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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2010 18:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful update! Of course we all knew it was the purity of heart that matters, but now that there's another married miko in the world, hopefully it'll only be a matter of time before everyone's view changes completely. It's really a double standard, if you think about it. I mean, if Miroku can retain his spiritual powers, then anything is possible, LOL.
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Reviewed By: inugomelover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2010 16:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!! they were able to get together!! soo sweet! great job as usual but one question- is there going to be another lemon in this story? the story (like many others) will still be great without another but i was just wondering. (=^__^=)
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Title: SakuraRyuu
Reviewed By: Sakura-shi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2010 13:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Most excellent, Baka-honey! Your offering pleases me greatly. *hug*
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Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2010 07:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That which doesn't kill us makes us stronger. They weren't ready before, but I think this time will be different. Sure there's risks with the quest and stuff, but everything in life has risks. That's what I love about your writing. When they lost their child, and you added such turmoil and uncertainty between them, it almost seemed like they weren't going to make it through. But they did, now they're even closer, stronger, and are more prepared for any new challenges. I can't wait to find out what will happen next.
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2010 23:54 PDT
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Huuuu... I really didn't like this chapter at all. Their logic isn't good enough for me, and it's just dumb on so many levels, including the fact that I feel like it's too soon in their relationship. I mean... it doesn't matter if they're wiser or stronger. Shit can still happen, and there ARE enemies stronger than them out there. Throw in the powers of the shards... It just doesn't make any sense whatsoever why they would make such a decision. If they're so sure of their strength, they should use it to wait until it's just logically safer. Making the entire "They were stronger than before, both as individuals and as a couple, and wiser as well." obsolete to me, cuz I'm shouting "OBVIOUSLY NOT!" at the screen. If I wanted something in my life that bad, I wouldn't put it in such obvious danger.
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Reviewed By: inugomelover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2010 21:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was beautiful!! simply beautiful!! plz update asap! i cant wait to see what happens next!! (=^__^=)
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Reviewed By: SakuraRyuu On: September 01, 2010 19:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done as always, Baka-honey. I like how everything is coming together.
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Reviewed By: crazykiss [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2010 19:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woww amazing as usual. beautiful.. i hope they dont end up regretting this decision, but of course this journey of theirs won't be all smooth sailing. Can't wait to see what happens
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2010 18:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful update...that was just...wow. I think they're both nuts, LOL, but I do understand the concept of wanting something with all your soul even though you know that logically you shouldn't do it. Destiny and logic do not always go hand in hand. In fact, it's quite often that they do not. But something tells me that they've made the right decision this time around...one cannot combat destiny, after all. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2010 23:45 PDT
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B'aww... No human lemon for me. Oh well, can't have it all. XD Kawazufukou was an interesting youkai. Seemed similar to the whole Kaou arc in the manga, except Inu didn't steal Kag's thunder in the end, HAH! Looking forward to the next update!
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Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2010 22:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I kept hearing Twilight Zone music when I read that chapter. Great update, keep it up.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2010 22:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fabulous update. I'm really glad that didn't turn into a long drawn out thing. Have a problem. Resolve that problem. Onto the next! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: inugomelover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2010 21:45 PDT
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cool! that was a nice little filler and they even got more jewel shards. and i never realized our bad memories were truly so important, that was really deep and somewhat sadening but one cant always be funny.great chapter and i egerly await the next!! (=^__^=)
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Reviewed By: inugomelover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2010 15:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh so yall wrote that? cool! that means i can stop ignoring the e-mail or delete it and read it! im sure itll be just as awesome if not more so then yalls stories!! loved this chapter and cant wait to see more of it!! (=^__^=)
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Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2010 12:52 PDT
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Meh, I think the drinking was OOC but I won't dwell on it. It's just that neither of them have ever shown any interest in alcohol in the slightest, and with their hanyou noses, you'd think it'd smell pretty gross to them. Anyway, mmmmmm... I'm so hoping for a human lemon... Not sure if I'll get it though, what with this ominous feeling Kagome's getting.
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