| "Feeding Genius" Reviews/Comments [ 188 ] |
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2003 21:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
I wanna hear what BUlma thinks what shes going through soooooo pleaseee update soooooon oKKKKKK!!!!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2003 14:11 EDT
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Well, this certainly is interesting. I had to laugh about the Dende thing! Heh heh. I could just see that. So they're going into space, huh? Can't wait to see what happens next. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2003 12:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I couldn't agree more! She really is insane!!! She's going to have to deal with one VERY angry Saiyan once Vegeta catches up with her.
Brilliant plot twist! |
Reviewed By: Evil_Blue_Crayon@yahoo.com On: April 18, 2003 21:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had the funniest feeling, (judging by Bulma's and Trunks conversation), I had the funniest feeling that Bulma would either sneak onto the space ship when Vegeta took off, or that she would steal it herself. I was right too! Can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2003 20:19 EDT
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TOTALLL TWISTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!! ILOVEDDDDDDD ITTTTTTT!!!! UPDATE SOOONNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!
Now what Vegeta is going to do FOLLOWW HERRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!
PLEASEEE IM DYINGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!
Later! |
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2003 15:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An imaginative, brainstormer of a fic. In other words, a great fic. Its not easy finding quality fics such as Feeding Genius as someone commented, Excellent job! Bura400
PS- I wonder why Bulma left for outer space?! Hopefully that will be answered in the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: TrunksChick19 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 17:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue writing this fic!!! I would love to see how it comes together in the end and it would be awesome to see it through Vegeta's POV!!!!! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: April 13, 2003 09:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that was a roller coaster! Vegeta is pissed...and Bulma certainly deserves it.
I can't wait to see what happens...and I would LOVE to read it from Vegeta's POV! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 23:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hey ! im loving this fic! Sometimes I tell u Vegeta , my baby can be such an ass!!!!!!!!
but oh well Lord knows I love him!!
I think that we have seen bulma's point of view why not see Vegeta's i think that would be a great place to continue.
UPDATE SOONNNN! LATER! |
Reviewed By: Evil_Blue_Crayon@yahoo.com On: April 12, 2003 14:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazing chapter. I think it would be interesting to hear what Vegeta is thinking, for "Book Two". I think your doing a wonderful job.
It's sad to see her pour out her heart to him, then have him not beleive her. I hope both get together soon... |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 10:23 EDT
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Oh man! I had a feeling that would come to bite her in the ass. I'm sad to see it happen like that though. As far as pov goes, I think it would be interesting to see what's going on in Vegeta's head, but it's your story. Do it however you feel would work best. Not much help, I know. I'm permanently cursed with indecision.
Can't wait til next time! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 20:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, Ember...
You are a genius. If I didn't love you so much I'd hate you. |
Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 11:04 EDT
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Aww geezh!! hurry up and write the next chapter! (grumbles)sure, you get sucked in to a great story and then find out it's not finished. Argh! I hate waiting. |
Reviewed By: LS On: April 06, 2003 22:23 EDT
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I like how you write "...after the laughter swam from the air,..." it sets up nicely for the uncomfortable silence [under the stare] following...{I feel totally drawn into the moment by expressions like this. ^_^} The part I like the most is Vegeta's line about "...no amount of dinner parties..." and the lines just before it that convey he does care about her interests. {I like when he is 'tracking' *whew* they had better run! ha!}Another engaging chapter...thanks for all your work!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: LS On: April 06, 2003 19:37 EDT
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My favorite part is when she feels a flutter in her heart as he battles his curiosity/pride...and she remembers feeling this way whenever he gets that expression on his face. I like that she realizes she may have pushed too far. It's fascinating that he is still emotionally vulnerable {concerning this issue}...he is actually a teensy bit worried here. You do a great job conveying how complicated/ and yet straightforward Vegeta is. I like when Bulma feels her stomach clench at the hurt in his voice. Thanks for another great chapter!! |
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