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| "Metamorphosis" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Title: :D
Reviewed By: anonymous baka On: April 11, 2012 18:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Fluffy got to kill Taichimaru! | Title: Amber x Pearl
Reviewed By: anonymous baka On: April 10, 2012 12:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm pretty sure that Kohaku is Japanese for "amber", and since Shinji means "pearl", I think it might be relevant that both of them are named after gemstones formed organically (amber from fossilized tree sap, pearls from oysters when a grain of sand gets inside them). Also, I think I've heard about the Tsunokakushi before, in another fanfic on FanFiction.Net titled "A Twist in Time" by JediHanyou. In one of the later chapters, it's mentioned that this marital custom originated from youkai tradition, in which the "horns of jealousy" were often literal. (There was also something about mother-in-laws...) | Title: anonymous baka
Reviewed By: Ectotherms On: April 09, 2012 12:28 PDT
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I just realized something. Most of the worst malevolent youkai in Inuyasha seem to be based on ectothermic creatures ("cold-blooded" animals). Think about it: Naraku sort of based on a spider (I think, cuz Onigumo means "ogre spider"), Gatenmaru and Garamaru were moths, that youkai that tricked Nazuna into thinking he was a priest was a spider, and now Taichimaru here is a snake. And there were those other moths in the first movie. What's next, an evil BUTTERFLY?! LOL | Title: anonymous baka
Reviewed By: Shippou's tools On: April 09, 2012 11:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, Shippou-kun got some spotlight! XD (Yes, I called him "kun" on purpose.) I've always kind of figured that youkai like Shippou keep any items in their persona in what is usually referred to as "Hammerspace". As far as I know, this is a plot device that allows characters to carry large objects with them and not have to worry about the amount of cargo. Usually a magic bag or something is used to justify it. Sesshoumaru may also use something similar for his swords when he transforms. | Title: Nana
Reviewed By: everhearted On: April 08, 2012 18:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*applause* Well, it's about time Fluffy showed up! LOL, I'm just kidding. It was worth the wait. | Title: Nana
Reviewed By: everhearted On: April 07, 2012 18:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing! I can't even begin to tell you how awesome this is!!! You know, once I saw a fanart on deviantART of Inuyasha dressed in modern clothes like the outfit you gave him here. He even had a ponytail! XD The only real difference was that his hat wasn't covering his ears, and he had a tail. Lemme find it... Here it is! http://wazaga.deviantart.com/art/modern-Inuyasha-104004973 modern Inuyasha by *Wazaga And here's another one of him with a ponytail: Inuyasha- autumn by ~insanityblob Anyway, I loved how you made the whole Kagome-becomes-a-hanyou concept really make sense. I love this. Well, that's all I got for now. Bye! | Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2011 16:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally finished rereading the whole story. I still love it as much as I did the first time. You did such an excellent job with the characters. I do have one question about something I didn't catch the first time I read this story. What ever happened to the sword that Kagome got to seal her blood? They picked it up from Totosai and then it was never mentioned again. After the battle with Naraku you make mention of how Kagome was weaponless even though the sword could be counted despite the fact that she doesn't know how to use it. And during the fight with that cat that had the missing piece of the Shikon no Tama, the one that almost ate Inuyasha, you had her transform to full youkai. Shouldn't the sword have prevented that? Or did they forget the sword since she never uses it? I was just curious. Other than that I simply loved this fic. | Title: Wonderful! ^_^
Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2011 22:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story! I'm kind of sad to see it end! But I'm glad you finished it! You have my respect not many people finish the stories they write. ^_^ | Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2011 12:15 PST
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the December 2010 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: http://feudal.animara.org/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal-association.deviantart.com/blog/37672581/ Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal.animara.org/ Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal.animara.org/pickup_site.php First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal.animara.org/gallery.php Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association | Reviewed By: kawaii_tori [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2010 11:27 PST
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I really don't know what to say...your story made me laugh, cry, thinking about relationships all in one..your story is -to say the truth- the most amazing one I've ever come to read..I spent hours and hours on reading because I wanted to know what's going to happen next so badly..I kind of lost myself in it...and to be honest with you..I'm normally not the person to cry because of a movie or in that case a story..but yours just blew me away and I had no choice ;) soo..to come to an end..you really did a great job with writing this one..and I can assure you that it wasn't the last time I've read this story ;) so..I'll leave you some greetings from germany and I can't wait to read another story of you ;) C U :) | Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2010 05:57 PST
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal.animara.org/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal.animara.org/nominated.php?type=Fanfiction (Fiction) http://feudal.animara.org/nominated.php?type=Fanart (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that FA membership is closed during voting. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Feudal Association **Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works. | Title: yay
Reviewed By: xepher [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2010 20:15 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story it made laugh and cry this story was awsome but u asshole how could u i was going to ask for a damn sequel but u had to kill them by showing that i wont forgive for killing them but still u did good thanks for the good story *bows in respect* | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2010 07:35 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! While a little part of me is sad to see this universe come to a close, it has been an awesome ride. I know from personal experience what it's like to take over two years to finish a story, and how great the sense of completion can be when it's finally done. Perhaps the occasional, random one-shot glimpse back into their lives? One of these days, I swear I'll make Mating Season one-shots, LOL. So no hurry or else I'd be a hypocrite, but I'm really looking forward to whatever new project you decide to tackle next, although you definitely deserve a well-earned rest first! | Reviewed By: SakuraRyuu On: December 03, 2010 01:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was fabulous, Baka-honey. You know, as you edit each chapter you can always make a note in the description area that will let people know. Something snappy, like, "Revised on xx/xx/xxxx." | Title: Praise
Reviewed By: fanfic fan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2010 23:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just finished reading your epic, and felt I had to review. I loved this story, from start to end. The drama was fantastic and kept me on the edge of my seat, the romance was handled exceptionally well and realistically to the canon. You portrayed the characters amazingly, putting them in situations that Rumiko Takahashi never did, and making it seem like it's really how they would handle the situation. While there were a few grammatical or spelling issues here and there, there was never anything so bad that I couldn't easily read it. I've enjoyed this story from the time you started writing it two years ago, and I'm sad that it's over, but that doesn't mean I enjoyed it any less. I plan to reread this story, now that I can reread it in its entirety. Thank you for writing such an incredible story, and I hope that any future projects are as entertaining, if not more so (if that's possible). Sincerely, fanfic fan | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
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