which on of these is he covering and ready to go to jail for. and oyyy val may be pissed but how could she say that about gin and can i just im laughing my ass off from gins charater evolution cuz no one would have mistaken her as a pornstar in purity justification. im just interested to see what will happen next oh please sueric dont make us wait to monday we lost a day this week please dont deprive us of your genius (insert shameless groveling here) any way if we dont here from youu have a good weekend
|
Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 20:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Evan, all mixed up inside. He should just rip Val a new one..
|
Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 18:00 PDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Update soon please and keep up the fantastic work! ^_^
|
Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 16:53 PDT
Comment/Review:
Aw, the ending was really funny, Gin selling her precious son away! I really hope Valerie apologizes soon though, I feel so bad for both of them; I'm glad that Evan declined Sesshoumaru's offer too!
|
Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 16:01 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHHOO!!! Evan beat Bas! I would've put myself into the biggest debt ever for a date with Evan! He's fantastic!! OOh.... Valerie's in for a surprise after the charity (heehee) fundraiser... She really should think before she speaks. Can't wait for the next chapter! You're doing a great job like always!! ~MSMND
|
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 15:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What V said before really hurt Evan.. How old is the woman that bought him??? Youki or not? Even's a little mothers boy at heart... it's very cute!
|
Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 15:13 PDT
Comment/Review:
.___. I hope Evan and V make up. Even though she said those things, how was she supposed to know that was his mother? and he never stopped her to say so. From her experience with him the case had always been that he had some slut with him or something, so I believe that its just as much evan's fault as it is Valerie's. He shouldn't be so made about it, when she apologizes he should accept it and point out that he should have told her instead of letting her go on and on. but really your probably going to let this angst draw out for a bit eh?
|
Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 14:51 PDT
Comment/Review:
in ur face is right. he just totaled like 50x some ppls salary. Eesh I'm jealous. i loved this chapter. i think it would be an interesting twist if evan told valerie that he wouldn't use her as his lawyer anymore. if the other lawyer got him off and valerie was left to ponder just how deep evan really is. that would be cool. like she said those things about his mom and he really was being serious. no matter how morally bankrupt he is, he still has a line and she crossed it and now theres no turning back. anyway im glad to hear that ur ok health wise. i thought maybe something had happened to u. but changes in living arrangements isnt so bad. i hope everything goes ok. how is the family coping? well ill be here when u update next :-D if im notin the hospital that is. ive been in and out all week. UR AMAZING luv OB
|
Reviewed By: Migoto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 14:31 PDT
Comment/Review:
Does he think Val knew Gin was his mom? I don't get how he could be mad about what she said if he knows that she didn't know who she was saying it about.
|
Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 14:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooo...V's gonna be maaaaaad...I wish she would say she was sorry already. I want them to make up. He should just tell her everything about himself. Then, maybe she would understand. He's so into her. And she is so jealous of every female that comes within a foot of him. :sigh: I hope it happens soon.
|
Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 20:07 PDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! Update soon please and keep up the fantastic work! ^_^
|
Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 19:57 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Way to stick your foot in your mouth Val sheesh.
|
Reviewed By: Migoto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 17:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
I feel bad for Val. That was super embarrassing. I'll never understand why the person never tells the other person that he/she is sticking his/her foot in his/her mouth. Val was going to find out it was his mom either way, so why not just say before she continues on a tirade that "hey, chill, she's my mom". I look forward to her apology, but I just don't see how Evan can be all that mad when she didn't even know she's his mom and his women normally don't matter anyway.
|
| Pages (158): [ « ‹ 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151 152 153 › » ] |
