| "Feeding Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 188 ] |
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Reviewed By: LS On: April 06, 2003 00:37 EST
Comment/Review:
I love how she can feel his eyes on her...and I love when his cheeks burn a little at her compliment *^_^* hmmm. My favorite part is when she curls her fingers through the hair at the nape of his neck. I look forward to reading more...{I like how they are still trying to figure one another out/at the same time as they are so 'tuned-in' to one another...nice energy} |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 21:45 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even got the T-shirt! I can so relate to both Bulma and Vegeta at this point, Ember. Damned pride anyway!
Of all people to point out the obvious, I would have never thought to use Cheechers. ;-) At least you made her honest and believable.
This is a very good fic so far, Ember. The angst is tearing me up inside, though. NSBVEGETA has the right idea - it's time for a reconciliation lemon! ;-) |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 18:15 EST
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O_o I just don't know what to think about those two. Just when I think she's going to swallow a piece of her stubbornness and try to work things out, she finds a way to make money off of something he did. I just don't know if that's going to go over well with him. Ahh, therapy! Lock them both in a ki proof room together. Hahaha. cant' wait til next time. |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 17:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shit now he's leaving the situation sucks bigtime Bulma can be a baka sometimes and Vegeta too.But I cant wait for next chapY! Please Update soon Its killing me!
Later! and I want a reconciliation Lemon! Those always rule! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 13:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I for one don't want him to go...but I can't blame Bulma for her actions.
Another awesom chapter. I am in awe! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 25, 2003 08:07 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man what a way to end the evening. I can see both their povs, so I'm not even gonna take sides in this one. By the way that both are reacting it almost looks like they're breaking up. Can't wait to see the fallout as a result of Vegeta's actions. Great chap as always Ember. Top notch writing. So sorry that it took this long to finally read it. |
Reviewed By: Editor Rascal On: April 18, 2003 13:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice twist indeed! You continue to keep it interesting, intelligent and original. Not an easy thing to do with the subject of so many authors. I know ratings must be taken with a grain of salt. Many readers like a fic or want to encourage new writers and give out "10s"all over the place. I don't give "10s" easily; you earn every point. It's increasingly difficult to find good stories on either FF or Mediaminor these days and "Feeding Genius" is a sweet oasis. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Write On!
-ER |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: March 13, 2003 20:30 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate to say this...but Vegeta has some really valid points....
Wake up Bulma....
*cough, cough*
Great chapter Ember! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 19:44 EST
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Wow, that was tense! Unfortunately, both had valid points, and I hate to say that things'll probably get worse before better. *sigh* Great chapter. |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 15:56 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: W5W5 On: March 13, 2003 15:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vegeta should have mentioned how she whored herself out to that guy. |
Reviewed By: loulou On: March 13, 2003 13:00 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it. I hope to see more soon! |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 11:28 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you asked me, the little shit (not Vegeta mind you) deserved much more than he recieved. But, then that would probably make the story a little less interesting. Your doing a great job so far, so keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 24, 2003 07:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh shit, I think Veggie's in big trouble. I can't say that I blame him for doing what he did, but he should've given Bulma a chance to speak her mind. Btw, I love the way you're writing this, from Bulma's pov ^_^. As always, you rock!! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA On: April 03, 2003 08:33 EST
Comment/Review:
What is she going to do with the files Im dying here!!!!! Dont let him go BULMA!!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
The muse thing ok I'll help u!
LATER! |
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